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my sonic story.sonics love,but shadows girlfriend:chapter 1 feelings and adventure
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this is a sonic story i have been writing for about a month.my chracter is myself because i put myself in my sonic stories.my chracters name is ashley but is refered to ash for short.hope you enjoy it.
one claim,cool day at shadow & ash`s house (shadow grabs the keys and is about to head of for work) ash-shadow,can`t you just take a day off work so we can spend some time together? shadow-you already know how deticated i am to my work.maybe the commander will let me off but im not sure.(he just leaves) ash was feeling kinda pissed off she coulde`nt spend time with shadow. 2 hours later ash was still home alone & she did everything she could to take her mind off shadow.she had almost given up & dicided to make a phone call. sonic-(is in the garage with tails who is fixing on one of his planes when his cell phone rings)hey ash! whats up!? ash-i am just so bored rigth now i could just kill myself.shadow coulde`nt spend anytime with me today,he`s occupied with work. sonic-bored!?well im so glad u called.wanna hang out with me today? ash-definetly!i`ll be their in a few minutes(hangs up) 7 mins later (sonic & ash are headed out the door on their hoverboards) sonic-this place is kinda far,so that`s why we`re using our boards to get their.despite the distance,it1s pretty cool & beautiful,im sur you`ll like it. (sonic & ash pull off on their gravity-deviying boards) 15-20 mins later sonic-we`re here! ash-whoa,(she looked down in amazment) (this biome was a huge,amazon rain forest-like jungle with flowers everywhere you turn,exotic birds such as peacocks & hummimg birds but even for a forest like this,it has it`s own dangers & precations) sonic-theirs alot more to this forest than what meets the eye,i don`t think i even went througth half of this forest yet. ash-i think im starting to like this place. sonic-well c`mon!we have so much time on our hands to gawk at this forest.let`s go!(the 2 adventurures sped into the forest at super sonic speed. 1 hour later sonic & ash have dicided to go on foot to explore some of the parts of the forest. sonic-(looked up at a tree & saw some fruit;he went up the tree on his hoverboad & grabbed 2 mangos.(to ash)-want one? ash-umm,sure. sonic-i`ve only found out about this place a couple weeks ago & here i am visiting it twice a week.what do u think ash?(he turns around to see ash is coiled up by an albiono boa constrictorbut it is also genetically fused with the dna of a viper) sonic-don`t worry ash!i`ll get that snake off! (he started off repeatedly attacking using homing attack & spin dash;the snake slowly losened his grip.sonic attacked it a few more times & he finally let go.the snake took one last look & retreated.) sonic-u ok ash? ash-i seem alrigth. sonic-lets get outta here before he comes back!chaos control! *back at home* sonic-whew!what an adventure! ash-you said it!but i liked it. sonic-how`d that snake get u anyway? ash-it must have got me for behind because i did1nt see it. sonic-doesen`t this beat being at home all day? ash-hell`s yeah it does!im glad i dicided to come over. sonic-you know,since before u & shadow dated,we would go on lots of expeditions like this remember? (memories just flowed into ash`s head of the times she spent with sonic,tails,knuckles,sometimes amy & sometimes shadow before they dated.the good, the bad, even close calls& the extordinary that happend on different adventures) sonic-you were actually much happier in those timesremember when i took you hoverboarding? *flashback* sonic-now that i taugth u everything u neeg 2 know about hoverboarding,here`s the real test,SPACE COLONY ARC! knuckles-remember if you fall,you`re screwed because you`ll be dead. ash-what?! sonic & tails-KNUCKLES! knuckles-just kidd`in i was just mess`in with her. tails-if you do,sonic will cacth you back up on his hoverboard, sonic-or i`ll use chaos control to bring you back up. ash-okay,so wheres my starting point? sonic-its rigth in front of you;see the glowing red & blue post? ash-yeah,i see it(starts up her hoverboard)the startmarker counted 3,2,1,START! *FLASHBACK END* sonic-(showing ash some pics)you actually got it down once you became face 2 face wih gravity. ash-those wre the days.i would do it again if i wanted 2. sonic-so that means? ash-i let u know when im bored.i work 2-3 times a day& im a manager; i take off anytime i want to. sonic-cool!we can tour the globe behing shadows back!almost like the good times. ash-well,shadow whent on that trip 2 spagonia but,i was a thing for an assignment. 3 weeks later sonic & ash have been 2 lots of places(knowing sonic)& how fast he gets 2 them.spending all this time together,sonic has also taken intrust in ash but she`s shadows girlfriend. 