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Hopefully, at least SOMEONE will know what I mean by this poem. Please don't judge my poem by how corny, stupid, or silly it is, because I already know I can't write. I just want to see if anybody knows what I'm feeling.

These blood veins
I should cut open
They keep me just like chains
I can't move because of them
And they hurt
Just like I feel that I did this to him
I want to cut these blood veins so bad
I want true friends
That I've never had
I want at least one true friend
That'll keep me laughing, keep me smiling
That'll be there until the end
But all I've had are betrayers
Yeah, nothing but betrayers...

AllybethClaire posted over a year ago

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Scarlet_Vixen said:

Yep, I know exactly what you mean and how you feel by it... I've been getting a lot of backstabbing lately too. Some people obviously get very bored and have to upset the rest of us just to make themselves feel better. Don't let them get to you either! There are way too many haters out there nowadays...

posted over a year ago

JoannaVonDoom said:

Look, if you're going to be emo, go on the emo spot. Or get over it.

posted over a year ago

Shallow much?

AllybethClaire posted over a year ago

Maybe. Sorry man, but I find the words "cut my veins" quite melodramatic.

JoannaVonDoom posted over a year ago

^yep

coolie posted over a year ago

PeterPansgirl12 said:

I know what u mean I just dont FEEL it. Cause I dont ever feel like cutting myself or any of that stuff.
Praying for u!

posted over a year ago

i feel disgusted when i feel those cutting up words >:P

Skater_Girl_1 posted over a year ago

Ok... didnt ask ur opinion :P

PeterPansgirl12 posted over a year ago

Skater_Girl_1 said:

i get u, so wuts his name, i can be ur friend.. we can't hang out but i wont betray u..

posted over a year ago

Thanks. And his name was Shon.

AllybethClaire posted over a year ago

coriann said:

:'(

posted over a year ago

xoPixie-Popxo said:

Wow, dude...
That's deep. You sure know how to write.

posted over a year ago

yeah i dont know why you said you couldn't write! and yes, i got it :'(

ICONicgirl7 posted over a year ago

Shadowmarioking said:

Backstabbing friends...nope, never had that happen to me. Also, no offense intended, perhaps you could revise this poem using more alluring words?

posted over a year ago

springely said:

Sad person is sad.

Nah, just joking. Cool poem.

posted over a year ago

SoulEater-Roxs said:

You mean, that you are cuting your rists to make the hurting go away of the betrayers. The only thing that will stop this is getting a friend that will make you happy and will always be there for you, to help you throw your daly problems.

posted over a year ago