ok so heres a sample of the story im writing for wattpad:
Marias POV
Ive been waiting on Chre to come down for yearsssss now.He my brother my very concieted brother I understand its the first day of school but if my ass can come down on time so can he i mean dude your cute but come on now. I waited for about 5 more minutes before i was about to get up and drag his ass down here when my dad came in the door with a bottle in his hand
"hey baby girl" he said with slurred words
"hey dad" i said non chalantly
"come on ihaven't seen you in a g-good little while girve your daddy a kiss" he said as he was getting closer and closer to me
"dad your drunk" "come on just one little peck" he said quickly grabbing my hair and pulling backwards so my neck would cock back i could smell the achohol on his breathe
"no dad" i said trying my best to push him away
"give me a kiss NOW you little bitch" he pinned me down i was about to scream when chre FINALLY decided to show up
"AYE get the fuck off of her" he said running down the stairs and pushing dad to the floor
"hey theres my boy" dad said taking a sip from the bottle
"tis, the fuck" he said shaking his head "you ok ria go to the car i be there in a minute i gotta help this SORRY EXCUSE FOR A FATHER " he said making sure dad heard the key words i mean when he's actually sober for once he's the best dad ever...but that doesn't happen often. I did as i as told and ran to the car and waited for chre to come out. He finally came out and came to the car "are you sure your ok ria?" he said with a sincer apologetic look on his face which instantly made me smile he's one of the only people in this world who TRULY cares about me "yeah im fine" i said with a smile on my face. He smiled and backed out of the drive way, on our way to school 'no new friends' by drake came on and roc instantly started rapping and singing over it. Hes so talented with really anything that has to do with music. Of course i started rapping with him we both really have a passion for music to be truthful danceing to. We finally pulled up to school we saw chre's boys outside talking so we walked up to them.
OK sooooo this is just part of it and I want your opinion on whether or not I should continue or just start over GOOD OR BAD? comment pweaseee pplzzzz it mght be horrible I haven't wrote in like forever but tell meeee BYEEEE
Marias POV
Ive been waiting on Chre to come down for yearsssss now.He my brother my very concieted brother I understand its the first day of school but if my ass can come down on time so can he i mean dude your cute but come on now. I waited for about 5 more minutes before i was about to get up and drag his ass down here when my dad came in the door with a bottle in his hand
"hey baby girl" he said with slurred words
"hey dad" i said non chalantly
"come on ihaven't seen you in a g-good little while girve your daddy a kiss" he said as he was getting closer and closer to me
"dad your drunk" "come on just one little peck" he said quickly grabbing my hair and pulling backwards so my neck would cock back i could smell the achohol on his breathe
"no dad" i said trying my best to push him away
"give me a kiss NOW you little bitch" he pinned me down i was about to scream when chre FINALLY decided to show up
"AYE get the fuck off of her" he said running down the stairs and pushing dad to the floor
"hey theres my boy" dad said taking a sip from the bottle
"tis, the fuck" he said shaking his head "you ok ria go to the car i be there in a minute i gotta help this SORRY EXCUSE FOR A FATHER " he said making sure dad heard the key words i mean when he's actually sober for once he's the best dad ever...but that doesn't happen often. I did as i as told and ran to the car and waited for chre to come out. He finally came out and came to the car "are you sure your ok ria?" he said with a sincer apologetic look on his face which instantly made me smile he's one of the only people in this world who TRULY cares about me "yeah im fine" i said with a smile on my face. He smiled and backed out of the drive way, on our way to school 'no new friends' by drake came on and roc instantly started rapping and singing over it. Hes so talented with really anything that has to do with music. Of course i started rapping with him we both really have a passion for music to be truthful danceing to. We finally pulled up to school we saw chre's boys outside talking so we walked up to them.
OK sooooo this is just part of it and I want your opinion on whether or not I should continue or just start over GOOD OR BAD? comment pweaseee pplzzzz it mght be horrible I haven't wrote in like forever but tell meeee BYEEEE
ookkaay im finally gonna start writing my story now after a long wait sorry to thoez people who were waiting!!!!!
oh nd btw here r some things u may need to know
Mandem means people its british slang nd any other words that I write in this story that u may not understand I will write da meaning.
for the next chappie i'm changing the name of dis story to Love At First Sight
the places in this story will be in England coz I don't know many places in America coz ive never been there
MB nd their girlfriends live in England but will be visiting America now and then
k bye im gonna start now
oh nd btw here r some things u may need to know
Mandem means people its british slang nd any other words that I write in this story that u may not understand I will write da meaning.
for the next chappie i'm changing the name of dis story to Love At First Sight
the places in this story will be in England coz I don't know many places in America coz ive never been there
MB nd their girlfriends live in England but will be visiting America now and then
k bye im gonna start now