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It's finally here! All the submissions to this month's poetry contest is included within this soapbox, for your convenience. For the sake of the judges, I am allowing two weeks from today for them to peruse the works herein and then create a pick with their top five choices. The judges may confer amongst themselves if they wish. Input from the Fanpop community should also be considered. Comments on particular poems are welcome. The only thing that is prohibited is pointing out (subtly or obviously) which poem is yours. As a poet, that may disqualify you from the competition, for betraying the anonymity clause.
Judges, please post a pick by Thursday, January 29th, or alert me if you need more time (you are more than allowed to take as much time as you need, so long as you let me know). THE POEMS "The Secret Life Of Children" by Contestant Number 1 The kids are hunched over fires Laughter licking it’s way along the ground And up the crumbling walls Faded marks of war smeared beneath eyes Rosy cheeks, dry, cracked lips Dirt sits comfortably beneath bitten fingernails Bony arms and legs jutting out In primitive, animal, angles The kids see everything Crouched behind the bushes With their shining eyes and willing ears Adult secrets no longer whispered behind closed doors But declared as undeniable, unremarkable truths Gathering in worn, forgotten lots Creating cities made of talk, and touch, and joy Seeing all but seen by few The kids disperse Mother’s calls crawl along the breeze Urging weary soldiers home Wordless goodbyes, a wave, and a nod Feet thumping along paths and pavement Carrying them from battle, from play, from companions Cleaned and dressed, sent to bed Left to dream of glorious tomorrows --- Lord of the Dance? by Contestant Number 2 His costume glitters with sequins and jewels His dancing shoes glisten and shine The music begins as his dancers dance in, Feet tapping in rhythmic line He waits for his cue in the shadows and smiles He’s hearing the roar of the crowd The sound of cheers is sweet in his ears They call to him, clear and loud (But what is he left with, When the applause dies away and the cheering ceases? What is he left with?) The spotlight dazzles his eyes as he enters The audience screams out his name And then with a leap and a blurring of feet He dances as wild as a flame He’s the star of his show, this spectacle grand The stage is his world without end A vast expanse on which to dance Where Magic and Realism blend (But what is he left with, When the dance is no more and the stage is bare? What is he left with?) The grand finale now draws to a close A standing ovation at last! They shout for more, “Encore! Encore!” So he grants to them one final dance Then he flashes a smile and blows them a kiss He lifts his arms high, he bows Drunk on fame and the praise of his name He basks in what fortune allows (But what is he left with, When the thrill passes and the glory fades? What is he left with?) He flirts with the ladies, poses for cameras And waves at the crowd of his fans Autographs here and contracts there And for the next program, he plans But the spark in his eyes is empty and false And his soul remains unsatisfied He can't fill his desire or kindle true fire Despite every wonder he’s tried. (For what is he left with, When everyone leaves and loneliness surrounds him? What is he left with?) He has chosen fans over true friendship. Fleeting thrills over everlasting joy. Greedy ambition over genuine fire. Stardom over servanthood. Arrogance over humility. Lust over love. He refuses to admit it...but in his heart of hearts, he knows. There is an aching emptiness which he cannot fill. For he would rather be the lord of the dance Than to serve the Lord of the Dance. --- lost by Contestant Number 3 for years i have wondered where do i fit in. anilate myself will not keep a friend. push myself day to day i wonder when it will end. this thing called life.a quest i am on. though i dont know how to start.i become unattached to the word that is my heart for fear i will lose it .i want be able to pull it back. the hurt of its lost beat more severe than a heartattack.days months and years roll by.i sit alone but never cry.for that is weak and i am not.i yell but no one responds is it to late for me.no its not for i have begun i have opened my eyes.i can feel the tears dwelling in them.i have come to far i will go on.fluttering like a humming bird.my heart rages on. i have found love. --- Our World by Contestant Number 4 You turn on the TV and what do you see? Another bomb in Iraq, another hurricane in the Caribbean Sea. Children are dying, houses are flooded. People just stare, all of them cold-blooded. Another fire in California, another tsunami swept the coast of Bali. Another attack in India, another dead child in Mali. While you stare at the screen and eat your food, Isn’t your feast a little bit rude? Breaking news announce the civil war in Sudan. Tell me, Presidents, Ministers, what is your plan? “Free Tibet” banners are burned on the beach. Tell me, what happened to the freedom of speech? Radars will be put in Poland and the Czech Republic, Dear officials, do you care to know the opinion of the public? Cuban news try to hide distress Whatever happened to the freedom of press? The world is dying, poverty on every street, Yet you walk around with Gucci on your feet. People have no food or water, Every second a mother loses a daughter. As the deadly clock ticks by People around the world die. How can you sleep knowing your aid Could’ve saved another person from Death’s blade…? --- Vanilla Wings by Contestant Number 5 I stood and