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The Darkness (A Poem)

Opinion by sapherequeen posted 22 days ago
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*Sigh* Okay, this is the first piece of writing I will ever share with anyone. Rarely does the idea of a poem ever enter my dark mind. But tonight, just two minutes ago, this one came to me, and I had to...write...it...down...


I’m aching here
I’m bleeding there

Pain strikes within
My every move

And there’s
Nothing
I Can
Do
To Make It
Stop

The tears roll down my face
And freeze there quickly
And stay until the time comes
Where they are no longer frozen
And begin to stream down again

My hurt was bottled up
But someone broke the bottle
And now it’s
Everywhere
And there’s nothing
I Can
Do
To Heal Myself

I’m stuck in a world
A world too unbearable
To live
To breathe
To smile

A world where everyone
Is like a manikin

They’re perfectly still
They smile all the time
They sit there all the time
They just look at you endlessly
And of course
They never feel

I don’t belong in that world
I have to leave that world
I have to breathe
I want to breathe
All
I Want
Is To Be Free
From the Hurting Zone
From the Dark Zone
The Twilight Zone where I
Am Trapped
Trapped
And Broken

God, please help me
Listen to me

Am I
The Only One
Who Can Feel
Who Can See
Who Will Only Know the Pain Inside of Me

Please God,
What Is My Purpose?



Immediately want to say this is not about me in general. :)


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June4 said:
this is nice and i love it, i'll save it!!!
posted 22 days ago.
 
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sunny
Awww, thank you :D
posted 22 days ago.
 
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rkrahu said:
real think you give that is all of us have
but no one think of that thanks for remembering this
posted 21 days ago.
 
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KusjSann said:
Beautiful poem! I relate to some of the parts: a lot of my friends are like manikins, and i just want to break free from that fake world! So: Loved it!
posted 21 days ago.
 
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lilacool said:
it's pretty
ur like realy talented!
but make it rhyme the next time!
posted 14 days ago.
 
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