22 days ago:
Good as usual, Thou I have one or two things to complain about.
"Cogsworth: Sire, since you and Belle decided to be married, are you going to regain your crown back?"
It is "Regain your crown" or "get your crown back" so you better change that and wouldn't Belle be allowed to call Adam's mother "Lydia" instead of "Lady Lydia"?
other than that I say keep up the great work and I hope you write more.