watched the feathers, As they'd fall tender to my ears Falling like an Angel Who had nothing left to fear Drowning in the silence of The roaring of the tide And none of them could surface Their wings had all been tied I had a word with God today Of Angels and their kin Of feathers and weathered dreams Of children and their sins How frequently I listened to The Angels when they cried As they'd fallen from their clouds And had no wings to fly I had a word with God today But he didn't know my name When I asked him why he said, "Everybody looks the same" I couldn't help but notice Him standing in the sand And when I reached out for him He wouldnt take my hand I went to see my God today To have a word again To have him soothe my fears away But he wouldn't let me in He was buried in the feathers Of all the Angels that were fell So I told him I was leaving, And that I wish him well Then I took a wingless dive into The brand new world below To join all the Angels that had fallen long ago But when I saw you standing With my halo in your hand My gaze had all been stolen As I fast approached the land Your beauty like an Angel Who had never seen the sky A beauty without compare To these Angelic eyes I watched you stand there waiting With my wings laid at your feet I could only pray to God above That you were there for me I fell into your arms that day With nothing left to fear I melted into your embrace As you wiped at all my tears You led me to a different heaven One I couldn't find above. You took me deep into your world, then wrapped me in your love. I had a word with God today About all the things he's done Of all that he's created You're my favorite one. He told me he was glad to Finally see me smile He told me was glad that You made everything worthwhile. --- Cycles by Contestant Number 6 As one star dies Another is born As one civilization crumbles Another is born As one life ends Another begins So goes the endless cycle Of life,death and rebirth --- Deliberately Delirious by Contestant Number 7 Deliberate applause for each moment left for a pause, i purposefully do not applaud. They raise their fists; clenched at each wrist, pointing at my deliberate ploy to topple their cloud like a toy. I hear the screams in the background, oh Gaza, with its deliberate beat thumping in my mind like all of our bad dreams; images of hope wrestle with deliberately distorted beliefs encased in dope. I open my eyes to see what i am shown, and then deliberately close them to my own wise thoughts, free from these thieves. The date is written, the time is clocked, history is made today at four o'clock, as i deliberately run, not walk, through those doors made of rock. Discrimination is not a fabrication to be deliberately littered with empty fruitless words that only aspire to fruition. And so i too clench my fists, stamp my feet, and dance to the tune of rebellion, happily whistling as their cloud topples down in a cloud of dust. --- Home by Contestant Number 8 The Honking of Horns The Constant Movement The Diversity of Neighbors The Tourist Traps The Tourist, Strangers Lady Liberty at Her Post Ground Zero, A Place for Mourning. Central Park, For Care-Free Souls. All these places Are my Home. --- Best Friends turned Strangers by Contestant Number 9 She was a girl with a lifetime of experiences He was a boy who had been through a tough time too They grew up together Best friends forever That was the promise they made A promise that would soon fade As tragedy struck the younger of the two The little boy’s mom got sick and went away They lost touch with each other She found the words too hard to say Years later they met again Mere glances across a crowded room She was too afraid to speak He was too shocked to move They stole glances at each other all night Both too afraid to speak But never losing sight Of the one they thought they would never again meet When the night was over And both had gone there separate ways In the end both too afraid To speak the truth And end their silly charade They thought of each other Both with a tear in their eyes Wondering if things could have been different Had they both not decided to hide --- My private intervention by Contestant Number 10 The other girls are going to the mall, I have no energy to. I act differently, but this drug has a weird affect. When I look in the mirror, I don't look back. It's someone else, not me. I tell everyone I'll stop soon, I know I won't. It's a habit, That's all, but It's more, and I'll suffer. When finally I've realized what has happend to me, it"ll be too late. I always thought this addiction was temporary, turns out I was wrong, I should've never looked into your eyes, but now your my drug, and I need help. --- The Mask by Contestant Number 11 Some hearts are strong, made of steel, On the right path forever. Some are weak and eas’ly turned, Like the down or heather. The problem is, what you see, Isn’t always what’s inside. Strong behind a mask of weak, Isn’t hard to find. It is the weak masked, As strong, that causes fear. The person inside, May not be in the mir’r. So, join me now my fairy friends, If friends you be, And let us all remove our masks, Of fear and uncertainty. For where I’m taking you, There are no masks. You are seen for what, You truly are. In this realm, evil, Ugliness binds, and The pure of heart from, Inside to outside shine. How do you know, This is true? Well, I’m afraid, It’s up to you. Choose to believe me, if you will. If not, I will be here still. Waiting for the next, To extend their hand, And join me in this, Magical land. --- Untitled by Contestant Number 12 Alone in the world Memories are the only comfort But the memories seem