Mermaid Melody Article: first sight of love

posted by ladybat

(i dont know why i like that yellow haired mermaid princess,i alredy have a girlfriend,destiny)im gonna go help ranfa,see you later lady bat!ok.so what do you need help on?i dont know what to wear today!!!!but you wear the same thing..........but todays diffrent.ok,i think you should wear a pink strapless short dress with fluffon top.thanks.no problem(.back to lady bat)i need to go see coco.(but what if destiny gets mad)what are you thinking?oh nothing.im your girlfriend tell me.fine i think i like coco.are you mad?....no,you can be with coco.as many girl friend you like.riaght now shes in her palace.go see her i will com with you.ok.

SymmaGirl2 Sorry, but this was horrible. I can't tell what the heck is going on, I don't know who is telling the story, I can't even tell when someone is speaking or not. It's gonna take a lot of improvement to make this worth reading. You completely murdered the three most important elements of writing: Grammar Spelling Punctuation Here, this is a great website for improving your writing. It has a grammar check, a spelling check, and a punctuation check. http://www.grammarly.com/?q=grammar&gclid=CIz-ibmhma4CFacbQgodM0CFIg

ladybat you hurted my feelings

ladybat i am senitive by feelings

SymmaGirl2 Good for you. Welcome to the Internet.

ladybat18 Hi i am new here.I like lady bat to,but im sorry to tell you but this is bad.

Alice2424 Me to I'm also new here.