Oh, Pokemon. It was one of the things I loved so much in my childhood other then Zelda. IT has its own games, toys, trading cards, TV shows, manga, and, in this case, fan fictions. This show had lost of fanfictions. Some good like No Antidote, the Pokemon Rebellion, and The Midsummer Knight's Dream. Then there was the bad ones like Pokemon Ultiment (Yes the spelling of Ultimate was messed up on purpose. That's how its spelled) Forever Mine, and Darkest Night........ Then..... There's The Pokemon Story.
This has to be, without a doubt, the worst fanfic I have ever read. Worse then Trixie's Funhouse. Worse then Rini's Horrible Death. Hell, even worse then My Immortal. the supposed worse fanfic ever written. Yeah right. If those people read this fanfic, I'm sure they'd change there mind. And remember my review for Rini's Horrible Death when I said Serena was not the worst character in Fanfiction history. No, that would go to David. And he's supposed to be the protagonist. Fan-fucking-tastic. Let's just get this review over with. So we start off with our (Ahem) "Protagonist" walking through the rain... for some reason. What, is everyone a pokemon trainer now. Anyway, he lets his Gradevoir... If you don't know which Pokemon that is, I'll leave you an image. Anyway, he then says how Pokemon would do anything for there trainers. And he means anything... If you don't like where this is going, then that's a good thing. Also, I just want to let you know, this is where you should leave. Trust me, this is where the fanfic gets really bad, and it will only get worse from here.
Anyway, David starts to... rape Gradevoir. Yes, sadly, he rapes her, to which she doesn't take kindly to. She scratches him, and, being the selfish dick that he is, punches her in the mouth, causing her to have brain damage. And, he doesn't even care. Even after getting done with raping her, he says her brain damage makes her the perfect sex slave....... What? You just raped and pretty much permanently made your Pokemon retarded and yet, you won't get her help, because your more worried about your sexual needs........ I fucking hate this guy, a lot. But, he actually gets worse from here on out. He actually does get help for Gradevoir, because she is sick and could die... But, he's not doing it because he cares. No, only actual humans would take someone to the hospital because they cared. This monster only took her there because she was the "Perfect Sex Slave" and he'd just live a sexless life without... Wow, your an asshole, David.
So, while he waits for her to get better, his urges begin... My god, bunnies have sex less then you. So, who does he rape... Yes, I use rape here... A little girl.......... Yes, he rapes a little kid right after raping and brain damaging his Pokemon... This guy is a fucking monster. He is just as bad as Hitler. Not even Satan would stoop so low as to do the things this guy has done. This guy just needs to die, and fast. Anyway, while he's raping the little girl, her father comes by... Only to be manipulated to rape his own daughter as well....... God, this fanfic is fucking disgusting in every way possible. So, David, the fucking abomination of a human being, decides he wants to be in pain... What? Why? That is just random... By the way, any male readers, you may not want to read the next part. It's not pretty. But, if you do, just remember I warned you.
David takes out a pocket knife and sticks it in his urethra... Yes, he sticks a knife in his penis... He then twists it and... Cuts it completely in half..... Oh my god.... and it's not even done. He then cuts open... his scrotum and cuts pulls out his testicles and...... Puts them in the girls mouth....... Is anyone else getting fucking sick to there stomach here, because I sure as hell am..... Thankfully, some good comes out of this..... Like that mother fucking hell on earth, David bleeds to death because of that. Thank God. I would say that's it, but there is something even worse then this fanfiction. It's the author.
Now, all fanfiction writers put a bit of themselves into the main character of the fanfic. It's common knowledge. You can tell a lot about the author just by looking at the main character of there fanfic. And in this fanfics case, you may think the author has a lot of fucking problems. Yeah, but, that's not all. I said that authors only put a bit of themselves into fanfics. But, guess what the name of the author of this fanfics name is...... His name is David..... Yes, the author didn't put a bit of himself in the fanfic. He directly put himself into the fanfic. So, no, this author does not have problems... He's a fucking living monster that is just as bad as any true evil on earth..... That is why Serena isn't the worst fanficton character ever. Because she is just fictional.... But, David. A true fucking evil.... He actually exists. He's real... And I feel offended just to read this fanfic... I'm done. There you have it. The Pokemon Story.
I have read lots of awful fanfics. I mean lots. But the Pokemon Story is, without a doubt, the worst. It mixes up the horrible writing of My Immortal, the worthless torture of Muffins, he atrocious rape of Trixie's Funhouse, the unlikable main character of Rini's Horrible Death, the idiotic author of Salvation, and the pathetic title usage of Hitler and Jesus, yet it takes all these things and makes them a hundred times worse. I don't think I've read anything worse, and I highly doubt I ever will. I am still not done making reviews, but I don't think I will ever find a review that is even worse then this one. But.... hay, that's only my opinion....... What's Your Take