so far away Almost out of slight --- Untitled by Contestant Number 13 Have you ever lived my life? Spent one minute in my shoes? If you haven't then tell me why You judge me as you do. Have you ever woken up in the morning Wondering if this was your last day? Have you ever left your house Unsure if you'd return? Have you ever seen your friend get shot Outside his favorite store? Have you ever seen a fried die From drugs he'd never used before? Have you ever seen your best friendsmom get beat up by her stepdad messed up on booze? Have you ever sat beneath the stars Hoping God Will hear? Have you ever seen your friend drive away After way too many beers? Have you ever had a friend Experiment with weed? Have you ever covered up guilt By doing a good deed? Have you ever considered suicide As the only way? Have you ever tried to hid yourself Behind the things you say? Have you ever wanted to protect Your friends and Everyone in sight? Have you ever felt such pain That you cried yourself to sleep at night? Have you ever lived my life, Spent one minute in my shoes? If you haven't, then tell me why You judge me as you do. --- Barely Noticed by Contestant Number 14 Life is an iPod The different melodies, the ups and the downs Changes in tempo Every song and every experience differs a little from the next. Start with the tinkling bells, Meaningless lyrics; Soothing sounds of early childhood. Everything is simple; Repetition A song for young ears One song flows into the next Changing subtly, barely noticed. The words begin to gather more depth; The beat becomes a little faster, A little louder As time passes the music picks up strength, The tempo increases The melody weaves patterns In and out of the rhythm The cycle repeats. Until finally the volume lowers Ears re-adjust The music becomes less irregular, settles into a pattern. Life moves on One song running its full length before another begins No skipping around The music becomes softer Softer It fades into the background It slows Almost to stop as work As life Carries on; The lyrics tattooed inside the brain Thinking is no longer required The music slips to the back of the mind. Forgotten, For now Retirement doesn’t block out the music, It brings it forward. Nothing else on the mind, Music pushes its way back in; Taking on a different shape In songs heard a thousand times, Suddenly there comes new meaning. The music gets louder, Complicated Beautiful Music pounds until the red light flashes, The iPod’s battery wears down. The volume gets softer; Preserving energy Until finally The energy is gone The music has run its course. --- Apart by Contestant Number 15 She said, “If I didn’t know your name, “I’d call you home.” When he touches her hand, it is not butterflies that make her ashamed of her chipped nail polish, and she has no inclination of heaven or angels… Between the secret glances… In the negative space before they touch… In the hidden limbo between Midnight and Morning… It simply Is. But then, Sunday screams quick as lightening She's shattered in shambles (feed the fire) His hunt is hindered, haplessly haunted (point of no return) by lullabies of a cartoon masquerade “I love you” And as I do I love to lie to you A man can learn that a woman is a dungeon in which he’d be glad to drown. And a woman can learn that a man is a hero who will always let her down. “Don’t be afraid, Daddy’s coming home,” As soon as the alcohol rots my bones. Her grass can’t be greener if I scorch it black And then, it won’t grow back again. This is the lament of the ugly duckling Who never became a swan This is the revenge of the ugly duckling Who always played the pawn … But in the negatives of Polaroids, you’ll still remain the same… --- Expressions by Contestant Number 16 This is the happiest I've ever been To be here today in joy and light To shine in glory though not all mine I've never been so happy in my life I aknowledge those who brought me here You, you and not forgetting the best, You. I love that you love me enough to be here To give me this so I can smile again I'll never forget the way it is Or was or could ever be I will always remember this bouquet My favourite flowers in all of springs glory I'm poor and doomed, dried and dead But always, I know you'll be my listening ear The shoulder to lean, the hand to help Now I'm sure, This is the happiest I've ever been --- Untitled by Contestant Number 17 My heart hurts but it has no reason tears, distraction, screams, reaction How selfish of me to think I'm alone --- Lingering, whispering by Contestant Number 18 Inevitable my eyes glisten, as hatred rests in my gaze. I’m staring at shadows, whispering your name, while burning tears scar my face. Even with only anger left, I doubt, for I hate you, because of what you are… so much more than I. But I stay silent, watching you, and you alone, from far. You’re chained to my heart, but even so, these bitter words on my tongue make me deny. And they make me wonder, make me wonder why. Vengeance makes me strong, keeps me alive Yet this “love” breaks my soul, so I close my eyes. But I’ll have to open them once again, and the trail will linger, even if the tears will dry. --- Love and Light by Contestant Number 19 Darkness it stands resolutely at the edge of our minds constantly it stays, causing doubt and hatred we must fight the darkness fight with our souls you are not alone in the battle light must prevail believe with your whole heart in the goodness of men for that is the only way to fight the battle We must brighten the world but what to do it with? what do we, mere mortal men have to battle darkness? We have the greatest thing no shadow could overcome, Light must