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Opening to Dreams

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Opinion by johnsgirlalways posted 7 months ago
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The room is dark it smells like gasoline. How did I get here? And where is here? Foot steps near, loud, and hard. It seems like they're pounding with my heart. Thump, stomp, thump, stomp! I'm so scared,whats going on? I hear a door slide open then a light comes on. I feel like I'm going blind. The foot steps are coming closer this man appears in front of me. He's old and grungy it looks like he works with grease cause hes covered in it. He smiles then he stops and stares at me. I want to scream but, I can't the taste of gas and dirt, fills my lungs. My mouths tied with something. He turns his attention to something behind him, he picks it up. He then turns around and shows it to me. It's a knife, the biggest knife I've ever seen. He puts it to my throat and in those mere seconds I knew I was going to die.
I hit the floor and I awake it was just a dream. Thank God, it was just a dream.
5 comments
user photo greekthegeek said:
nice detail

was it a real dream?
posted 7 months ago.
 
user photo johnsgirlalways said:
No, thank god it wasn't real I would have woke up totally freaked out..
posted 7 months ago.
 
user photo greekthegeek said:
lol yh same here.
i wouldn't be able to sleep after that
posted 7 months ago.
 
user photo amazondebs said:
brilliant! quite a surreal beginning
posted 7 months ago.
 
user photo blisslikethis said:
i'm not sure if you want help editing, but there are a few spelling and grammatical errors that i could point out.
posted 7 months ago.
 
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