Here is chapter two, comment please
(Still Jason's point of view)
Jason watched as the ship came to shore, the figure jumped from his spot and landed cleanly on his feet. Jason asked "who are you?" The man replied "name's Sinbad, yours?" Piper took over and said "I'm Piper, that's Jason, and that's Leo." Sinbad looked at them, and he asked "your demigods right?" Jason nodded and said "I'm the son of Zeus, and Piper is the daughter of Aphrodite, and Leo is the son of Hephaestus." Sinbad replied "pleased to meet you." It was quit for a moment an then Jason asked "would you like a tour of the camp and meet Chiron?" Sinbad said "okay fine with me." So, Jason took the lead and was followed by Piper and Leo. Sinbad asked "so is this place like a summer camp or something?" Before Jason could reply, Piper said "yes but most campers stay year around." Sinbad didn't respond but only nodded. Jason pointed towards the two big cabins and said "the white one is for my father Zeus." Sinbad guessed "the king of the gods?" Jason nodded and added "the smaller one is for Hera, queen of the gods." He didn't want to go there, considering what happened on the quest he did with Piper and Leo. Jason said "okay, let's go and see Chiron." Sinbad followed them to see the camp activities director who was not far from them. Jason said "sir, Sinbad has arrived." Chiron replied "good, because we all need to talk."
(Still Jason's point of view)
Jason watched as the ship came to shore, the figure jumped from his spot and landed cleanly on his feet. Jason asked "who are you?" The man replied "name's Sinbad, yours?" Piper took over and said "I'm Piper, that's Jason, and that's Leo." Sinbad looked at them, and he asked "your demigods right?" Jason nodded and said "I'm the son of Zeus, and Piper is the daughter of Aphrodite, and Leo is the son of Hephaestus." Sinbad replied "pleased to meet you." It was quit for a moment an then Jason asked "would you like a tour of the camp and meet Chiron?" Sinbad said "okay fine with me." So, Jason took the lead and was followed by Piper and Leo. Sinbad asked "so is this place like a summer camp or something?" Before Jason could reply, Piper said "yes but most campers stay year around." Sinbad didn't respond but only nodded. Jason pointed towards the two big cabins and said "the white one is for my father Zeus." Sinbad guessed "the king of the gods?" Jason nodded and added "the smaller one is for Hera, queen of the gods." He didn't want to go there, considering what happened on the quest he did with Piper and Leo. Jason said "okay, let's go and see Chiron." Sinbad followed them to see the camp activities director who was not far from them. Jason said "sir, Sinbad has arrived." Chiron replied "good, because we all need to talk."
Octavian got out of bed and tried to unbotton his pj's but a button fell off. NOO he cried what eva shall i do! its a catastrophe! NOT EVEN MINERVA COULD SEW THIS BACK ON and he ran around screaming and killing random teddys. he told Reyna who screamed FIND IT! GET THE LEGION TO FIND IT!!! when she told the legion, they screamed OHH NOOO cried hazel ITS A CATASTROPHEEEEYYYYYYYYYY THE UNSTOBBALE BUTTON NICKERS!!!!!!! and they went on about this until they realised octavions button was in his room.