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Review posted over a year ago
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This is a short extract from the story I'm writing (Symbus). If you could please give me some feeeback on my style of writing and possibly some things I could improve it would be a big help. Thank you. :D
‘This is Princess Alyssia Renesme of the Fire Kingdom.’ He paused pointedly. ‘I’ll sell her to you for 300 gold pieces, and I think we both know that’s generous.’
‘You bastard!’ Alyss screeched.
‘Do you think I’m a fool? There’s no way in hell that’s her. But I’ll give you 50 silver pieces for her…We’ll have some fun anyway, wont we,...
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Guide posted over a year ago
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A Wikipedia artical concering Jedi Apprentice:
STAR WARS: JEDI APPRENTICE
Star Wars: Jedi Apprentice is a popular series of books in the fictional Star Wars universe. Jude Watson, is the primary author of the series, although the first book was written by Dave Wolverton. The books follow the adventures of young Jedi Obi-Wan Kenobi and his Master, Qui-Gon Jinn, before the events of Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace. The series' main target market was supposed to be children aged 9 through 12, but due to the books' writing style and "serial" plot...
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Article posted over a year ago
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An extract from a Wookiepedia artical concerning Jedi Master Tahl:
"I pledge myself to you, Qui-Gon."
―Tahl to Qui-Gon Jinn
Tahl was the first Jedi Master of Bant Eerin and a librarian of the Jedi Archives. Tahl was also a close friend of Qui-Gon Jinn, with whom she fell in love. She was blinded in a prison during a mission on Melida/Daan. However, her improved hearing and Force-sensitivity helped her get back on her feet.
Biography
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Opinion posted over a year ago
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Artical extract from Wookiepedia:
BIOGRAPHY
Padawan
"If the order were made up only of those invulnerable to love, it would be a sad group altogether."
"Does that mean there is a woman to be discovered in even Master Obi-Wan's past?"
―Obi-Wan Kenobi and Anakin Skywalker
Though two years younger than Obi-Wan Kenobi, Tachi was just as powerful in her skills with lightsaber and the Force. As an adolescent, she had a very tomboyish attitude, even while considered attractive by her male peers. As with...
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Article posted over a year ago
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I am clever. I am witty.
I am popular. I am idolized. I am loved.
Everyone values my opinion. They cling to my every word.
I am free of rules.
Advice doesn't apply to me. I don't need it.
I am always right. So don't question my opinion, because you are wrong.
Whatever you can do, I can do twice as well.
I am untouchable.
I fling attacks from behind my fortress and fear no retaliation.
I am safe behind my shield.
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