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Edwards POV: Honeymoon talk: Jake and Bella

Opinion by j1edwardcullen7 posted 11 months ago
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    I was talking shortly with Carlisle, Esme, and Alice about the honeymoon arrangements, when I heard a apprihensive, breathless thought coming from someone only familiar in an aggrivating way. His thoughts state-of-mind were frightened, rigid, and angry. Painful. The thoughts were concerning Bella and my honemoon. They were horrified --- and I felt a pang of being loathed. A familiar feeling of being detested, yet this one was overwhelming. Consuming, and exasperating to even listen. Whoever's mind it was, was working so quickly not I, nor him could understand what he was thinking. Only that he would do anything... anything to kill me. It was then I realized it was Jacob Black who had these thoughts. If I had it my way, that volital mongrel would be slaughtered, but my wife, Bella, would be hurt, and I will never hurt her again.
    The next thing I knew, I heard a whimper from Bella. I was instantly upright, and on edge. "Ow, Jake! Let go!" She cried. Not shortly after came, "Jake --- stop!" I was already running, and I already met her. My nostrils flared with fury, and a firey passion to kill.
    "TAKE YOUR HANDS OFF OF HER!" I growled, mortified that his presence was not a liability I was allowed to destroy. Because in destroying him, I'd destroy Bella, therefore, destroying me, dammit! If there were any rights to me killing this infernal excuse for a newbie mutt... my voice echoed off of the empty-walled outdoors, patronizing him, hopefully sending fear into his bones. His thin, breakable bones I would like to scatter in a pit. Sam... no, Jared... one of the two howled sharply, causing a thin diversion...
    "Jake, bro, back away, you're losing it." Seth Clearwater pleads. Knowing I had a liking for young Clearwater, ---without him, I may have been ashes now from protecting Bella from Victoria --- I wouldn't harm him. But if he intervenes, I won't care if he gets injured whilst I kill the pup I'd wanted to kill since I found out he'd been endangering Bella. In my absence, maybe, but, still.
    "You'll hurt her," he whispers. "Let her go." He addds. I couldn't take it anymore. His hand, so tightly gripping Bella's. Enforcing authority only she rightfully held over herself.
    "NOW!" I said, feircly, no longer was I able to contain it. Too fast for any human eyes, and some vampire eyes, I snatched what was rightfully mine - and hers - away from the hairy monster, who had not one ounce of control --- already, the concept of 'sex' between Bella and I was causing delerious werewolves. Imagine what'd take place after such an activity takes place? I nearly shuddered. If I hurt her anymore... I---I don't know what I'll... I choked back thoughts that shouldn't be thought. Thought's that'd make me remorse for having.
    The uninhibeted, unrestrained, radiating hands, wrathfully hot arms on Bella's arms were now, instantantly replaced by the icy, controlled hands, gentle, of my own. I held her against me, and while she regained balance, she shook. Knowing if I were still able to, I would be crying. An ignorant, egotistical reaction that I was glad, unlike humans, did not take place in my tearducts.
    "I'll kill you!" Jacob hoarsely screamed. Clearly the thought of 'it' happening did more than scorch him mentally. He was worried...for Bella. Not that I cared, he was still an immature werewolf who'd hurt my love, Bella, and that was indisputably...--- He would have a better reputation with me, had he not been - if he wasn't in love with my wife. And now I see, not paying much attention to the scene, and realizing, I need to step it up. I can't... I can't do this to Bella. Not while she's human. And... if Jacob's right, then... not ever. I simply cannot do it.
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i loved it! it's nice hearing this scene from edward's pov, especially since i'm craving anything from edward's pov (ehem...midnight sun needs to be completed! hahaha). i liked the words you used. they captured his character very well :)
posted 11 months ago.
 
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Hi! Umm, really, really good! You should do one on the honeymoon! I'd love to hear that in Edward's point of view! Bella didn't go into details enough......
posted 11 months ago.
 
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mischievous
Thanks guys! I am not doing anything else that has to do with "honey moon" because I really find that part tooo graphic... but thank you for the compliments, and all!
posted 10 months ago.
 
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reallly great!!
posted 10 months ago.
 
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i love it write more
posted 10 months ago.
 
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Blossom71 said:
Midnight sun so needs to be wrote!You did great.i liked it alot.
posted 10 months ago.
 