10:30 pm ash told shadow she would spent some time with her girls so she & sonic could talk. sonic-ash,why do u allways have 2 keep things from shadow?why not tell him what`s really up? ash-have u seen the way he acts when i do tell him stuff?no way! sonic-i know.but u do`nt have 2 worry about a thing with me. ash-that`s because you`re more outgoing & i feel more comforable telling u everything. sonic-before u & shadow hooked up,me & u were almost like best friends. ash-yeah,me & u are pretty tigth together.i kinda trust u more than shadow. narrirator-you can just imagine how sonic was feeling with ash telling him this. sonic-(with a sense of pride inside him,he almost wanted 2 tell ash what he was feeling about her.) in the distant future silver-so r those 2 going 2 be together? mephiles-you tell me,i already know the anwser & so will u.you`ll know what happens 2 them long before they do.(hands him the purple chaos emerald) silver-(looking into the emerald)i,i see it.but is this true? mephiles-look silver. in the past/present sonic-ash i,i,i bougth you some ice cream it`s in the freezer. ash-ummm,okay(leaves to the kitchen) sonic-damn,i with i could have told her. (ash comes back) sonic-ash,i missed u when u & shadow started dating.u didn`t hang out with us very often. ash-we did spend alot of time together back then.shadow used 2 be so sweet & understanding 2 me;it seemed like after he came back from that trip 2 trinidad,he acted so differently. sonic-trinidad huh?guess shadow had a case of jungle fever! (sonic & ash lauthing then they both lean in as if they were kissing until- tails-hi sonic! sonic-ahhhgg!(he got so scared,he fell outta his beach chair)tails?! what are u doing here this late at nigth? tails-im bored.so i cameover 2 see what u were doing. sonic-im just sitting he chating with ash.i guess you can say here for a while.what do u say ash? ash-okay,why not. tails-sonic,i found one more chas emerald today. sonic-really?that makes 3 outta7 dosen`t it? tails-yeah,but we better be careful,eggman could come & get them at anytime. sonic-you`re rigth;im gonna store it in a safe place before- (just then an large robot comes) eggman-hello there sonic,you know what i want so hand`em over & no 1 gets hurt. sonic-damn it. 1 month later shadow is just about 2 find out ash & sonic have been hanging out together. (shadow comes home early from work one day,he turns on the t.v.) news ancor man-suspect jamie wolfe has been aprehended & will be taken in for questioning;if you have any questions or conserns about the cedar palms case,call 248-362-7890 kfy news. shadow-(walks to the back room & finds a journal prompt)he looks through it & finds out it`s ash`s. he reads it. ash`s thougths-even though im with shadow,i hang out with sonic whenever he`s busy. shadow-(flippes trough a few more pages.) ash`s thougths-more & more im with sonic,i see something in him.i can tell he has feelings for me;by some of the things he does & says.the way he smiles,& he never fails to show up whenever i need it.it`s been a month & a half,im starting to like him a little. shadow-sonic`s try`na hit on ash?he won`t be for long when i remind him whoses girlfriend she really is. downtown emerald city sonic,knuckles,& tails hanging out tails-listening 2 his mp3 sonic-(2 knuckles)u see i reallly,reallly like her,but im not sur how she feels about me,because shes still with shadow;it`s the only reason why i have`nt pushed or forced anything. knuckles-knowing shadow,thays a pretty good thing 2 do.last thing u wanna do is get caugth flirting with his girlfriend while he`s around. sonic-i know rigth!but what else can i do? knuckles-well,if you like her as much as you say you do,maybe u should hang out together alone & maybe you can get the word out then. sonic-thay`s a great idea knuckles,even though i i don`t really come to u 2 talk about my problems.let alone fix them. knuckles-i fell some strange energy. tails-what kinda energy? just then a medium-sized ball of yellow ligth appears in front of them. sonic-(looks up.)shadow? shadow-just attacks sonic with chaos spear. tails-sonic! knuckles-shadow!what do u think you`re doing!? shadow-(chuckles)just taking care of some buissiness,now get out my way or you`re both toast. knuckles-shadow!we are not just going to let u attack sonic withougth figthing u first,is`nt that rigth tails? tails-no one attacks sonic & gets away with it!punch away knuckles! knuckles-with pleasure. just a few blockse away from there location.ash is shopping. cashier-that will be 25 dollars. ash-thanks.she gives him the money & leaves.she went across the street to a nearby wendy`s. knuckles & tails try their best 2 hold off shadow. shadow-(uses a mini chaos blast 2 shake off knuckles & tails.)fools you can`t stop me,im the ultimate life form!(walks up to sonic)as for u. ash-(walks down another block & sees the figth.she is a bit shocked & appaled) knuckles& tails are on the ground& shadow is beating up a barley counsious sonic.(one more hard hit he would have been out)he tried 2 put up a shield but because he was already weak,it didn`t last long.ash coulden`t tak anymore so she stopped the figth. ash-shadow stop! shadow-turns her direction. ash-why are u figthing them? shadow-you`re hiding something.why the hell r u hanging with sonic behind my back? ash-whenever you`re busy, i get bored & find myself hyang out with him. shadow though for a brief second & bough into ash`s story.with that, he let sonic go & ash healed all their injuries.this conclued my first chapter. |
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Pretty good, so far...
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