a newer poem that i wrote plz tell me if its any good.

Title: The Girl.


"Im the girl that no one falls for, the one that everyone hates I'm the one that is always alone, everyone never sees her she's invisible to them but look you can tell she likes him, he don't notice her down the hall standing on that wall, she fakes a smile so no one can see the pain she desperately tries to hide, she cries herself to sleep each night she dreads to be awaken in the daylight because her schoolday is her living hell, when she is happy she is dreaming of being wanted and loved, she's dead inside, no one can help, not with all the pain she feels, not with all the kids laughing aat her, she always says 'oh I'm okay', when actually she knows she isn't atright, she just wants someone to hold her real tight during the night."