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wow that was so good. please write more
posted 10 months ago.
 
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Hmmmmmm....interesting....i think if there would have been a section from Edwards pov it would have been similar to this. This is good, you should keep writing,your good at it.
posted 9 months ago.
 
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i loved it. it was sweet i rly want Midnight Sun to be written.
posted 9 months ago.
 
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i really like it.it's cute.
posted 9 months ago.
 
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A-D said:
I liked it .. keep it up.
posted 9 months ago.
 
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write more.
posted 9 months ago.
 
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bella422 said:
OME THAT WAS SO GOOD THAT COULD BE WHAT HE WAS RELY THINKING
posted 9 months ago.
 
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dude write more!
posted 8 months ago.
 
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OhMiEdward!! that was so good! u should write more
posted 8 months ago.
 
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i want to hear more of what edward thinks!!!!
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I Really Like This. You Should Write More
posted 8 months ago.
 
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it is great i loved it
posted 8 months ago.
 
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Ali_Cullen12 i agree with you!! amazing fan fic!!!
posted 8 months ago.
 
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rainy
Thanks, but like I said, I won't do that section of the Honey Moon.
I think that it could ruin the whole thing.
And I would do that to show how he felt about hurting her,
but I couldn't do the whole thing where he DOES hurt her.
posted 8 months ago.
 
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wildcatz said:
that was awesome of you to go into detail about what edward felt at the moment.But I like the idea of someone describing edwards feeling while there ony the honey moon.
posted 7 months ago.
 
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rainy
I fixed it...
posted 7 months ago.
 
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mage94 said:
omg! i totally loved it, you are a great writer, please keep writing (:
posted 7 months ago.
 
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great job!!! Luved it!!
posted 6 months ago.
 
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pie-102 said:
I LOVED IT!!!!
posted 6 months ago.
 
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its gr8 2 know everythin els from edwards pov maby u should get in contact with stephenie and help her write the other books
loved it
posted 6 months ago.
 
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That was GREAT!!!
posted 6 months ago.
 
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omg ure....sooo good at ıt!!!!!!!!!!
talk to stephenıe meyer
posted 5 months ago.
 
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Happy2006 said:
This is great you should write more !!!
posted 5 months ago.
 
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I really liked that, I love all of your articles you are a great writer
posted 5 months ago.
 
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Wow, you are a fantastic writer! I really enjoyed reading this. How long have you been writing, you're very talented.
posted 5 months ago.
 
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amazing do more
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Edward000 said:
OMG! That was really good!!!! You should write more!

Talk to Stephenie!
posted 4 months ago.
 
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Talk to Stephenie? How am I supposed to get in contact with her? Lol.
posted 4 months ago.
 
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i loved this it was really good u should do more of this and write cuz i really wanna read more
posted 4 months ago.
 
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Stephenie's web page on all her books. You could get in contact whit her there. I haven't asked her any qutions myself but others have. Oh love the story!
posted 4 months ago.
 
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i cant believe that stephine meye wont write midnight sun, it would be amazing to hear it from edwards side of the story. god damn the person who leaked! but u did a great job, you should write more.
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super omg! you are so cool! keep it up!
posted 4 months ago.
 
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It was awesome to hear Edward's side of the story. I'd like to read more...
posted 4 months ago.
 
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i loved it!!!! write more plz.
posted 4 months ago.
 
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That was very good you captured Edwards charactor but now I want midnight sun really really bad to be published! Im gonna cry!
posted 3 months ago.
 
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I LOVED IT!! i want to read midnight sun now T_T
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LOVE IT ITS SO AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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WOW! That was REALLY good!!
Well done!
U totally captured Edward's train of thought!!
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vampira14 said:
wow. was that Edward's point of view? It was good. I've always wondered what was on his mind. WOW
If there are any more of these, can they be sent to me? Thanx!
posted 3 months ago.
 
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So much detail,wow,whoever wrote this should be a writer.Sounds exactly like Edward.Im rading the entire set of the twilight saga for the 26th time.literally.And that was amazing.If any more are writen please send them to me...thankyou!
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OMG you are a great writer. =) keep writing please
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bellamay said:
I WANT TO EAT CAKE
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Mm, you should go get cake then. XP
posted 3 months ago.
 
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gwen509 said:
i love it but can u add more pleas this is from gwen509 can u please do it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
posted 2 months ago.
 
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