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I'm the freak, I got another idea for a story. But this time, I thought through the whole story line (unlike Switched, which is why I didn't write it for so long, sorry). Please comment and please tell me if you like it. If you do, I'll continue it :)


I sat in the airplane seat, too anxious and worried.
"You need to calm down." Alice said. "The plane won't get any faster, Edward!"
I couldn't help it, the plane ride is getting me nervous. I drummed my fingers on the sides of the seats.
"I can't help but worry, Alice. I would rather jump out this plane and run to Forks instead."
"Well, a plane is faster than running. We just need to wait, we will arrive at Seattle in about 10 minutes."
I groaned.

We finally arrived at Seattle and ran as fast as we could, vampire speed, to La Push.
"EDWARD! THE TREATY!" Alice yelled.
I ignored her. I rather have a war with the mongrels rather than loose her.
"BELLA! I yelled once we past the border.
I didn't see anyone at the cliff. No....

I heard Alice sobbing and saw one of the dogs coming by. I won't let myself believe what just happened.
"We were too late..." Alice whispered in between her sobs.
Then my world crashed right in front of my eyes.

What do you think? Are you guys confused?
Ok, here's the deal, Edward heard about Bella jumping off the cliff. This goes back to New Moon. But instead of Edward going to the Volturi, he tries to go to La Push and stop Alice's vision from happening. So here's the thing: Bella's dead.
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For certain comments, *winks* I thought who should be Bella's roommate. I hope you like the idea! ^_^


The dorm was larger than expected. My eyes were wide with shock. I'm not even sure this is a dorm! It could be as large as my living room back in Phoenix. There was one large white couch in the center of the room in front of me facing the wall. On the wall was a flat screen TV. I check the number on the dorm. Room 34. Yeah, I'm in the right room. Is this the type of dorm that everyone has? On the left side on the room was one twin-sized bed and on the right, was another twin sized bed. Under...
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Change of plans I think I will put 2 more articles up today. I don't know.... stay tuned! ^_^

Bella's POV


We went back to the hotel in less than a minutes. Apparently we didn't bring much, but Rosalie brought her make-up, hair-curlers, and her mirror, so that took a little bit. Carlisle already bought the tickets to go to Phoenix.
"Shall we head back to Phoenix?" Edward said while reaching for my hand. I took it without second thoughts. Then Edward eyed the engagement ring on my finger.
"I thought you were not into jewelry." Edward said.
I sighed.
"Soon enough others will have to know that I'm...
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Ok, I'm planning to write one more article today. Hope you enjoy this! ^_^


In Alice's vision, I see Victoria in the forest right near Forks. Alice's face was completely blank, and I controlled my expression so Angela and Ben won't be wondering what's going on. We still have a secret to protect, the only exception was Bella.
"Alice? Alice!" Angela yelled while moving her hands back and forth in front of Alice's face. I stopped looking at the horror-strucked vision and pretended that it was not a big deal. I didn't need Bella to get worried. I won't let anything happen to her.

I made a casual...
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I will write Evening Star tommorrow! Promise! Oh and BTW: Thank you ashesandwine for finding the awesome new banner for this spot!!! ^_^


The guy stared at me with his golden eyes. I couldn't recognize, desire? I shuddered mentally. I glared at him back, he was frozen as a statue, and so was I. Then he broke away from the gaze and turned around. I frowned. What was that about? Did I have something in between my teeth? Is my outfit messy or something? I turned around to Angela.
"Is there something that makes me stand out?" I asked her.
"Uh, you pretty much stick into the crowd pretty well. The...
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Renesmee's engagement ring
Renesmee's engagement ring
Hmmm... nothing to say really. Well, enjoy! ^_^


Renesmee's POV


I might as well faint. I didn't expect something like this to happen. But Jake was waiting for my answer him. Could I say no without hurtung his feelings? Or can I say yes, knowing the consequences since I'm only 16? Weighting the choices. my garantee my father will be furious, but I love Jake so much, and I want to spend the rest of eternity with him. Without making any better judgements. I smiled sincerely at him and siad the one qord that will make both of our worlds change, not sure for the better or for the worse.

"Yes." I...
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I'll see how many articles I'll put up today. Enjoy! ^_^


Bella's POV


Everyone smiled at Anastasia.
"You quited the Volturi?" Alice asked.
"Yes." she said.
"But you went to them when we asked you to make a choice." Alice asked confused.
Anastasia took a deep breath.
"I know. I know that I have made the wrong choice in the past, and I'm sorry about that. But when I saw the Volturi were about to kill you guys, I realized that my choice was wrong. I turned my back on the Volturi and tried to help you guys. I realized that I should be with my family." Anastasia admitted.
I smiled.
"You are already a...
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Thanks the suggestion of Emmett4ever and I_Love_Cullen, we'll make this story the genre of romance/comedy. Do you like that? I hope so! ^_^

I stared at Angela and back to Lauren.
"What's the history between you two?" I asked them.
"Well, Angela is known as the geek of the school." Lauren explained.
"Well, Lauren is known as the brat and the person who uses way too much makeup." Angela glowered.
They glowered at each other for a few more minutes and I groaned.
"If you guys want to fight, fight once we land. There are too many witnesses around!" I whispered urgently.