battle dark. the greatest weapon we have, is love So fight the battle fight for the right side wield the right sword Fight for love and light --- Don't Plagiarized by Contestant Number 20 If you want to create a poem You must learn more words about English. Don't make similar like famous Shakesphere, If you do it, That is a act of Plagiarizing like stealing an ideas and stealing a plots and stealing an articles like you reads and That has been plagiarized. If there's a person who copy that, The original who make it will gonna put you down! So do it your Own. like you do a write term for college. If you have a great idea that you didn't plagiarized Don't share your untrusted friends and someones So you keep your idea for the future. So Please Don't Plagiarized! Don't take the ideas from someone else, Don't take the writings from other else, But Don't Plagiarized! --- Why? by Contestant Number 21 Why didn't you come when I called you? Why didn't you hold my hand every night? Why didn't you Kiss me in the moonlight? Why did't you invite me over sometimes? Why? Why didn't you? Why? I used to love you becase you use to care about me! Why didn't you care about me anymore? Why? Just Why? --- Tomorrow by Contestant Number 22 Yesterday I was happy, Today not so. Yesterday Iwas in Heaven Today the devil has me in a chokehold. Yesterday I went to the doctor, Today I got the results, Today I found out it was terminal. Yesterday I was happy. --- Untitled by Contestant Number 23 Love wondered inside stronger than you stronger than I but now that it has begun we can not turn back we can only turn into one, and I'll always remember the part of you so tender and I won't hesitate at all whenever you call and I won't ever be to far to give a call, so don't hesitate at all just call --- Love by Contestant Number 24 I'm tired of being your booty call; the one you call when no one cares I'm tired of feeling the way I feel, so I'm going to take my self out of the game. and watch from the sidelines Cause whats the point in playing the game if your gonna loose....... like i do. I'll always be here to cheer you on; I'll even shed tear just because your gone. Inside I'm hurting; and I know you are too... I'm sorry it had to end this way; but maybe in another life we could play the same game, and win everytime... but for now all I'm going to say is bye, I'll see you next time. --- Carving Angels by Contestant Number 25 Above me, with my head on the grass, I thought I saw eyes peer down at me, Golden by nature and clear as glass. Tragic as the battle of the Bismarck sea Did we meet, With her hand in mine and a smile open wide. Inside me, where my heart lay still, I felt her image rest within me, Warm with ease and dressed to kill. Engraved in my mind were her words She spoke quietly, Promising to bring me to that unknown place. Beneath me, where the ground sunk away, The grass had yet to touch her feet, Agile and pale like a liquid diamond display. Forgotten were the days I dreamed of seeing Slowly fade to black, As she blinded me with her sun And buried me in her clouds. --- My Angel by Contestant Number 26 The beauty of an angel sweet Did fall from heaven above And toward some beautiful pearly feet Came gliding like a dove But oh this girl on top of which The angel did descend Did indeed have quite the itch Upon a river to wend And so she went and bought a boat To take her on her way She stepped aboard and was afloat, then glided from the bay. A fellow traveler did she meet A’stranded in a pond And with her beauty oh so sweet, She saved him with her wand Upon her joyous face a smile Of never ending cheer Evoked from old and hidden files Bright eyes devoid of fear And so was every day aboard The angel’s elusive ship A bigger, grander, more magical reward Than on any other trip He prayed that He could ride with her for many moments more, and find a way to dine with her and talk of love and lore Because upon one fateful night She made this poor boy soar And now I live just for the sight Of you outside my door. --- The Unfinished Story (Based on a true story) by Contestant Number 27 He found himself lost, not taking credits for his acts, he had denied the truth, the evidence, the facts. Everyone had seen it and so did he, but out of all the things, this wasn't where he wanted to be. He didn't wanna talk, didn't want to confess, but this only had made him more of a mess. All those sleepless nights, tossing and turning, It took him a while, before he was learning. This was something he couldn't avoid, something he truly couldn't surpass, he had never realized, he was falling so fast. Love is where he would plunge, deeper and deeper every day, but realizing who he was loving, only put him to dismay. Somehow this had changed him, more than you would think, he was headed for a breakdown, right at the brink. She was already in love, someone else had her heart, except this wasn't the only thing that seemed to tear him apart. They were best friends, and that's how they would remain, that's how it would always be, and all the pain would he sustain. What had made things more worse than needed, was something that made his surrender, that raised his white flag, that left him defeated. She left her place where they had met, leaving him in solitary, forcing him to move on, give up, onward with his life would he carry. He could not let this go, not her, not now, so he spends his nights, thinking, what do I do, and how? Then one night, light was shined on the circumstances, it all came in a whisper, it showed him his chances. He's making it now, his wounds are mending, but there's something in my gut, something bad it is sending. He's moving