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"Thanksgiving at the HQ" (http://sjf-penguin.deviantart.com/journal/Thanksgiving-at-the-HQ-416396868) Posted 9 months ago
SaturdaySurpris commented…
Happy Thanksgiving! 9 months ago
peacebaby7 commented…
Happy Thanksgiving, SJF! Nice little skit, you got there. I could see that happening. XD 9 months ago
TheRatKing1 said …
Hey. I'd like your honest opinion on this article i wrote. Yes, i know there are many minor punctuation errors, and i forgot to capitalize a name here and there, but i'll correct those later. At any rate, here's the story :http://www.fanpop.com/clubs/penguins-of-madagascar/articles/224717/title/curse-parker-platupus Posted 9 months ago
TheRatKing1 commented…
many thanks 9 months ago
TheRatKing1 commented…
when you get the chance, i mean 9 months ago
SJF_Penguin2 commented…
I think I will have the chance on Friday. Happy Thanksgiving. 9 months ago
Once again, I am disappointed in PoM producer Bob Schooley (http://sjf-penguin.deviantart.com/journal/Bob-Schooley-on-Twitchy-com-407308115). Posted 10 months ago
peacebaby7 commented…
Whoa ... Schooley is racist? Didn't see that coming. I agree with you, SJF. I can't stand discrimination. 10 months ago
mostar1219 commented…
^ yea, that's the one 10 months ago
Rainshadow999 commented…
Ah that word, I'm sure I've heard it on tv once. 10 months ago
Although I published Getting Into Character here and on deviantART in January, I have not published a fanfic on FanFiction.net (penname: GrandOldPenguin) since spring 2012. However, that will be changing tomorrow, September 13, when I release the first short in a four-story collection I am calling Operation: Short Stories. The collection, which will be updated daily through September 16, will consist of two short stories . . . Posted 11 months ago
SJF_Penguin2 commented…
. . . that I have already published here (and on deviantART) and two new shorts. Only one of the shorts is over one thousand words. If you are interested in reading the stories in my collection, I would love to hear any thoughts that you may have about them (or any of my stories), preferably on FanFiction.net. You do not need to have a FanFiction.net account to share your thoughts. Thank you in advance for reading! 11 months ago
SJF_Penguin2 commented…
Update, September 21: The second short (fanfiction.net/s/9684136/2) is hot off the presses (or hot on the screen of your computer, smartphone, or tablet). 11 months ago
SJF_Penguin2 commented…
And the final two are now up. Thank you, readers, for your support! 11 months ago
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peacebaby7 gave me props for my articles
(I meant to add a prop with that post. XDD) By the way, I noticed your little note in your motto about the "Operation: Short Stories"; can't wait to read it! Posted 11 months ago
SJF_Penguin2 commented…
I'm glad someone noticed my little motto advertisement. Thank you for your interest. You'll already be familiar with two of the short stories because they have been on Fanpop for a while, but the other two are new. As for areas for improvement in "A Deadly Secret," I can't really think of anything to say about the plot. As for grammar and the like, I remember there was one place where you wrote "per say," which really should have been written "per se" (it's Latin and a common error); I believe there were a few other similar usage errors in the story, but all minor. I would recommend being a bit more conservative with the ellipses (. . .)—commas are better in some places when the pauses are slight, and in many places you really don't need to stress a pause at all. (If I may use myself in an example, I used just ten in all of "Getting Into Character," which was more than eight thousand words long.) 11 months ago
SJF_Penguin2 commented…
When you do use them, treat an ellipsis as if it were a word by putting a space after any word that precedes it and before any word that follows it (so, "like ... this" instead of "like...this"). (I usually put a space between the periods when possible, but I've gone on about ellipses long enough already.) That's about all I can think of right now, but I plan to read "Skipper's Curse" soon (probably right after I'm done with my own project), so if you would like I will keep better track of anything I come across while reading it and give you any other thoughts I have. 11 months ago
peacebaby7 commented…
^^Can't wait to read yours. :D And I actually think I already learned about the "per se" thing a while ago, but I suppose I forgot. X3 ^I honestly thought the spaces before and after ellipsis were just a preference of some authors. Thanks for the feedback, it really helps. :) If you want to give me any constructive criticism on "Skipper's Curse", you're more than welcome, but you don't have to. I actually posted the last chapter today, and I hope you like it when you get to it. :) 11 months ago
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peacebaby7 said …
Thank you for your review on A Deadly Secret! I'm honored that you read and enjoyed it. If you don't mind my asking, is there anything that you think could have been improved—grammatical- or plot-wise? Posted 11 months ago
TheRatKing1 commented…
how on earth do you get something on here in italics?? 9 months ago
peacebaby7 commented…
All you have to do is put the word in these tags: [i]example[/i]. It doesn't work on comments like these, though. It works on wall posts, fanmails, articles, and comments on photos/articles/quiz questions/polls/etc. You can do the same with bold tags ([b]example[/b]) and with underlining ([u]example[/u]). If you go to write an article on fanpop, it gives you other tags for things such as photo placement/size and links as well on the right side of the page. (http://www.fanpop.com/clubs/penguins-of-madagascar/articles/edit). 9 months ago
TheRatKing1 gave me props for my articles
here's the fan fiction i was telling you about. i hope you enjoy it, and all feedback is welcome. thanks for taking the time to read this when you get around to it. http://www.fanpop.com/clubs/penguins-of-madagascar/articles/219947/title/news-flash-origins-madagascar-franchise Posted 12 months ago
TheRatKing1 commented…
Thanks for the comment. Anything else I could improve on? 11 months ago
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pmmom38 gave me props for my comments
Congrats you are the winner of Round 8 of POM Funnies!! I laughed so hard, couldn't stop, PB7 couldn't wait to read it when I finally got it out that what I was laughing at was your post, she just laughed & said, told you he was funny mom! Thanks for joining in! Posted over a year ago
peacebaby7 commented…
Ah, Mom! >.< over a year ago
SJF_Penguin2 commented…
I guess I picked a good time to drop by the club. Thanks! over a year ago
Four PoM-related items:

