Ace The Vampire Bat In Sonic Adventure

Let's start with saying this...I was told that I was made using part of the DNA of another hedgehog 1 of Father's family members made...some1 named Shadow is geneticly my brother...a guy named Robotnic. I guess that makes Robotnic my grandpa. Knowing this, he also said that he made me so I would b different...better....supposedly. But I...I'm a monster...just like the others...only un-like them...well...they have 3 different forms, rite? Regular, demon, and were form...I have not only my own soul but 2 other, evil souls that inhabbit me. They try 2 take over and it shows in my 2 other...“forms”....

{this fanfic has pretty much no plot they just go save a bunnie my god!}
PLZ READ CHAPTER 1-18 BEFORE READING THIS

so this was heaven a land of clouds a land of hope and dreams "wat the hell" said misery just waking up "this is heaven" asks rane also waking up "i gess so" i said and i stood up the clouds were quite fluffy and jumpy then misery took a handful of clouds and puts them in her mouth so i slap her hand and say "wat the heck u dont just go around eating stuff" i say "mmmmm tastes like cookies yummy" she says with her mouth full
"come on lets go we have a mission guy" rane says getting...

Hello friends. Recently a friend has asked me to write a critique for a character named Rynk in this club. I spent 2 hours on this only to find out that the person who asked for the critique in the first place didn't read past the first 2 paragraphs. Then proceeded to create a large amount of drama over it that resulted in hurting my friends emotionally.. Now being the evil mother fucker I am, of course I decided to make this critique public for everyone! Because hey, if the person who it was intended for didn't read it someone else should. Plus giving someone a taste of their own medicine...

Many times I see people complaining about either A) not being able to afford photoshop or B) saying that their art program is shitty and that's why the have 'bad art.'

I have always hated people saying these things because they are really shitty excuses. Your art program is not that fucking bad if you actually know how to use it, for one, and for the other?

THERE ARE OTHER PROGRAMS.

So here is a list and quick review of any free art programs I can find. (Let me know if I'm missing any- I want as many on this list as possible.) (Also if any of the links don't work let me know and I can try to help...

Note; This is an opinion, do not take this as anything offensive or insulting. This is to help you avoid having an overpowered or overangsty character.

It is very fun to make your own character, or fan character, yes? ^^ I agree. But, sometimes, people don't go through character development the correct way, having their character or fan character result in being overpowered and/or undefeatable.

Sometimes, they do follow the right steps, but instead create a much more angsty, annoying, depressed character.

I will start off with the much more common character; Mary-Sues and Gary-Stus.

They are characters...

"Wait, Wyldfyre, you can't be serious!" Dakota says, worried.
"Chillax, Dakota. I got this," I say, turning around to face her. "I appreciate your concern, but remember, you can't always be there to save my butt or fight my battles."
"But -- "
"Let 'im go, kid," John, the hedgehog guarding the gate to Princess Aimina's castle, states. "He's got a point, y'know."
"... Fine. Try not to get yourself killed."
"I'll try," I reply. I turn around and walk towards the castle.
As I try not to stress out, I can't help but think of what could go wrong during the fight. I could get my soul separated...