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A Selection of Seven (Still) Amateur Poems

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Fan fiction by Cinders posted 2 months ago
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So one may or may not recall that a few months ago, I posted A Selection of Eleven Amateur Poems that I wrote in my high school years and my freshman year of college. The purpose of this was to compare it to the work I was required to do in my poetry class (a pre-req for the creative writing track of the English major). Since I recently discovered that I was accepted to the track (yay for me!), I decided it was time to post the results of that poetry class to compare to my other poems.

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sapling

fingers curl like dead leaves and grip a
fleshy branch which tickles

lines of stories etched in arching
looping whorls rub against each other singing songs
like crickets

soft and chapped twins breathe on forehead blues
searching and wide darting
snickering, knowing forest lullabies like wind whistling
sun twirling rhythm and
soft down feathers

adorning crowns of modest royalty no younger than
oak’s thick roots clinging to the ground no
older than a tiny smile so bright
as moonlight

hospital gown grasped in the strongest fists
watches her tinkling laugh hover ghost-like in the green
she clutches twin blues and down feather crown
an oak tree shelters her sapling

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Where the Buffalo Roam

It was the summer, during the War
I forget which year, but it was the summer
I remember, it was the summer, because of the sun
There are no deer or antelope here
In these hot, foreign lands
Foreign to who— you— Americans— maybe
And I think of my husband—
Under the crumbling mud, in triangular tunnels
Under jungles
Under the rice paddies
Hidden from the eyes of God and closer to the devil
I stare at his photo and pray
To anyone who listens
The Father, the Son, the Holy Spirit
Even a statue of Buddha I purchased
Loyal to all faiths and none for the simple reason of
I just wanted him home
The water buffalo grazed greedily
As I prepared for his homecoming
And I was convinced that the humidity
Would chase away the smoke
And I was convinced that I was far
Far away from the War
I did not know that the sun would rain like tears
And peel off my skin
I did not understand by everything was so bright
Or why the water buffalo were wailing
Or why I could not find the air
Or why I saw his face
Before I saw—

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Tarnished Gold

He was so pleased with her beautiful, natural curls that,
She never told him it was permed, bizarre… and dyed.

Stonehenge of Salisbury is a mystery, but she solved it in an English breeze,
Until the secret wind blew all her research far and died.

She was convinced the curse of music was a myth and asked to play his song,
But before she could, she pricked her finger on his guitar and died.

He wanted to buy her a birthday present so he went to the mall,
Saw her there with another man, drenched his heart in tar and died.

She prayed and knew her child would live, so said no to the abortion,
But when she miscarried as doctors predicted, she wished on a star and died.

She took up smoking to lose weight, but forgot to turn off the stove,
The flames enveloped her home when she lit her cigar and died.

He told her that he would come home when he finished the surprise,
Surprising when the plane went down on its way from Qatar and died.

He opened heart and wallet to a homeless on the street,
And as he walked away, he was shot from afar and died.

The fortune teller told her she would live a long, sweet life,
And on her way back home, she was hit by a car and died.

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She Must Have Been Flying

She sees the world through the lens of a camera, but her memories are all in extended exposure and over exposed.
The corners of the eyes are curled, like the damp pages of an ancient yellowed tome, whose Maker had wept over day after day after day after—
She can’t remember.
She must have been flying.
Her husband was a pilot who always left her behind on the ground.
Because she was afraid of heights.
“You’ll never get me in that contraption!”
One day, he never landed.
The next, she got her pilot’s license, and now she is always flying.
She is always seeking
Him.
She flies from the old couch in her living room in front of the too-too bright LCD light from the television her children bought her.
And when they visit, she tells her daughter that she’s been flying, and the sweet thing naively smiles, because she knows her mother rarely leaves the house these days and is afraid of heights.
Her hair is the way cotton candy is when it’s fresh, though she is ripe as bananas ready for bread.
She’s ready for bed.
She sets down the pen and closes the tome.
She’s out of tall tales.
But she smiles at her children, chiming laughter in the wind, and friends she knows or doesn’t know, she can’t remember—
She must be flying.

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Apart

She said, “If I didn’t know your name,
“I’d call you home.”

When he touches her hand, it is not butterflies
that make her ashamed of her chipped nail polish,
and she has no inclination of heaven or angels…
Between the secret glances…
In the negative space before they touch…
In the hidden limbo between Midnight and Morning…
It simply Is.

But then, Sunday screams quick as lightening!
Softly singing cinders (blow the fire)…
…with lullabies of a cartoon masquerade

“I love you”
And as I do
I love to lie to you


A man can learn that a woman is a dungeon
in which he’d be glad to drown.
And a woman can learn that a man is a hero
who will always let her down.

“Don’t be afraid, Daddy’s coming home,”
As soon as the alcohol rots my bones.

His grass can’t be greener if I scorch it black
And then, it won’t grow back again.

This is the revenge of the ugly duckling
Who never became a swan
This is the revenge of the ugly duckling
Who always played the pawn

… But in the negatives of Polaroids, you’ll still remain the same…

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Ballad In Blank Verse

The calls from vendors hocking wares
all ripple through the hazy crowd.
The tourists look for curios
to give their bubbly friends back home.
The vendors offer tea along
with cheerful company and it
is not polite refusing them.
The vibrant costumed dancers sway
their hips and swirl and snap in time.
They brightly chime their finger bells
and whisper words in Arab songs.
Their brothers, they call dervishes
who whirl and play and laugh all night.
Their sisters are the vendors’ wives
who shrewdly aid their husbands’ work.
The camels only spit at me
and tourists passing through the sand.
But they are sweet to natives, though
if they want treats, they have to be.
The shisha bars smell sickly sweet
of dark mint tea and cherry smoke.
The owner gives us discounts ‘cause
he knows we love cafés and his
is just the best. It’s surely true.
Why else would we come back so much?

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Serious Limerick

If I could take over the nation
I’d change the entire vocation
I’d help the old poor,
Cure diseases, and more
And finally end desperation.

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And there you have it.
1 comment
user photo dave said:
Thanks for sharing your beautiful poems with us Cinders! You're a really talented writer!
posted 2 months ago.
 
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