on, fairly well, but all within the process, he's losing himself and every day, there is always a little less. I'm hoping she'll come back soon, cause this story isn't done, for the good guys still have not yet won. --- I am what I am by Contestant Number 28 I am a lonely girl, sitting on the side walk Pushing you away when it’s time to talk I am the teacher’s student, staring into space Not sure that being here is worth the waist I am the walls surrounding you, grace and all Hoping I wouldn’t fall while you were gone I am the sky above you, and in my haste Forgot what I truly was, turn dark again Forget that I am a true color, honest blue Or at least what those below me said I am the words you say, dark and true Knowing eventually I’ll get it too I am a path in the night, dead ahead Trying hard to forget the hurtful words you said I am the fading letters on your keyboard Knowing, eventually, I’ll get back up again I am the days of your life, both long and short For reasons only you and I know I am the silence heard between your words So sure that the tables will never turn I am the lump inside your throat You feel when you want to say ‘no’ To all the sins you were a victim of And know you are so dumb to think That when the thought of it disappeared So would the memory I am the word hanging in the air That ‘Goodbye’ we’re both so reluctant to share We cannot leave until it’s said I am this fear, so hurt and raw Knowing this blow would make you fall Hoping against hope that it wouldn’t And, under your intense scrutiny I am all I could possibly ever be. --- LOVE by Contestant Number 29 Lookng for a piece of me Over the distant seas Vast landscapes around me East to west,north to south is where I'm going to find you --- My Grandmother. by Contestant Number 30 The greatest realisation hit, when her lover had departed. The truth could now be hid no more, Confusion, anger and fear. Confusion lead to pain and weakness, Anger spurted tears, The fear of which we all did live with, slowly, resolutley, sent daggers to our hearts. The choice was left for us to make, the biggest... it hurt. Although at first, unendurable, Time made us lost for words. No need to be confused it seemed, The pain had settled down, But best of all, the anger, reduced, deducted, gone? And again, all seemed well. Ourselves forgot, mistake involved, that age cannot be thwarted. A simple, true and honest fact, That makes a mark on all. No warning, preperation, We were prehaps asleep. But newly resurected came, Consusion, anger, fear. I went one day to visit, She was no longer there. I call it luck, She was alive, A struggle to survive. Months were spent, In the confides of a hospital bed, A weakness overheld us, Waiting.. the time we waited. Was it luck again? That enabled her to leave. Or deservation, determination? We were pesamistic, We thought her gone, Forever, we regarded, That those three words would haunt us. Confusion, anger, fear. Impossible, irrecovable. We never though she'd walk again. We didn't think she'd eat. How did the strength find it's way? where, did it live? I think I know an answer, She had it all along. The strongest woman I will know, A remarkable thing, I could never have immagined. We were blessed, why? I do not know. I know it's not forever, And so I always keep in mind, whilst enjoying her strength and her kind. That age cannot be thwarted, And we all in turn will die. --- Confessions of a Rock by Contestant Number 31 I sit here, unmoving, in this lovely dull park. The passersby react to me as they might the homeless: they may glance at me when they think I am not looking... but I am forever looking. It is not impolite for me to stare. I see imperfections, acts that they wish to hide: The garbage tossed casually into the water, the exchange of money and white powder between strangers, and one night, even the loss of innocence... and life. Her screams will haunt me forever. But of all the ugliness that takes place here, beauty surrounds it and, while the seasons change, I remain the same. And at the end of the day I am content to be just a statue on a pedestal in a park. --- My True Family by Contestant Number 32 I love my friends like they are my family. The guys annoying like bros, But they dis whatever guy hurt my feelings. The girls are truly supportive, Like the the sisters I wish I had. They are my true family all in all. We get in trouble together, Talk about things with each other That we wouldn't say to anyone else. We are together whenever we are able, Supporting each other when needed. They are my true family all in all. We try our best not to hurt each other. We love each other just the way we are. We usually enjoy each other's company. We make each other laugh, smile and happy. We try to cheer each other up when one is sad. They are my true family all in all. This is my true family: Andrew, Lily, Heather, Aaron, Lexus, Joey, Nicole, Alannah, Tony, Ihab, Keifer, Greg, Rhea and last but certainly not least Austin. These are my friends and my true family. --- The Woods by Contestant Number 33 Twilight approaching Walking, falling, indefinitely toward an unreachable perfection Light coming and going, there is no hope Pushed in the Dark Woods, stumbling, grabbing straws Heartedly falling, no where to go, no one to see, laying there Hopeless, timeless, immutable, staying down. Suddenly, leering, Silver Smiles, glowing, creating their own light, I fall "Follow," hopeless, timeless I rise to a new horizon, a new dimension, a better reality In standing here, I sink deeper into Reality there, I follow. I follow my teachers, darker and darker into the woods, deeper and deeper I trust. The trees climb