Moonpaw and Nightpaw

Ok since you people wanted to ignore me in the forum i'll post it here. i have decided to leave this clan, for the leader stormstar rarely comes on to help her clan or stop them from fights. she only comes on to me when she makes warriors, apprentices, etc. i have gotten tired of the way she leads, no one ever get's in trouble here when they should because it teaches them about respect and shows them how they need to behave so they don't get in trouble again. i also feel like sometimes it isn't a clan because of the random things that go on, this clan sometimes acts like it's a twoleg group,...

"ok" Mosswing began, "this is your first time alone hunting, are you sure your ready?" Mosswing asked?
"Absolutley, posotivley!" Oddpaw exclaimed excitedly!
Mosswing nodded and walked off to hunt in another part of the area, leaving Oddpaw alone. Oddpaw smiled and sniffed the air for prey but instead, picked up the scent of an intruder.
"Strange scent" Oddpaw comented, "smells of rotten crowfood and a she-cat."
Oddpaw sneaked through the undergrowth then pounced on the surprised she-cat. Oddpaw narrowed his pale blue eyes at her. She was medium sized, not to younge not to old, her silver fur...

The pain is unlike anything i ever felt.I felt pain before ;the loss of my mother who ive loved dearly,the hauntings of my father and his clawing,find out the father i thought i shared a blood connection wasnt real and even fights but this pain i will never be able to earse from my memories.The pain of the claws tearing deep down into my youthful flesh as white dot glittered my eyes.The bites were horriable as well;they felt like jagged rocks ramming into my skin.I suddenly felt sympathy for all the pray that i and everyone killed since it must have felt similar.My mind raced and was trying...

Finchfang padded through the forest, a chill rippled through his gray fur, reminding him that leaf-bare was about to return.
Finchfang shivered, and sniffed the air. "Not one sniff o'mouse around here" Finchfang sighed.
Finchfang was about to move on when he heard a rustling of bushes, not far off. An intruder, Finchfang wondered? Imediatly his claws slide out, fur bristled, and eyes turned from curious to catious. Finchfang gave the air another sniff but relaxed as he reconized the scent of StormClan, a couple heartbeats later, a dark lean-shape leaped from tree-to-tree, landing a mouse-length...

Herds of many cats tip toe in the shadows from the east. The crescent moon shines above but no stars are watching tonight.
The cat leading the others, leaps on a boulder, and sniffs the air. He was a black tom with white spots. Then he turns back to the clan. "hurry! Its this way!"
The leader jumps down from the boulder and charges for the lake, with the clan following.
As they reach the lake, they stop infront of a giant oak tree, the leader stops and sniffs the air again, then he signals to the clan to slacken as well.
The toms eyes lit with fire as he turned to his followers. "Berrystar!"...

I ran through the forest, my limbs aching, my heart pumping! I could have sworn I had heartburn! Two wild dogs were on my tail, they were gainging, faster and faster, until...........POW! The bigger wild dog male leaped on me and i found myself crashing down!
"Ha! I got you Wing!" One of the wild dogs exclaimed in victory.
"Shut up Azulan!" I growled at him. Azulan was my idiot brother, who never stopped worshipping himself for two seconds.
Then my other littermate, Rain, caught up with us, her breath heaving. It didnt surprise me for one second that she was last to arrive, after all she...

clan~tribe
sharpclaw~ warrior
claw~ apprentice
no scratch~ elder
healer~ medicine cat
leader~ flashstar

*in this "tribe" there is no names such as flare"KIT" and flare"PAW" this tribet takes care of one a nother but has different rules then most clans. here there are no borders and no dupty.*
members of the tribe:
leader: flashstar
healer: echo( sharpclaw)

sharpclaws:
~ krestalclaw,dark grey tom with black stripes and black paws
~ nightdust, a beautiful dark ginger she cat with sprinkled yelowish spots and tail striped with white
~ lillydraft, a white she cat with dark brown spots
~ scareleaf, a grey tom...

I walk calmly through the forest, my pads brushing lightly against the smooth leaves. Leafbare had recently came to an end and new leaf had already showed signs of its new life. I could hear birds singing in the trees, mice scuffling under the leaves, squirrels leaping through the trees-
Then i heard a "hiss" behind me.
I glanced back and saw four cats glaring at me, there fur bristling, and there claws unsheathered. Two were warriors, while the other two were apprentaces, i guessed they were mentors with there apprentaces.
I barley reacted, just lifted my paw and gave it a couple of licks....