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The Gift (Don't read this unless you've read the wedding and the reception)

Fan fiction by Eclipse posted 1 year ago
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I felt trapped staring at the gift. It was much more painful than I’d expected. A necklace a big heart shaped diamond with little diamonds around it shaping another heart. I figured it stood for the two hearts that belonged to me. The things I didn’t expect was when the big heart catches the light just like Edward it also reflects a big red brown wolf. It caught my breath. I fell to the floor and Edward along with Alice rushed to my side.
    “Are you ok Bella,” Edwards cool velvet voice asked?
    “I-I’m fine I j-just need to get up,”I started getting up but was being controlled by a vampire who didn’t seem tow ant me to get up. “Edward-,” I stared to protest but was cut off.
    “At least let me carry you to the couch.” There was no point so I just sighed and said,
    “Fine,” I defeat. I let him carry me to the couch. “I don’t see why I couldn’t just walk though!” Edward sighed.
    “Your not going to let me have anything are you?”
    “You have me,” I said he chuckled.
    “Well I guess that’s enough.” He smiled my favorite crocked smile and I managed to smile back...I think. “I still don’t see why you have to be so stubborn.” He said in a mocking tone.
    “That hurt,” I answered back in a joking tone.
    “Sure it did,” Alice spoke up I forgot that she was there because she was so quite. Edward went to go get me some water.
    “Alice how long did you know that Jake was going to crash my wedding?”
    “The truth?”
    “The truth.” Even though We knew Edward could we were whispering.
    “I knew for about a week.”
    “Why didn’t you tell me when you know?”
    “Take a wild guess,” She pointed her eyes toward the kitchen where Edward was and I sighed.
    “Edward I know you can hear me, why wouldn’t you let Alice tell me?” He was in the living room agin with a glass of water.
    “Because I didn’t want you worrying about it all week.”
    “But I could of been prepared and I wouldn’t of broken like that!” I pleaded.
    “Do you really think you wouldn’t of broken like that?”
    “Mabey,” I lied.
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is this ur way. like did u write this. its good
posted 1 year ago.
 
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Eclipse said:
thx
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Eclipse said:
yeah its my way
posted 1 year ago.
 
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Love it!!! Please write MORE!!
posted 1 year ago.
 
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fegzii said:
its very good ...

agree with cullencult write more !!
posted 1 year ago.
 
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Eclipse said:
I'll try
posted 1 year ago.
 
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Eclipse said:
What about?
posted 1 year ago.
 
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sad
Eclipse said:
What more should I write about guys?
posted 11 months ago.
 
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monkey
Uhhh maybe you should try and have someone unexpected, like Emmett to go and talk to Jacob to try and get him to see Bella and work out their problems?
posted 10 months ago.
 
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Eclipse said:
kk
posted 2 months ago.
 
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