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so i wrote it and i thought i might as well post it here too since i posted the others, why the hell not right? ;) anyways we know i love feedback, even though i dont get any lmao! hope you like it ! :D
Chapter 4: Truth Be Told
2 months later.
It was one of the Planet’s busiest work days and the bullpen was full of people rushing to finish their reports before the deadline, everyone that is, but Clark. He sat at his desk moving back and forth with his chair as he watched Lois deeply focused with her work. The concept of deadlines and reports meant nothing to him as he was sitting across from her. The sun shined bright on her chocolate curls making him want to run his fingers through her hair. The way the sun reflected on her perfect features made her even more irresistible! He was so infatuated by her that he couldn’t help but sit there smiling. He thought about the last two months and how perfect they’d been. Working with her everyday, spending every waking hour by her side, there was no better feeling in the world. Feeling his stare, she looked up and met his gaze. Every time she saw those puppy-dog eyes staring...
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Review by
svgirl
posted
7 months ago
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I thought this season was really good. There wasn't too much that I didnt like about it.
I liked how the writers did Clois this season. This season made me like Clois even more than I already did. I didn't like how Clark like completely forgot about her when Lana came though. I did like how the introduced the Red/Blue Blur/Clark/Lois that was cool.
I liked how they brought Clark in as the Red/Blue Blur too.
I thought that the Chloe/Jimmy/Davis love triangle was really well done.
I also thought that the writers did Tess's character wonderfully. I really liked her character she wasn't like any of the other characters on the show. I also liked how she acted after she found out Clark's secret.
I really liked how they brought in the Legion, Maxima, Zantanna and the Injustice League, they couldnt have been done better IMHO.
Davis was also a pretty good new character to me. There wasn't very much about him I would have changed. Exept at the end I didn't like him being evil even without the beast in him.
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Chapter 14: When All That's Left Is To Say Goodbye
Her hand fell to her side. Her grip loosened and the phone hit the floor. A blank stare took over her expression and her body stiffened. The name kept ringing in her ears. Oliver Queen. Oliver. Oliver. She hoped Chloe was wrong. She prayed she was. But her mind went on high alert knowing that Chloe was never wrong. It all began to make sense, how had she not seen this before? She heard Clark’s voice faintly in the distance. He tried to get her to speak, to find out what she heard but…nothing. She said nothing. She sat completely still as if in a trance. She tried to talk but no words managed to leave her lips. Her gaze locked on the phone that had fallen to the ground.
“Lois? Lois? Hello? Are you there?” Chloe asked frantically on the other line. Clark quickly reached down to pick up the phone.
“Sorry Chloe we’ll have to call you back.” He said quickly and without waiting for her to respond he ended the call, shifting his focus back to Lois. Her mind was racing. She clenched her jaw and swallowed hard as a mix of rage and sadness took over her. He placed one hand on...
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