the sky, killing the moon, higher, higher until my guides are invisible Unable to see the light from those smiles, I trip, stumble and grabbing pine needles, I fall Hopeless, timeless I lay in my new grave; No self, no point, nothing felt Swaying like a reed by a river's bank, an angelic like beauty boasting three heads Emitting yet a brighter light than my previous guides "Lead me," says my new found hope, "Lead me" Walking we descend deeper into this forest My left foot passing my right foot, quicker, still quicker, my beauty and I run Chasing nothing, no one chasing. Deeper, colder, blacker the darkness of this forest drowns my follower She my light and now no more; no hope, hopeless I sit, thinking nothing, not thinking. Around me the owl, the wolf, the mountain lion, hunting in these darkened, ancient woods Searching for survival they are, I cannot resist the instinct to stay, hopelessly. Thicker, ubiquitous now, the dark has swallowed me Hopeless, timeless, immutable; I sit No self, no point, nothing felt; sitting Chasing nothing, no one chasing; staying Thinking nothing, not thinking; sinking Then, driven by Gravity I am pushed down through the forest floor, through a canal Light peering: changing, ticking, singing; Light Burning my eyes, a familiar, distant Reality, the woods buried therein. Dawn has broke --- Oh Herald! by Contestant Number 34 Oh Herald! speak so that I may speak again For in silence my heart yearns for him. The emptiness blinds my vision with tears, And I fear my weakness he still hears. Oh Messenger of my soul please make haste. I have no more sorrow for hatred to waste. His words are the motive for his murderous deeds, And with his witty retorts, my love painfully bleeds. Oh, divine Savior please give me relief. Please severe my incredibly hopeless belief. Or if thoust cannot end the feelings inside, Take out my heart, and my soul may you hide. For to love a mortal the way mortals do Is surely the worst torture that Heaven can do. Oh, come now and offer me a remedy! To ease my worries and set my love free. In silence his voice resounds through space, And in stillness I can see only his face. So Lord of Justice, take these feelings away, And no longer in love with shall I stay. --- Freckles and Teardrops by Contestant Number 35 see your tearstains on your face Your mind...it seems out of place Heard your plan to hurt yourself So I picked up this paper from the bookshelf I started to write I wrote in despite of the darkness lurking inside me Suicide isn't a solution Don't consider it an option I'm your friend, you'll find that you don't have to feel confined It doesn't have to end this way Please don't go away... I've been there just know...that I care... --- My ode to pie. by Contestant Number 36 Pie, so sweet and savoury on my tongue, you can make good of any day gone wrong. Whether it's cherry or peach, You could even make Blagoyevich feel unimpeached. Once my fork cuts into your crispy skin, I know my happiness is about to begin. --- I am the Driver by Contestant Number 37 ‘Does that make it zero-risk? No. Is life without risk interesting? No.’ Wing Commander Andrew Green A thousand miles per hour- land speed record. The wind rushes through my hair as I find I can’t afford to stop this whirlwind of a life. They’ll be fast cars and superstars. The fee of admission you ask. A supersonic engine. Bloodhound by name, bloodhound by nature. I follow the scent of a human frame. I’m on an Apollo mission. But then I take off only to find that, untrue to myself, I have become blind to reality. And I love it? Right now I’m in first place- here I plan to stay. No competition. Bluebird, Thunderbold, Railton, out of my way. But make no mistake, once I reach terminal velocity I know, I will start to slow. So I’m gonna polish my own titanium. For now. Editor's Note: This user would like to acknowledge that the quote at the beginning is from: http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/sci/tech/7685049.stm --- Sisters Forever by Contestant Number 38 I could never live without my sister That I can’t deny You bring joy to my life when you’re by my side When you’re gone it feels like my world has been destroyed Together we fill our lives with laugher Our memories will last forever and ever No matter if we argue Or get in stupid fights We love each other from the heart Best friends for life Just always remember I’ll love you forever Because we’re Sisters forever Poet's Note: This poem is dedicated to my sis Laura. --- Untitled by Contestant Number 39 One day Centuries from now They will find our bodies Long since dead, Long since forgotten Buried together Under the same blue sky, Under the same green grass And when they find our bodies They won't know what colour our skin was our bones are grey They won't know if we were beautiful our faces will rot They won't know if we were thin or fat our flesh will not remain They won't know in which gods we found our faith they will not know our minds And when they find our bodies Our petty wars and hollow causes will exist only as the tales of a distant time, Our fleeting words of hope and fear will be lost to the earth and the rising sea, And all the things that forced us to draw lines, to fight eachother, to stand apart, Shall fade to dust And the centuries past will unite us. --- 09 Bonnie and Clyde by Contestant Number 40 I sit here and think About Bonnie and Clyde And i cant help myself I want that life The running and robbing And love they one had The rush of the hour The feeling of bad The crossing the lines From state to state Sometimes theyd try But it was to late They had chosen that life Til the day that they died And i cant