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I had to do this for creative writing, and since this site is severely lacking, I figured I'd give it a shot.

For my Creative Writing Class

The Faith Healer

He said to her, “I can cure you.”
Wide eyed and desperate, she believed him. She had been to doctors, and hospitals, and oncologists galore. And his hands were soft, and his eyes inviting. She trembled in his embrace as he tried to soothe her aching fears.
“I’m tired of waiting,” she breathed, her chest rattling with effort.
He kissed her forehead and stroked her hair, holding onto her as if his own life depended on it. She pulled her arms up against her chest, her pallid skin moist with cold sweat as she buried her face in his shoulder and he sang to her, in honey-sweet harmonies, and she felt her agony dissolve into a black pool onto the floor. He laid her gently onto the bed when he felt her stop trembling, but he didn’t let her go because her chest was still rising and falling in a steady, slumbering rhythm. He continued to sing, his amber tones coating her in a blanket of warmth. She had faith, and she trusted him like she trusted God. And soon enough, her chest rose and fell for one last time, and then she remained still.
And he kept his promise.

Haunted

She said, “You know why you’re doing this, don’t you? Because you can never let go otherwise.” But he just closed his eyes and looked away, pretending not to see her. She persisted, but never touched him. “Years and years of devotion. I love you. We had vows. And now, you can’t even look at me. Because you will never let it go.”
She won’t let me, he thought bitterly, but merely shook his head, continuing to ignore her golden hair and piercing gray gaze. He collected his papers and licked his chapped lips, straightening his tie.
“This is our home,” she begged. “Our life. I lived and died in that house. Gordon, please, you love it like I do. I just want to go home again, Gordon. If you do this, I won’t have anywhere to go.”
The sooner I do this, the sooner she will be gone, and the sooner I can mend the pieces of the soul she shattered, he insisted. He took a deep breath and smiled, straightening up in his chair.
She touched him and he felt her ice cold hand on his. “Gordon, you can’t do this to me, to us. We’re supposed to be together forever. Forever is a long time.”
For an instant, he remembered her, how she used to be, young, sweet, free, alive. He remembered the house, the first time he carried her over the threshold, the first time they made love on their bedroom floor because they hadn’t moved in yet, and the time he came home and found her motionless with glass eyes on the couch, staring at something he would never see. And that was all he needed.
He yanked his arm away from her, stood up abruptly and threw the papers down on the table. The men looked at him curiously.
“Burn it to the ground,” he said and left the room.

Bus Stop

She was just sitting there, waiting for the bus, kicking her feet back and forth on the bench as she bit her lip and folded her arms, trying to keep warm. She sighed, and the smoky tendrils of her warm breath lingered momentarily in the air before disappearing. She was sitting on her math textbook in order to avoid touching the bench.
And then he sat down beside her.
Her eyes darted sideways at him, but when he turned his head, they darted away. She felt his eyes lingering on her shoulders, so turned her head tentatively to glance at him bashfully, and he looked away sharply. She’d skipped breakfast. He offered her a granola bar. She suggested they split it.
They smiled.
Soon enough, Eric, who was in the sixth grade, came a long, and started to tease them both. He moved a little further down the bench and she hung her head low, her face burning as Eric called her a nerdy little fourth-grader with a puppy dog crush.
And then, the bus came. She looked up at him, but he avoided her eyes. Eric got on the bus first and she followed, tears welling in her eyes. But as she took her first step on the bus, she felt something small and cold slip into her bare hands. She looked down and saw that it was his raw, pink hand that was clasping hers.
They smiled.

Ambulance

It started very simply. I crashed. It was eerie… and then all I could think of was the pain. Yeah, they say you go all spiritual and see bright lights and noises, have your life flash before your eyes… No. You feel the pain. You’d think there’d be more. I wanted to see my life flash before my eyes, I wanted to see a light at the end of the tunnel, I wanted to hear crazy voices. But it hurt too much to think.
“We need to take him upstairs.”
“I’ll call surgery and get them ready.”

You see, I can’t tell you what it’s like right before you die. Maybe it’s the same, maybe it’s different for everyone. But it’s personal. I can’t tell you because… Well, I’m not really here to do that. If you think about it, I’m not really here at all.
“I don’t know how much more this kid can take. We may need to call it.”
“No. Not again.”

You see, I’m not really talking to you. I can’t be. I guess I’m a figment of your imagination. Because I’m dead, Mom. You can’t really talk to me anymore.
“What do we tell his parents?”
But you know, it’s not so bad. Just don’t worry about it, Mom. I left you a poem in a drawer in my end table. It’s not very good, and it’s only one line, but it’s all I’ve got. It says, “I love you.”
“That’s it, we’ve done all we can.”
“Call it.”
“Time of death, 12:03.”


