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Taken Chapter 22

Fan fiction by just_bella posted 5 months ago
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Hi! Don't have anything to say (for the first time ever) so here we go.
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End of Chapter 20

"You have questions." He said...sure of my answer.

"Yes."

"Ask them." He said as she grinned.

"And you will answer them honestly?" I asked, anger boiling inside of me.

"As honestly as I can."

"Ok fine." I said as I sat up straight. "Where am I?"

"In a room."

"Very funny." I said as I glared at him. "Where is this room?"

"Inside a building."

"If you aren't going to help, you can leave." I said as I pointed at the door.

"Different question." He said as he turned his head and smiled.

"Does Edward know where I am?" I blurted out, without thinking.

He flinched suddenly, his entire body becoming rigid when I asked about Edward. I decided to try something more.

"Do the Cullens know where I am?" I asked, a smile starting to form.

"NO!!" He yelled as he stood up, his hands balled into fists. "And they NEVER will."

"Wow...I hit a nerve there." I said softly, instantly wishing that I wouldn't have said it out loud.

"They will NEVER find you!!! You better get comfortable!" He yelled as he turned and walked to the door.

Chapter 22

"Wait, please?" I asked, hoping I could talk to him...get more answers.

"What!?" He yelled as his hand froze on the door.

"You said you were my protector, correct?" I asked as I moved a little bit down the bed, sitting in the middle as I watched him turn and look at me.

"Yes, I am your protector." He said softly as he turned to watch me.

"Who are you protecting me from?" I asked, knowing that he already answered the question.

"From the others." He said as he relaxed a little, turning around to face me completely..his back against the door.

"The others?"

"Bella, you are smart. You already figured all of this out, I know you have." He said as he held his hands out in front of himself. "What am I Bella? What was Annah?"

"I'm....I'm not sure." I said as I looked down at my hands, knowing that I am a terrible liar...and even someone who just met me would know I was lying.

"Bella, you know this." He said as he watched me closely.

"No, it can't be." I said more to myself then to him, realizing that my fears were correct. My breathing became more accelerated as I started to hyperventilate.

"Bella, slow your breathing...you are going to faint." He said as he took a step closer to me. "Bella, breath...relax. Bella look at me." He said as he was standing at the end of the bed, his hands against the mattress.

I tried my hardest to ignore him, focusing on my breathing. Once I had myself under control I looked up and saw his face a few feet away from mine, his eyes a strange crimson color.

"Vampire." I said as I scooted back against the headboard of the bed.

I knew from spending time with the Cullens that the vegetarian's had eyes the color of Carmel, honey, or if they were 'hungry' their eyes were black as cole. This man's eyes were crimson, a bright shade of red. I knew from the stories that I had heard and from the things I had seen in Italy that vampires who fed off of humans had red eyes that turned a deep burgundy when they were 'hungry.'

"You are afraid of me, but not of your precious Cullens." He said as he glared at me. "Why is that?"

I was about to try to explain to him why I was afraid of him when he went rigid, turning to growl at the door. The sound was so guttural that I scooted across the bed and had one foot on the floor before he looked at me. Not one second later, there was a pounding on the door. Who ever it was was so determined to get in that they pounded so hard that the door actually shook.

"What." He said to the door, lowering himself into a defensive stance.

"We are leaving....now. Get her ready." The voice said from the other side of the door.

"What? On who's orders? Why?" He said as he walked closer to the door.

"Get her ready, you have 10 minutes. They say it is time, the Cullens are getting too close." The voice said, my heart pounding against my chest so hard that it felt like it was trying to burst through my ribs.

The man said nothing, his growl echoing so loudly that I raised my hands to my ears...covering them as the sound raised to the point that it hurt my head.

"Let them come." He snarled at the door.

"Now is not the time, now get her ready." The voice called as the man on the other side of the door walked away.

"Get your things, we're leaving." He said as he turned and glared at me.

I knew from the look in his eyes that I had to listen, I had to pack my things as fast as I could. I was about to ask what I was suppose to pack my things in when he turned and opened a closet, pulling out two pieces of luggage. He opened them both on the bed and turned to start grabbing things, throwing them into the luggage.

My heart was pounding as I packed, the Cullens were out looking for me...they were getting close. That meant that Edward was close, he was looking for me...I had to leave him some kind of sign.I just had to figure out how to do this with this...guard in the room watching everything I did.

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kiss
WHEW!!! Ohhh that was really fun!!
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
I hope I did everyone proud.
Thanks all :)
posted 5 months ago.
 
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Brysis said:
This is so AMAZING love!!!!!!!
ohhhhhh i´m liking this "protector"!!!!
... but he feads of humans......... hhhmmmmmmm interesting!!
and how do they know the Cullens are getting close??????

posted 5 months ago.
 
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angelic
AWWSOME! srr i got paint!
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mcs50 said:
AAAAWWW, more pleaaaase!!!!
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that was AWEOME!!!!
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LOVE IT I love all of your stories!!!!!!! So interesting can't wait for the next!
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OMG it is amazing!!! Write the next Edward soon. I REALLY Want to know what is happening!!!
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omigod! write the nxt one soon!!
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CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGER. HAVE 2 READ THE NEXT 1. I DONT READ IT AND I DIE. JK :P
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Swhit2 said:
YOU ROCK!!!
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that was really good!!love it!!
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So awesome!!!!!!Please write the next part soon I HAVE to find out what happened!!!!!!!!!!
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wowowowowoowowowoowowowowowowowow!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!
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babina said:
oooowwwww!!!!!!! niiicccceeee!!!!!! i sign!!! this is getting even better!!
BF
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this vampires are ...... but there cool!!! lol
nice story!!!!
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amandaj said:
Awesome! I really hope Bella finds a way to leave them a clue!
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I agree with Brysis. I kinda like him too!!!
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