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Fan fiction by chel1395 posted 4 months ago
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She was just a girl of fifteen, but she had long ago lost that naivety and innocence of girls her age. While her dearest chums spent their days thinking about clothes and their latest crush, she spent her days doing something much differently. She couldn’t tell her friends about it though, they wouldn’t understand. They would criticize and call her horrible names. They’d never accept what she had become. She was completely alone in her secret desires, alone except for the strangers she let into her life each day. It was her need for the approval of those strangers that had caused her to rush home from school that day. She was now on her bed, doing exactly what she couldn’t help herself from doing. The sound that flew from her lips was quick and unexpected. She gasped sharply and felt all other thoughts rush from her mind. Her heart beat sped up and she moved ever so slightly. As her mind became muddled with pure happiness, she arched her back and closed her eyes.

There is nothing like your first time. People always like to say that, but the girl knew it to be true. Her first time had been a bitter disappointment and left her filled with regret. But, as with many things in life, she was unable to undo what had been done. She found that the only way to fill that void was to try and try again. After many months, she was now considered an expert in this area. She had done it many times before and she had started branching out, doing it in much more public places than the safety of her bedroom. But today it was her room she found herself in. Something was different this time, however. She couldn’t understand why she felt this way all of sudden. Something was taking over her body and she felt like almost possessed. Her fingers slid across the smooth surface beneath her and her heart beat faster. She moved faster and faster until suddenly...

The door flew open and in walked the girl’s mother. Her eyes locked onto her daughter’s form and her mouth dropped open. “Young lady!” she screeched, her cheeks flushed red. “This is the final straw. You quit this foolish business and come down to dinner immediately.” Like a child caught with her hand in the cookie jar, the girl blushed. “Coming, Mom.” She hit the Publish button and let her newly created pick fly off into the Fanpop universe. Satisfied with her latest creation, the girl tossed her laptop on the bed and ran off downstairs after her mother, her mind already racing with new pick ideas.

31 comments
user photo amazondebs said:
ha ha ha ha, chel you dirty girl
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo _lina_ said:
lol, great story!
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo dazl said:
True story, chel?
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo katiemariie said:
Chel's a pick slut.
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo chel1395 said:
True story?? Hmmmm...well that would explain all those long pauses between my picks, wouldn't it? Though when I was 15, Fanpop was just a gleam in Dave's eye.
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo ineedcoffee said:
loved it great article!
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo edennirvana said:
LOL! Love it!
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo llerenaprincipe said:
:)
more!
more!
more!
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo johnminh said:
Man, I got all hot and bothered reading this ... LOL! :p
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo amazondebs said:
*fans cat/hulk woman aka john*
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo Ajox said:
Whaha this is already the best soapbox of 2008 :'D
posted 4 months ago.
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user photo bellywalks_2007 said:
hahhaha!
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo HannaK said:
Really good :)
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo Cinders said:
Oh, john... oh chel... oh john........

You should link to this over at the "Creative Outlet" spot. Or, maybe I will. ;o)
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo Booyahboy said:
lol brilliant...
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo luvGilmoreGirls said:
wow!! that was really great!! I laughed out loud when I finished!
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo inespinto said:
So great! I'm so glad you're a 'pick slut'! I too got all hot and bothered by this... kidding! Amazing!
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo jamislife said:
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
'snort'
hahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahah
truly hilarious!
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo adavila said:
lmao
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo iluvtheoffice12 said:
wow i was amazed at first and starting to think well never mind about that but it had an even more amazing finish thanks again for another work of art chel
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo Lila856 said:
LMAOOOOOO!
good one
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo Shandy said:
BAHAHAHA!! i fell off my chair *wipes tear away*
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo cutemimi said:
very good story!!!!
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo x-missmckena-x said:
hahahahah! love it!
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo iMAN_xD said:
i though it was something serious, but when i got to the end... LMAO!
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo Spotty_Vision21 said:
Mwhahaha. Pick slut. You lurve Dave, don'tcha?
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo angels said:
lol good story
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo Redwine said:
LOL, Awesome story.
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo elmo8emma said:
that was great! thats how i feel about fanpop as i spend far to much time on here just browsing around! and adding videos!
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo Elize34 said:
Wow great story and it is true you're really good a picks!
posted 4 months ago.
 
user photo tushtush said:
Greatly great great great. Woohoo. Reminds me of myslef. I've tried to turn my friends on to fanpop, but they just don't get it. They just don't have the tendencies for obsession.
posted 3 months ago.
 
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