But then Lauren sprayed something...
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*Chanting to myself "keep on writing" over and over again.* Ok, here's the next chapter of Evening Star! ^_^


As usual, at night, I sticked by Bella's side, watching her sleep in peace. It made me smile when she said my name over and over again. Sometimes she make full sentences saying, "I love you, Edward."
I kissed her forehead, and said, "I never get tired of you saying saying that, I will always love you too."
As if she could hear me, she smiled slightly and drifted into deeper sleep.
I rubbed her arm, letting her know that I will never leave her out of my sight again.

******

It was already...
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I might put up another article today, but I can't promise. ^_^


Renesmee's POV


I was surprised by how fast this car can drive. It was blowing my hair behind me. I smiled. I couldn't wait until I get my lincence. It would be a great exprience.
"Happy birthday, Nessie." Jacob said, while driving and he kissed me. I wished the kiss could be longer, but Jacob was drving. I sighed, but smiled to hide what I felt.

But in the middle of the forest, Jacob stopped driving. I looked at him in surprise. In front of us was a hiking trail.
"We are going hiking?" I asked.
"We are, but it's not much, there's...
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Still not sure how many articles I'll put up today. But let's hope that my writing marathon will keep on going! ^_^


I looked around, for my seat, K13. Angela already found her seat.
"I'll meet you once we are out of the plane." Angela told me.
I smiled. "Sure thing."
I took my seat, and settled. I got the window seat. I took out the book, Wuthering Heights and began reading. So far, no one took the seat next to me. I'm praying that I'll have this row to myself. I wasn't the talkative type, and I like to have privacy. But then I groaned quietly when a girl took a seat nect to me. She was about...
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Combining MAJOR writer's block and 6 hours of swimming, I'm sorry that I didn't write yesterday. I'm not so sure how many aritcles I will put up today. Let see ^_^


Bella's POV


I thought I was dead, for sure, I heard voices, voices of my family and Tom. Is this heaven, or is this hell? Surprisingly, it didn't feel as much different as if I was living. I got my sight back, and now we were all outside. I was confused at the scenery at first, but then I saw Anastasia and the rest of the Volturi arguing. Edward, Tom, and the rest of the Cullens were still knocked out. I put my shield up, and everyone's...
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Last article for today! ^_^


Bella's POV


I was surprised that Anastasia stayed with the Volturi. I was also upset. What did the Volturi have that we didn't? My are narrowed, feeling betrayed. So that was why Edward was acting so wierd before. I couldn't blame him.

"So, this is the end for this human?" Aro asked to no one intentionally. He sighed.
Then I saw Jane glaring at Tom.
Tom made a loud scream. I flinched and made the shield so it wouldn't affect him. Though, I knew it would last long.
"Anastasia." Jane commanded.
Anastasia stared at me for a long minute, with an agonized expression. But...
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It turns out I will have to work on this story myself.... I'm sorry Emmett4ever!!! People are such a pain with rules these days..... *mutters to myself*

"Bells!" my mother, Renee yelled, before I went out the door.
"Yes?" I asked him. Did I forget anything?
"I hope you have fun in college." she said while giving me a hug.
"Mom, it's not I'm going to leave forever. I'll be back for Christmas and for Summer." I said.
"I know Bella, it will be hard for me to be alone again. I'll miss you." she said.
"I will too mom. I'll send you an email once I arrive." I assured her.
"Bye!" Mom said, waving at...
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I'm getting to miss this story. Thank you so much for the request for wanting me to continue this! Ok... those who have never read this story....

Chapter 1 - link

Chapter 2 - link

Hmmm.... Ok, let's keep on going! ^_^


Renesmee's POV


I woke up in the morning, and smiled. I looked out the window, and it was a nice weather. I guess this will be an awesome birthday! I took a shower, got dressed and ran down the stairs, anxious to see what my family have done and what surprise Aunt Alice have given me.

"HAPPY BIRTHDAY NESSIE!!" Alice screamed and gave me a hug.
Behind Aunt Alice, I saw a cake, streamers,...
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This will be the only one for today!
PS: Those who are wating for The Fantasy Doesn't End, But it Might, I PROMISE I will write it tommorrow! I need to reread the story to know where I left off. Thx for understanding! ^_^



Bella's POV

Anastasia had a terrified expression on her face. I was a little worried or her. Then I remember about Edward's special ability.
"What's she thinking about?" I whispered to him.
"She's panicking. She's also weighting her options." he whispered back.
Then suddenly, Edward's jaw clenched together, and his hands were in fists.
"What-" I was about to say, but then...
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I will see how many I will write today. ^_^

Bella's POV


The pain, felt like my head was burning all over again. This pain hurts more. I turned to Edward, who was still listening. I got annoyed and thought of something to say in my mind.
PLZ MAKE HER STOP! I screamed in my thoughts.
Edward flinched. Then I screamed for real and I was gasping heavily. Anastasia had a surprised expression.

"Are you doing this?" Carlisle asked.
"No..I only opened up her mind, that's all. I didn't expect it to cause her this much pain." she said confused.
"Anastasia, stop." Edward said to her.
Then the pain disapeared....
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