Hey.. mmm.. i am not a pro or really a musician.. and i tried making a song for my girlfriend.. and i'm planning to send this, sing this on our 10th monthsary.. hehe.. i was wondering if you could rate it? opinions? reactions? thanks!

Crazily Beautiful Impact

I.
At 3 in the afternoon
Music starts playing with a lovely tune
Heard the bells tolling
With my best suit at the wedding
And when I glanced outside
There, I saw you riding in a trike
Such a pretty lady – who would’ve guessed
With her bang-up sunlit dress

Pre-Chorus I:
Right there I knew
It’s you
It’s absolutely you
Rocking my heart again and again
So, yeah let’s begin

Chorus:
You shake me up
You fill me up
You picked me up off the ground
And like an angel, you flew
With me to the clouds
You crushed the walls
You cushioned my fall
Gone are the coldness in my heart
A brand new story’s about to start
Unafraid, stimulated, now a chance-taker
And that’s a fact
With you in this crazily beautiful impact

II.
As our gazes locked in contact
In a split of a second you got my heart hi-jacked
Injected your mirages in my head
Stitched the holes in me with your thread
It just seems so unreal
Sweetly enticing’s what I feel
Love’s warhead detonated
Explosive attraction now has started


Pre-Chorus II:

Disturbance spreading inside
Sadness died
Ripples out through my life
I’m falling now in ecstasy
Come on baby, fall with me

(Repeat Chorus)

Bridge:
A supernova within this dark sky
An angel descended in this existence of mine
Forever changing
My reason for living
Instantly engraving
Your name in my being
Reviving the dying love in me
For you have come finally…

(Repeat Chorus)

This crazily beautiful impact
This crazily beautiful impact
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This crazily beautiful impact