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Crimson Blood and Poison Tears

Mallory101 posted on Apr 17, 2009 at 01:12PM
Rain,Rain Go away
Because of you the pain will stay
Slit my throat,cut out my heart
Leave me here,tear it apart

Poison Tears stream down my face
My heart now beats at a steady pace
As I try to Stand Again;
Alone and standing in the Rain

I Don't need you anymore...
Is what I think while tears pour
I hate you like I hate my life...
But Love is what cuts,Like a knife

Love is Death and Death is you
Its pain stains like a black tattoo.
Those memories come back again
And blind me in the ropes of pain.

Crimson Blood streams down my head
Like,A long silk ribbon,tied by a thread
To a platinum bullet,a hole in my skull...

...Now just a memory That's faded and dull...
Rain,Rain Go away
<br />
Because of you the pain will stay
<br />
Slit my throat,cut out my heart
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last edited on May 02, 2009 at 10:53PM
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To me this is like one of the best things I've ever posted on Fanpop
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cloudy
do you feel this way?
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OMFG! this is amazing! i can't belive that person copied ur poem and posted it as their own! well.. actually i can belive them cuz it's so amazing! but still, it was wrong to do it. amazing poem! extreme talent!
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iluvryry said:
WOW that's amazing xxxx
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Mela1994 said:
WOW!!! AMAZINGNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!
posted 1 month ago.
 
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ashie068 said:
hey good poem, but my friend WROTE the same one in January or Febuary???
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idk what to think It's ok... but It needs some more polishing... most of the people here are just saying its good for they feel the same... you can write well but you use vauge descriptions so that a lot of people can sempathise or empathize... the platnum bullet part was geinus... I would have said something different... but the way you said it made your death beautiful... but it is not... killing oneself is shameful... it can be understood but it is disgraceful... well just lack of grace... keep up the good work...
posted 16 days ago.
 
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