help but want That very same life It must have been funn At least for a while The things that theyd done Were not very wise But they had there gunns And love with blind eyes I hope that one day I will find my right guy Robbing banks or Shopping Sprees One day hell be all mine The love that they had Was unique indeed It was the kind The one that i need So i say once more That one day i will Have adventure, romance, and why Because one day well be The next Bonnie and Clyde --- If I Were... by Contestant Number 41 If I were a paintbrush of splendour, I would create a painting so brilliant With splashes of hate brightened by love, With dashes of joy darkened by misery, And with an endless turmoil of every feeling, every thought, And memories forgotten. If I were an ominous cloud of approaching danger, I would splay a net of warning To the ones who cringe from hurt And test the resilience of the fine thread That balances the life of those who resist. If I were the precise, focused eyes of a predator, I would pick out the absonant lopes of an antelope That strings a twine of discordance Through the rhythmic flow Of the galloping of an agitated herd. If I were the breath of the Winter Queen, I would arouse a storm so bitter That the very being of life is chilled to the core, Until all within my reach Has felt winter’s wrath. If I were hate, I would rip the brittle structure of the world Into wretched shards of envy, lose, hate, And love for the pain of others. If I were the chimes of crystal bells, I would empty my cup of music Onto the clouds that hover just above, So that the music, so sweet to the ears, Can rain down in a phantom storm. --- Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that this is a piece of Fan Fiction based on the television show friends. The poet did not create and does not have the rights to the characters used within this poem. An Abridged Version Of The One With The Poem by Contestant Number 42 So Friends begun and it began with a bang Chandler made jokes and Phoebe sang, Ross was glum whilst Rachel was free Well if you escaped Barry, wouldn't you be? Monica had relationships but they ended badly Joey had auditions but never got parts, sadly. Phoebe found a thumb but never knew her Dad, She hardly saw her sister but for that she was glad Ross and Rachel got it on and Chandler was still funny, But then Eddie moved in and he wasn't a happy bunny Monica found Richard and Joey got a new job too But he missed Chandler, well wouldn't you?! Whilst Phoebe found her brother Rachel found the list, Ross was devastated, but of course there was a twist Richard didn't want kids, and a prom video was to be found, Ross was Rachel's lobster, it was smiles and kisses all round When Monica lost Richard, Janice came onto the scene But Chandler found her annoying, her laugh was just obscene! The Friends played Football and Rachel was made to 'go long' Phoebe sang Smelly Cat and so it was her signature song Monica worked as a chef as Ross and Rachel took a break, He tried to keep his drunken night a secret, of course for Rachel's sake But it proved the wrong thing to do as Rachel found out anyway, He tried his best but to no avail, Ross didn't know what to say Chandler finally dumped Janice, no more 'bing-a-ling', Whilst he, Monica and Joey were freaked by a jellyfish sting Rachel moved on as Ross found Emily and got set to wed, But at the alter it was not Emily's name but Rachel's that he said When they got together, Monica and Chandler surprised us all, The gang went out to Vegas whilst Joey made a call He didn't want them to know he hadn't got the part, The Friends found out anyway, and helped him make a fresh start Chandler tricked Monica, and a proposal was what he did, She happily accepted, their next step was a kid! Phoebe made cookies but the recipe was not her own, Monica found out they were Nestle's and boy, did she moan. Then came the time for Mon and Chan's special day, Chandler got cold feet but he got there anyway Rachel had a secret that was to be revealed there and then, She was pregnant, and needed to tell Ross but didn't know when Ross was shocked but was happy he had a sister for Ben, Joey too had a secret, he loved Rachel (like most men!) Rachel was flattered but wanted to remain friends, She then had a baby as her and Ross made amends As the holiday ended Ross found out about the kiss, He pretended he was fine but it was something he couldn't dismiss Joey and Rachel stayed friends and Phoebe married fast Whilst Monica and Chandler found a baby they could adopt at last Rachel was offered a job but it was too far away How could she leave Ross, could he not persuade her to stay? She left for the plane but he raced to bring her back She couldn't do it and boarded the plane, she thought she was back on track Monica and Chandler had brought the twins home, While a sad Ross just wanted to be alone A voice message told him Rachel wanted to get off the plane, And as the door swung open it was Rachel that came So there it was as Monica and Chandler got set to leave, They had all spent ten years together, it was hard to believe Tears and sadness followed as they put their keys on the side, As they left the apartment, knowing they'd made an impact worldwide. The poem's full version may be found here for reference purposes only. --- Untitled by Contestant Number 43 The cigarette drags Inhaling the toxins Fills me with doubts Around me the rain drips And drops So morose, so morose Even if it kills me The time of my life |
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I loved the one about the pie, I like poetry that makes me laugh :)
Vanilla Wings is really, really beautiful.
