AD Short Film

Hey everyone. Im an animator from the UK and ive written a short story which is about to become an animation. The script has taken inspiration from the style of Arrested Development and i would really appreciate some feedback. I have a video of a animated storyboard for you guys to watch.

http://cid-27f0da2050386bea.skydrive.liive­.co­m/s­elf­.as­p..­.mo­v

or here - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tylFzaq44hy­c

Any thoughts or opinions would be great, even if its just "i can see the similarities" or "maybe it could be more like this..."

Thanks very much.