El Salvador

Jessica packed her bags at five in the morning with a few changes of clothes, her passport, her toothbrush, and a photograph of her dead father. She crept downstairs to the kitchen where she turned on the light and saw her mother sitting there, in a blue terrycloth robe, nursing her coffee as she watched Jessica. Jessica swallowed, but held her head high as she repositioned her backpack and headed to the fridge where she took out a loaf of bread, two apples, two oranges and three bananas. When she had packed all this in her bag, she turned to her mother and asked her for money.
“What will you do with it?” her mother asked.
“I’m running away to El Salvador,” she said.
Her mother blinked, her face inscrutable, and she slid an envelope across the kitchen table. Jessica took it and put it in her backpack. As she headed for the door, her mother called after her. “I’ll miss you, baby.”
Jessica hesitated for less than a second before leaving without a second glance at her mother.
Several hours later, the sun had risen, and tired and tearful, Jessica stumbled through the front door and tripped, landing in her mother’s arms, who held Jessica tightly as she cried.

The Charlatan of the Charleston Theater

He was the best actor they would never hire, or so he claimed to everyone who bothered to ask why he sat outside of the charred, dilapidated building. It had been abandoned for decades, and yet he always offered to take your tickets as you passed by. Most walk right by him without a second thought. I used to do the same.
And then one day, he called me Isabelle.
“My name is Claire,” I told him simply, quietly, discreetly, hoping that maybe I could be on my way. He made me nervous, this shaggy vagabond that reeked of old milk.
“Isabelle,” he repeated, latching onto my arm. “You walk by me everyday, and I never told you I’m sorry.”
There was desperation etched deep in his arctic blue eyes, and it reached out frozen hands and gripped my stomach, tying it into knots. “Let me buy you a drink,” I muttered, suddenly overwhelmed with compassion as I enveloped his hand in both of mine.
And so he did, and I asked him the questions no one dared to ask a dangerous vagrant. He told me how after his tenth audition, he had set fire to the theater. Three people sustained severe burns, and one had died, but to this day he had never confessed, and had never been convicted of arson. At the bottom of the bottle, he gazed at me, with softer eyes and a sweet smile.
“Thank you for forgiving me, Isabelle,” he whispered, his voice haggard and rough. “I remember the line you said in rehearsal as Joan of Arc, before the fire started. You said, ‘No one could ever love anything as much as I love God.’ Well, I just wanted to tell you, Isabelle… God could never love, as much as I love you.”



Feel free to critique. I'm no softy. Promise.
posted by BuffyFaithFan1
CHAPTER ONE: PEACE OFFERING

CAN YOU TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF?" My mom asked me at the front door.
"Mom, I'll be fine!" I told her.
"Are you sure? I can stay home with you and Jared if you want." She asked again, and this time it sounded like she was hoping I'd say "no, don't go...stay here with me and tuck me into bed and tell me stories to go to sleep to."
"Mom, go! Have a great time! We will be fine!" I said and Jared shook his head in approval.
"Alright!" She said and she kissed my forhead once more, did the same to Jared, and then out the door to her taxi that awaited her she went. Jared...
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posted by SMackedLove
My black rose
My black rose
I AM!

I am not nice but I feel.
I wonder but I don't know
what about.
I hear people talking but I never know what they say.
I see many thinks but never know what I'm looking at.
I want people to look to the past but not dwell on it.
I pretend to be something I'm not.
I fell things i cant see.
I touch and the smoothest things feel rough.
I worry that the day will never end.
I cry but tears never come.
I understand that not ever ones the same.
I say something i don't mean.
I dream but only see blackness.
I hope that someday someone we'll see through my shield I put up and see me.
I am not nice but i feel.
I am who I am!
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posted by Gabstaaa
Ok Guys! First story ever. Please dont be kind. Tell whats wrong with it and if you like it or not. This is just to see how many people will read it.


The bright and blinding light streamed through the gap in the curtains. The light woke Mary as it shined proudly on her pale, white morning face. She rolled over only to see an empty space in the double bed. She was used to this but every morning she just couldn’t resist the nagging temptation to check if her loving husband was there waiting for her to wake. If only he was there with his soft butterscotch eyes and her favourite crooked smile...
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posted by UnderdogAsh
Chapter 6
Guess Who’s coming
To Dinner?

    When I was unconscious, I had a weird dream. In this dream, Lux and I found a piece of the Triforce ourselves, but the triangle was upside down, compared to how the other two were on the Triforce. I decided to touch this piece, which exploded into a surge of electricity and all that electricity went into me. I looked down at my right hand and the full Triforce was on it, but only the middle was glowing.
    Suddenly, Zelda and Link appeared and their hands, Zelda’s right and Link’s left, were glowing and they...
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posted by HaleyDewit
I’ve got something to say
But it’s best to keep it away
Pretending to be made of concrete
But you caused the cracks to show
Now I can’t hide them anymore
And I need you to feel how I feel

I’m tiptoeing around the subject
‘Cause I’m too afraid to be rejected

And you don’t see
What it’s like for me
Wanted this for so long
And now I can’t have it
And you don’t know
How it’s to feel so small
I’ve waited for so long
But I still can’t have it


