Hi... STILL new here, and I have a creative writing camp over summer, and I was wondering if this is a good poem.
Cursed by Marrisa Richards
When you have been cursed, your life turns around. The skies tun gray and the fire burns your soul.
No one can save you from this darkness
Except yourself
Run, hide, hurry! Save yourself and don't get damaged
They will come for you if you are weak
They will come for you if you are strong
It's not a dream; nothing's ever a dream
So wake up
Now before they come
Now, you have waited to long you must let the beast feed into your soul.
Thanks!!!!!! :D
Cursed by Marrisa Richards
When you have been cursed, your life turns around. The skies tun gray and the fire burns your soul.
No one can save you from this darkness
Except yourself
Run, hide, hurry! Save yourself and don't get damaged
They will come for you if you are weak
They will come for you if you are strong
It's not a dream; nothing's ever a dream
So wake up
Now before they come
Now, you have waited to long you must let the beast feed into your soul.
Thanks!!!!!! :D
(Yeah it Doesn't rhyme but that's because its a SONG and it sounds so much better sung then read :])
I don't want to be a burden
But I can feel my life is burning
Someone please put out the flames
I can't take the heat
I need a cold release
I'm begging, put me down
I can't take the feeling
It's more than I can handle
The flames too bright
Scorching my life
I need to feel nothing again
I try to grab the water
But color burns my eyes
I recede into the darkness
Where the pain isn't so high
I'm trapped inside the blaze
I'm trapped inside the blaze
You try to help. To heal
But all who try must pay
The fire throws you back
It owns me now
You run while you still can
Cause I'm trapped inside the blaze
I'm trapped inside the blaze
I can't take the feeling
It's more than I can handle
I choke on smokey air
I need to feel nothing again
But I will never get the privilege
I'm trapped inside the blaze (And I'll never get out)
I'm trapped inside the blaze
And I'll NEVER get out.
I don't want to be a burden
But I can feel my life is burning
Someone please put out the flames
I can't take the heat
I need a cold release
I'm begging, put me down
I can't take the feeling
It's more than I can handle
The flames too bright
Scorching my life
I need to feel nothing again
I try to grab the water
But color burns my eyes
I recede into the darkness
Where the pain isn't so high
I'm trapped inside the blaze
I'm trapped inside the blaze
You try to help. To heal
But all who try must pay
The fire throws you back
It owns me now
You run while you still can
Cause I'm trapped inside the blaze
I'm trapped inside the blaze
I can't take the feeling
It's more than I can handle
I choke on smokey air
I need to feel nothing again
But I will never get the privilege
I'm trapped inside the blaze (And I'll never get out)
I'm trapped inside the blaze
And I'll NEVER get out.