* When Shelly sang "I'm a freako for Rico," Rico was not impressed. But if she had instead said "I've got my freak on for recon," would Skipper have been impressed?

* I recently saw a license plate that ended with the letters POM. No, it was not on my car.

* Since the penguins did commercials for the Intel Core i5 processor, I hope they will forgive me for buying a new laptop with just a Pentium. But it was too good a deal. Posted over a year ago
SJF_Penguin2 commented…
* I am still alive (just in case this wall post alone didn't make that clear enough). I also still plan to publish another fanfic on FanFiction.net—a short sequel to "Beyond DNA"—but not before I finish a little bit of editing work on the original story. With the way my schedule has been lately, that part has taken me longer than I had expected. I once thought I would be done in early June—ha! over a year ago
peacebaby7 commented…
*(1) I don't know, he might have just found it creepy or annoying. xD *(2) I would probably have "POM" in my license plate. xD *(3) I love the Intel commercial. So hilarious. xD *(4) I can't wait for your sequel! :) over a year ago
mostar1219 commented…
i've gone plenty of times when i was younger. now, on the commercials, they have the mascot looking computer animated (like pom, jimmy neutron, or back at the barnyard, or pixar) over a year ago
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TheRatKing1 gave me props for my articles
hey! i have another idea for a fan fiction that i'm currently writing, and i was hoping you'd review it. thank you, regardless of what happens. Posted over a year ago
SJF_Penguin2 commented…
I'll take a look at it. Let me know when you post it. over a year ago
TheRatKing1 commented…
thanks. i'm having writers block though. i can't figure out a CONVINCING way to crash a plane on Madagascar without it seeming like it was an obvious thing to do. I'm trying to make it seem like it's a coincidence. over a year ago