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Hey! I wrote a beginning of a song.. I didn't like it that much.. so do u think I should continue it?

it's about a break up

(More Than This)
After all that we've been through
Don't you let go on me now
I don't want any more tears
Don't you bring me down


Chorus:
I swear I'd give you more that this
If you can stay like this
I swear I'd love you more than this
Anything you wish
If I knew that you'd let go, oh
 smsooom posted over a year ago
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XxKeithHarkinxX said:
It's shitty. and kinda of,bland.

It's really flat,it needs depth to it.

It honestly up to you.
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posted over a year ago 
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Exactly
smsooom posted over a year ago
brandonaz said:
nahhh it's too boring and unoriginal tbh but if you want to be a pop star it's no worse than everything else on the radio
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posted over a year ago 
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That's what I thought of :/
smsooom posted over a year ago
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So scrap it.
brandonaz posted over a year ago
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ok :)
smsooom posted over a year ago
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@brandon, that's what I thought XD
XxKeithHarkinxX posted over a year ago
Solas said:
I don't want to sound mean, but I think there are too many platitudes - stringing cliches together isn't good song writing.

Something else I'm wondering is: why did you choose to write about a break up?

I've never written a song before, but if I were to give you some advice then it would be to come up with an original subject. Everybody writes about break ups - be unique! I'm sure you've had plenty of meaningful life experiences that are far more interesting. :)

Hope this helps a little.
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It did :) Thnx .. :D and I don't know actually why I chose this :P
smsooom posted over a year ago
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I didn't think so. That's probably what the problem was. Not to sound cheesy, but you'll probably find it easier to write about something you really believe in. Good luck with your song! :)
Solas posted over a year ago
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