I am fond of many, but particularly "The Woods", "Confessions of a Rock" and "Carving Angels," those really caught my eye. I am thoroughly impressed by the talent here, I really am.
None of these are mine.;)
I also had a question: When should the end date be for my pick? :p
EDIT: Or, you mean, when everyone votes and when voting closes? Erm... maybe a week or two after you post the pick.
btw it's not mine.
Break a leg, guys! Hope everyone has as much fun reading these as I did. =)
To the judges:
I already proposed this somewhere else, but I have an idea for how to narrow down all these great poems to a top five.
Every judge gives every poem a score out of ten. Then one of the judges (I will be happy to be that one) collects all the scores, adds them, and posts a pick with the five highest scoring.
This way we don't have to endlessly debate about which poems should be in the pick.
I hope you agree with this idea: I really think it is the easiest way.
And nobody worry about nitya. She's just jealous because she missed the deadline. ;o)
And if I recall correctly, jesse_spencer, I think you provide good competition. ;o)
And that is the ONLY reference I am going to make to specific poets until after the contest. The truth is, I've mostly forgotten who's penned what (but no fear, I have a list written down, so you will get proper credit when the time is right.) ;o)
Two lives can be seperated by time and experiences!
Don't worry, you have plenty of time. I'm just being obnoxious. :o)
A) Sappp's suggestion of rating all the poems and then adding all the ratings to produce the top five highest scores.
B) Each of the five judges picking their absolute favorites (therefore there would be five finalists. If two judges have the same top favorites, choose second favorite).
C) Each judge choosing top five and discussing their conclusions with each other.
D) Some other way I haven't thought of.
I leave this to you guys to figure out. You post the pick AFTER you guys have decided on the finalists.
If you wish, as there are forty poems, to make it a top ten rather than top five, you may do this too.
Would the other judges please reply here what they would like to do?
Each judge their own pick and then a final pick with the winner from each pick is I think a very good idea. Is this ok with the other judges and our organiser?
I think if we do this idea we should have a date at which to post these picks, then something like 5-7 days to vote and then the FINAL vote.
I also think that if two picks end with the same poem we should just post one poem less in the final vote: the number two will probably be different and it would be hard to choose which of the numbers two will be added to the final pick: it will feel unfair to the writer whose poem is not chosen.
Why aren't the other judges replying?
I still kinda like the idea, though. I also agree with, in case of two picks that end with the same poem, not going with the second best poem, and instead just taking out one from the final pick.
As for the other judges, I have no idea.
"Oh dear. I already picked out some poems D:
Maybe what we could do is give a poem a point if it is picked out by a judge or something? I would rather not go through them again, although I could."
I'd recommend messaging bRiNnAyCuLlEn and dredfull7
If neither one of them replies within the next few days, then I suppose you can make the decision between the three of you. *Shrugs.*"
I should have asked for back up judges. But hindsight is twenty/twenty
Might be a bit harsh but this is not fair to the contestants. We should get a move on.
And three judges is also good I think.
So I'm going to say it again here:
DON'T TELL ME ABOUT IT, TELL YOUR FELLOW JUDGES!!!!!
I cannot be a judge due to the fact that I submitted a piece for the competition. While I am glad to help you folks organize, the people you need to be messaging about these things are each other (again, this isn't at heeeresjoyce or sappp, you guys are doing great).
I will send this message to the other three judges just to be really sure they see it.
"the secret life of children" contestant number 1,
"lord of the dance" by contestant number 2,
"our world" by contestant number 4,
"best friends turned strangers" by contestant number 9, contestant number 13,
"apart" by contestant number 15,
"The Unfinished Story (Based on a true story)" by Contestant Number 27,
and "The One With The Poem" by Contestant Number 42.
The best were "our world" "best friends turned strangers" "the unfinished story (based on a true story)" and "the one with the poem."
they were all absolutely wonderful.
to the judges, again, i am sorry.
Here's the skinny (as I don't see any problems getting solved)
1) All of you pick your top-however-many.
2) RATE ONLY your top how-ever-many on a scale of 1 to 10, 1 being least interesting, 10 being most interesting. If you just want to rank them, rate your number one rank as a 10, and then number two as 9, and so on.
3) Send your rated top-however-many to Sappp.
4) Sappp will add up the scores. The highest scoring poems will appear on the pick that Sappp will make. Sappp, you can include the best top ten, or the best top five, which ever you think is appropriate.
Are we clear?
Thanks.
REMEMBER: MESSAGE SAPPP, NOT ME. SAPPP!!! DO NOT POST IT HERE! MESSAGE SAPPP!
Are we very clear?
(Sappp, I hope you don't mind that I volunteered you for the position of rating counter. But... yeah...)
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