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Opinion posted over a year ago
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A wince wiped itsway into my spine. Something smelled. My throat burned-raw. Someone new... [i]her[i]. I bit down a hole into my lip.
>>>"God, Edward, looks like you got some luck. I can smell her from here!" Laughes Jasper.
>>>I stare at him. "Yes, this is one case of adversity, eh?" I say, without humor.
>>>When I park, I think about just driving off and never coming back. My head pounded. I didn't know that vampires could get migranes.
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Opinion posted over a year ago
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***In consideration of my work on the article; I'd appriciate it if the ratings critism in comments were kept non-biased, and curteous to other readers. I also wouls appriciate it if the only critism was constructive, or I will try to have it deleted.***
Driving in my volvo was ostentatious, according to Carlisle; but to me it was pretty modest, in consideration of Rosalies over-the-top convertable.
I get into the car, looking like anyother day, in purposely faded jeans, curtosey of Alice, and a plain gray t-shirt, that she thought was offensive. I found myself...
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Opinion posted over a year ago
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Ch.1 Predestination.
If you are biased to something, or something, please don't let your opinion effect your review or rating!
Driving in my volvo was ostentatious, according to Carlisle; but to me it was pretty modest, in consideration of Rosalies over-the-top convertable.
I get into the car, looking like anyother day, in purposely faded jeans, curtosey of Alice, and a plain gray t-shirt, that she thought was offensive. I found myself appealing, but Emmett thought I looked cryptic... macabre or cadaverous. I sighed, when I saw that I was the one late, and Alice...
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Opinion posted over a year ago
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This is twilight fanfiction. Sorry if you think that this isn't the spot. Please don't let your feelings toward that or twilight effect your review or rating.
Ch.1 predestination
Driving in my volvo was ostentatious, according to Carlisle; but to me it was pretty modest, in consideration of Rosalies over-the-top convertable.
I get into the car, looking like anyother day, in purposely faded jeans, curtosey of Alice, and a plain gray t-shirt, that she thought was offensive. I found myself appealing, but Emmett thought I looked cryptic... macabre or cadaverous. I...
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Opinion posted over a year ago
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Chapter one: Predestination
Driving in my volvo was ostentatious, according to Carlisle; but to me it was pretty modest, in consideration of Rosalies over-the-top convertable.
I get into the car, looking like anyother day, in purposely faded jeans, curtosey of Alice, and a plain gray t-shirt, that she thought was offensive. I found myself appealing, but Emmett thought I looked cryptic... macabre or cadaverous. I sighed, when I saw that I was the one late, and Alice and Jasper were packed, comfortably, snuggled together in the back seat. Emmett's Jeep roared passed me....
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