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Moonlight chapter 15

Fan fiction by Rob_patt_fan posted 2 months ago
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He put his hand in his pocket and then handed me a silver box which was beautifully designed and I was sure it was an antic. Edward opened the silver box and there was a ring. If I was human, my heart would have stopped.

“Edward… no…”

He put his finger on my lips and said:

“Isabella Marie Swan, Will you do the honor of being my wife?”

I smiled and looked in his eyes. He was everything. Truly everything! I tried to open my mouth and then I said:

“Yes.”

His eyes got filled with happiness and he put the ring in my finger and he started kissing my hand with his lips. I was feeling thirsty so Edward managed a hunting trip to somewhere with no humans.

“Bella, you’re so weird! You know everything to do as a vampire!”

I crooked a smile and started drinking lion’s blood. It was warm and it made me feel good. But then I smelled a dog… no… not exactly A DOG… there were a pack of them. With no thinking, I suddenly wasn’t shocked to see Jacob’s face.

“Why are you here, pup?”

Edward said while he growled under his breath and looked at me, with a cloudy expression on his face.

Jacob, first looked at me. I could say that he wasn’t happy.

“You didn’t blush, Bella! Does that mean that now you’re a …?”

I nodded as I was confessing to a crime. Jacob’s face got hard. He looked at me with sudden breaths which he took and his face was turning red.

“Bella, I begged you to not do this… I begged you! But now…You’re a Bloodsucker like all of them… My Bella’s gone… Yup? She is, I guess!”

He said while he was subbing. Then he stopped subbing, looked at Edward and then he looked at me. I backed off my hair to one ear and then Jacob yelled.

“What the HELL is that?”

He asked while I was wondering what did he mean?!

“Jacob… What do you mean?”

“That ring… Bella, you ruined everything… EVERYTHING!”

Jacob yelled while he came closer to me.

“Jacob… What’s the matter with you?”

Jacob didn’t listen to me. He turned to face Edward and said:

“Bloodsucker… I want you all out of this area! I love fighting… you know?”

Edward said as he wasn’t worried like me.

“When, and where Pup?”

“Our fight will be tomorrow… Meet us in the equinox…Hope to see you there in the woods!”

I could feel the pain in my whole body. It wasn’t a human pain. It was something new… like I was having a knife in my brain.

“No…”

I choked out the word and knelt on my knees. This was all because of MY existence?


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so... I posted this chapter... Hope Y'all like it... Don't forget 2 comment and rate... Love y'all...Bye...!

P.S: I'll be writing the next chapter for next sunday!
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I love it, It's awesome. So coo. I feel bad for bella at that end
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Aww poor bella!! and poor jacob!! i feel more sorry for him... (sorry, Im team Jacob..lol)
BUT IT WAS GREAT!
Woo hoo! FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT...
cant wait for more hon!!
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love it!!!
but plzzz dont make them fight!!!
im gonna have a few words with u tommorow
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arianaggs said:
that was awesome
wow they're going to fight
love it !!!!
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Awesome! So great hon, I loved it!
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Awwwwwww amazing! LOVED IT!!!
Thanks for letting me know:D

PS: And well, I'm a bit stook but I'll be able to write more, the problem is that my tests are starting so I have a lot to study and I don't have time to write:( I know, I know...It sucks but school comes first! Hopefully in a few weeks I'll be able to write more before the next round of tests:)
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oh my god i love it!!!!!!!!
bella i wonder what she is going to do!?!?!
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goodgirl1 said:
WOW!!!Edward and Jacob's are going to FIGHT!!!(Hope Edward wins)!!!!Nice writing....i'm having doubts if u take Writing Courses!!!!
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Hunter157 said:
dam thats awesome and cant wait to see wat happens next and keep riting
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Oh, wow! Bella is a vampire. Jake and Edward are going to fight...this is interesting.
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Hey... thnx for all ur comments! XoXO!

Love y'all!
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awesome, i love it,
i want know what happens with edward and jacob
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dont fight!!!!
lol. i love all the other stories!!!
keep writing! (: <3
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ITS sOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD plz keep riting
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shiriny said:
loved it :)
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really nice. ;)
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Oh thnx all!
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mcs50 said:
Sorry I didn't read it before. I loved!!!!!
posted 2 months ago.
 
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