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Last part of me... chapter 1

Fan fiction by Rob_patt_fan posted 27 days ago
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hey... so this is my new story... I don't like the other one! So... I started this one! don't forget 2 comment and rate!


Something was missing. Something big, like my heart! I couldn't find it. I got up from my own screams. I couldn't breathe. He wasn't there to hold me in his cold hands. He wasn't there anymore. I doubted if he would ever come back. I was thinking of everything I could do to get to him. Tears came down of my face and dropped on my pillow as I tried to stand up and go to the bathroom. Charlie was already downstairs so I hurried and made him breakfast. I didn't eat anything like the past 6 months and I could say that he was mad.

"Bella, I'm gonna send you home! That's it!"

I burst into tears as he said the words.

"But... You can't do this! You just can't..."

Subs didn't let me talk. Charlie was red and he was looking straight into my eyes.

"Bella, Renee can take good care of you! Honestly, everyday of this 6 months you're mopping around, doing everything but in face doing NOTHING!"

"He's gone! I know you liked him very much but isn't this too much?!"

I screamed:

"No... for your information DAD, it's NOT!"

I took my backpack and got out of the house. It was raining already. When I saw the clouds, I suddenly smiled. He liked the weather like this... I guess!

"Hey, Bella!"

Mike and Jessica called my name when I was getting out of my car.

"Did you study Math?! We have an exam!"

I nodded without thinking to math. We gave the test and then it was time for biology class. His seat was empty.

After school, I went shopping for a pair of jeans. His favorite color was blue, so I wanted a pair of blue jeans.

I was on my way to home when I saw Cullen's house road. I didn't know what to do. I didn't know if I would die there when I see their rooms empty. with no COLD ONES!

I turned around and decided to go home. I wanted to be strong. But... who was there for me to make me be strong for him?! As I went in my room I recognized something under the carpet of my room. I went closer and got the papers out from there. The title was:

"Last part of me"

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Hope U like it... don't forget 2 comment and rate! Thnx! :D
posted 27 days ago.
 
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kiss
Ohhhh, sounds interesting hon!
I can't wait for more, it was awesome!
I loved it!
posted 27 days ago.
 
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plz write more sounds brillant!!^_^
posted 27 days ago.
 
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_madz_ said:
write more!! i want to know what happens next!! this it great :)
posted 26 days ago.
 
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golie! love it
p.s dont steal u know what i mean!(hehehe)
love ya sis!
posted 25 days ago.
 
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gurunduce said:
this sounds really interesting! please continue!
posted 24 days ago.
 
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cici1264 said:
love it.
keep on writing
posted 24 days ago.
 
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Awesome!
I can't wait to read more!
posted 24 days ago.
 
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kiss
Awwwww that's amazing! Sad but yet.... I don't know...Can't fing words:P Please write more:)
posted 23 days ago.
 
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thats reallly good. please keep writing,and as ashesndwine said, its sad but amazing!!!
great job and please send me the next story! (:
posted 23 days ago.
 
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kiss
AWESOME
posted 20 days ago.
 
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LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks for the link!!
posted 14 days ago.
 
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