Edward_Bella234

over a year ago: Cope, please stop commenting on my articles. I'm sorry to be rude but you've written about 6 comments and none of them we're nice or helpful at all. Actually, I'm not sorry, I'm just annoyed by you so if you don't like the story, stop reading it and stop complaining about it. Thanks so much.

over a year ago: He beats her not because she does anything wrong but because he is crazy and he feels that it impowers him as a man. She takes it because she doesn't know who she would tell about something like that and back then, the husband was the boss of the house. Also, she is scared.

over a year ago: well thanks for the advice but I really wasn't mainly focused on the accuracy of my story. If it were to be a published story that the world would read, then I would immediatley research every fact I wrote, but since this is a small story that I just wrote for fun to pass the time, I am not focused on small facts about their attire and the way that they would speak because I have read books such as "pride and prejudice" and "wuthering heights" where they use that proper English language and I didn't enjoy both stories as much as I could have because it was difficult to understand some of the dialogue in the story so for my story I decided to stick to what I knew and use modern English. I appreciate your efforts to help me improve my story :)

over a year ago: Actually you're wrong. Her mother moves there later on but she lives in Pheonix for the book Twilight and Scottsdale is the particular place in Pheonix that she lived.

over a year ago: hmmmm...Victoria? I don't know!!
Great chapter hun!

over a year ago: Dean- "Who is that babe?!"
Sam- "Dean...I think thats a guy"

over a year ago: Nooo!!! It had better not be Cass or I'm going to be ticked off!! I hope it isn't Bobby either!!

over a year ago: Doesn't work on my computer :(

over a year ago: Yay!!! I love it!! great cliff hanger!!

over a year ago: I FREAKIN LOVE IT!!! (I know. I'm not very creative today :D)