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His Eyes

Fan fiction by neurogirl07 posted 1 month ago
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Lust
Sex
Emotion
Devotion
Power
Passion
Amazing
Fuel
Real

“Stella, are you coming? Danny ran the fibers that you collected at the roller rink and he said that it may indeed be a lead and….”
It is amazing of how powerful words are
They rush over you like a wave, a tidal wave
Quenching every pore, every square inch of skin, every neuron in your brain
And then some
Its refreshing
But scary
Scary of how fast his words take over you
Like a dominatrix
With a whip
In full S&M gear
You try to talk or even look at him, but you can't
You want too, you need too
You need to say something so it doesn’t make this situation awkward but
You’re transfixed
By a spell
With you as the victim...in a good way
And with him as the caster
The wizard
The seductive wizard
He casts it
It hits you
You are lost
In a passionate vigor of sexual feelings
In his eyes and
In his muscular forearms that
Ooze of sex and domination
And in him
It radiates to you
You let it
You want it
You need it
You crave it
It goes in you
And the spell works its magic in you
You remember his words that he just told you mere seconds ago
His spell
Remains a part of you
Like a mark
An eternal mark
That lives inside of you forever and ever
Cause his words are that powerful

“Stella, are you even listening to me….”
You hear yourself breathing harder and heavier
In rhythm with an unknown tempo
The tempo of the spell
The tempo of the words
You feel your mouth gaping
Getting turned on
Wanting it
More
And
More
And
More

“Oh okay, so we’re going to play this game, fine, I’ll play your little game with you, Stella….”
You don't know what or who to believe anymore
You love it
You want more of it
Its a craving
Like chocolate
Like a drug
Like a sin
An intellectual sin
Of lust
Of emotion
Of devotion
Of passion, and
Of sex
Nobody has ever made you feel this way before

“I guess I’ll just have to bring you to the lab with me, Stella….”
You look up
Chest heaving up and down dangerously fast
And then
All time stops
You see hazel looking at you
His eyes
Full of the same feelings you just felt
And want more of
And crave
Like a drug
Like a sin
Like the spell
Are all in the windows to the soul
His eyes




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becca85 said:
**breathless**

That was so well-written!! Definitely keep up the great work!!
posted 1 month ago.
 
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::blushes::

Thanks! :) It was loosely based off of something that I wrote as a freshman in college after I got out of this class with this REALLY attractive professor. I just changed around a few words and added some words and BOOM...instant fanfic. =D
posted 1 month ago.
 
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i loved it your really good keep it up
posted 1 month ago.
 
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I was a little worried to post a story so soon when I just joined this spot. But, thanks for the nice comment! :) Glad you enjoyed it!
posted 1 month ago.
 
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np
posted 1 month ago.
 
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