Chapter 8.......Garret.....
I was walking to her house an found that Abi was gone....I was worried about her sooo much...I knocked on the door....Her mom answerd..
"Miss Dahlem..."
"yes..."
"Is Abi home..."
"A noo actully she went to your house.."
"What.."
"Sorry..."
"No it's ok..."
I walked away an thought of something bad didn't happen...to her...
I was walking down the hill an I saw Jason he stood there an turned his head...
"Oh god..."
I ran to my house an I locked the door...Then the door was busted down...
I ran to my room but my door would not lock soo I ran to the bathroom an sat in the tube an then I herd some noise an I was scard.....
"Then I breathed heavly then the door busted down....."
"Oh god....!"
He grabbed me an I woke up an I saw Abi laying on the floor with her eye's close...
"Abi..."
I ran to her an I picked her head up an saw the marks on her arm's....
"Oh god plz plz wake up plz..."
Then her eye's were wide open...
"Garret..."
"Oh thank u...Abi...."
I saw her got up an hug me...
"Were are we..."
"Freddys dream..."
"Well thank god ur ok..."
"Oh thats funny...."
I saw freddy an I swolled my spit..
"You to going out well let's say i take her.."
Then Abi's body flung to freddy an he smiled an said.....
"I just doo this...."
Then he stab's her...an she drops...then he comes to me an said
"An do this...."
Then he stab's me I fall an saw nothing but abi in my mind..."
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I was walking to her house an found that Abi was gone....I was worried about her sooo much...I knocked on the door....Her mom answerd..
"Miss Dahlem..."
"yes..."
"Is Abi home..."
"A noo actully she went to your house.."
"What.."
"Sorry..."
"No it's ok..."
I walked away an thought of something bad didn't happen...to her...
I was walking down the hill an I saw Jason he stood there an turned his head...
"Oh god..."
I ran to my house an I locked the door...Then the door was busted down...
I ran to my room but my door would not lock soo I ran to the bathroom an sat in the tube an then I herd some noise an I was scard.....
"Then I breathed heavly then the door busted down....."
"Oh god....!"
He grabbed me an I woke up an I saw Abi laying on the floor with her eye's close...
"Abi..."
I ran to her an I picked her head up an saw the marks on her arm's....
"Oh god plz plz wake up plz..."
Then her eye's were wide open...
"Garret..."
"Oh thank u...Abi...."
I saw her got up an hug me...
"Were are we..."
"Freddys dream..."
"Well thank god ur ok..."
"Oh thats funny...."
I saw freddy an I swolled my spit..
"You to going out well let's say i take her.."
Then Abi's body flung to freddy an he smiled an said.....
"I just doo this...."
Then he stab's her...an she drops...then he comes to me an said
"An do this...."
Then he stab's me I fall an saw nothing but abi in my mind..."
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Freddy
*When Nancy lights Freddy on fire, he is screaming but his mouth is not moving.
*When Nancy first tries to bring Freddy into the real world, her blue phone is on the left side of her bed, but when she wakes up screaming, its on the right.
*When Freddy falls down Nancy;s basement stairs, one of his razor fingers breaks off, but when he gets back up, its back on.
*When Tina falls asleep, Freddy jumps out of a tree behind her, his glove is on his left hand, instead of his right.
So many mistakes! There are more bloopers, but I'm not telling!