I’ve got something on my mind
But it’s best to keep it inside
Pretending my eyes aren’t shedding tears
But you caused the tears to flow
You’ve...
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posted by HaleyDewit
I never thought I’d see the light
After all the times I died
But I found a reason to be alive
And now I can’t help but smile all the time

But there’s dilemma in my heart
And it’s tearing me apart
But even though we’ll never be together
I’ll love you forever

I can’t remember if I have ever felt this way before
It’s been too long
It was gone
But you brought it back once more
And even if our lives never intertwine
I won’t erase you from my mind
I’ve hurt enough
I choose love
To end my endless torture


I always believed I’d stay in the dark
Holding the pieces of my broken heart
But I found a...
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posted by HaleyDewit
I’m quiet on the outside
An all-wrecking, raging storm on the inside
I can’t speak,
Because I fear I can only produce inhuman cries
But my inner screams overwhelm any external sound
I don't blame you for not seeing behind my hollow eyes
I don't blame you for not hearing anything but silence
And I don't blame you for not feeling my heart breaking in my chest, over and over again
But I wish you would just hold me, and tell me I'll be okay.
That somehow, this all-consuming pain is not going to kill me.
That I will come out of this, stronger.
I wish I could distance myself from this destruction,
But I belong in the center of the hurricane
Because I need this pain, like I need oxygen
So, let my ravel in my agony,
Without it I am nothing
posted by OfmiceandDes
Hi, My name is Tanya
Nobody knows anything about me. They have a good reason though: In my entire life, I haven't spoken a single word
People call me many things: Weirdo, freak, attention getter, and I just let it all sink in. I let all the bad thoughts store up inside me until I lose it. Don't think I can't talk, I just choose not to. Nobody seems to care for what I have to say. If you are lucky, you will hear a sound com from my mouth, but never any words.
My name is Tanya
I look like your typical 15 year old girl. My hair is light brown with blonde highlights. I'm not fat, but I'm not too...
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posted by CrimsonDeath14
Chapter 1:The begaining

It started with the fighting,the endless fighting.It was mid Febuary 2001 when a couple with a small boy and another child on the way,split.They had been aurguing for hours on end and the husband,Jason,decided to leave and live with a friend for a while.While the wife,Sandra,cried and wept to no avail Jason left.Jason had contracted pnemonia and was placed in a hospital only days after his fight with Sandra.Sandra was also in the hospital but for a different reason,she had given birth to a girl named Emily.And that was the begaining of Emily's life,a life full of sadness and missery that will come to a halt and be cut short by the evil hands of fate and the mind.
posted by juliet98
Julia beacame a women when she was 12. After she felt powerless for the first time in her little life. It was a sunny day, but in the hearts of the people it was dark. The country was entering in the war, and many youth had to prepare for the battle. Julia and her family, her mom, her dad, and her brother were having lunch. they were silent, Julia behaved badly, she argued with her brother and wanted him to desappear. Suddenly somebody knocked on the door. Her dad opened it and came back in the kitchen with a tall man they didn't know. He was wearing a dark coat and black boots. He talked with...
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posted by rainchibi
The constant pecking on the window awoke me. I opened my eyes to the darkness of the room. The dark haze enveloped any sign of light, leaving only traces of thin outlines. A tinged of excitement and fear passed through me. The ticking of the clock just added to the anxiety that was crawling over me. I knew it had come, like it had many nights before. It was then I noticed that the pecking I had heard before had stopped, only to be replaced by the howls of the winter winds. I sat up to see the binds swaying back and forth. Through the cracks I saw the shadow that had awaken me many nights before,...
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posted by rainchibi
A silhouette standing alone,
Amongst a field of arid snow,
Waiting for something still unknown,
Not any further from the tombstone.

Awaiting a sign of life and hope,
Letting out a deep sigh,
“It’s not getting any easier to cope”
A whisper carried by the wind.

The stars: my aspirations,
But city lights in the distance,
Taunted it from their foundations,
Caustic lights ending its existence.

An unattached shadow standing in solitude,
Amongst a field of caustic cold,
Tired of waiting, wanting to end,
I was everything untold.
posted by amoremusic
tell me why do you pretend
to let the agonizing memories
of your damaged past let you
be the person that you are
now,

please let your body,
mind, heart, soul,and
feelings escape the
tragic night-mares and
feel my: "etreindre de'
amour" around you for-
ever.

my etreindre de' amour
is what i can offer to you,
through this time that you
will feel from me.

will you feel my ever-
lasting touch of love as
you grieve over the lost
memories and moments
that you never gotten back.

let me take your
emphasized wounds
and give them to the
crumbling world that
never lets you feel the
love that you need to
feel in your life now.

but you look for my
casual-words that will
give you strength that
you need to go on with
your life.

your endless obession
for living this lie trying
to get past this pain, that
will forever remains inside
your soul now.