Here's a fifth chapter and it's from my most favorite character (Alice) point of view. Thanks to all who read and comment this story.
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5th chapter Hiding
Alice
"It's already morning" I whispered to Jasper trying to free myself from his embrace but he ignored and continued kissing. "You know, we have adorable tiny girl whom we adopted and I don't think it's nice to keep her waiting".
"I know..." he sighed "But she's not wake now so we still have some time we can use..." he smiled and I gave up.
Five minutes later I heard how Jalley got up. She started running down the stairs and on the halfway jumped gracefully straight to Jasper's arms.
"Good morning, Miss" he said swaying her.
"Morning" she replied shyly and hugged his neck. For a moment I couldn't do anything else besides smiling and admiring this lovely scene. Three days ago she said in the same shy tone that she loved me. And yesterday she whispered these words to Jasper. I thought I'm gonna explode from happiness - my girl accepted us as parents!
"What do you want to do today?" Jasper asked tickling her belly.
"I, I don't know" she was laughing and trying to hide behind my back.
"Alice?"
I closed my eyes and froze for a second. A sigh escaped from my lips - I couldn't see future with four half-vampires in family clearly but I could guess.
"Soccer match, I think. Four teams: Emmett, Rose and Emi against us three and Carlisle, Esme, Nick against Edward, Bella and Nessie"
"Awesome!" he exclaimed and started chasing Jalley around the house. Even if wouldn't have an ability to see future, I could predict one thing for sure. Emmett and Jasper always loved to compete against each other but now their competition entered completely new level. Or better say, proud fathers level. I think I already hear them boasting "My princess is faster" "But my girl fights better" "Emi learned to read five days ago" "Jalley did that a week ago" "It's because she's older" "Or because she's smarter.... Everyday the same.
"Do you think Edward is ready to play? He was beaten two times by kids after all" Jasper grinned and interrupted my thoughts.
"Oh, he'll definitely play" I assured him. And that reminded me our conversation yesterday. Edward was really curious about babies past. Nessie could remember her birth, so probably they could remember too but when we asked Nick and Emi what they can tell about themselves, they said the only memory is the darkness and the feeling being carried. And then we came into the picture. With Jalley everything was different. And her nightmares made wonder what she has suffered. I couldn't ask her at first cause she didn't spoke a word but now she was talking, laughing, playing and even loved us. Edward pushed me to question her. Maybe today I should? I looked at Jalley on Jasper's back and decided to wait until the match will be over.
Apparently, I was a bit wrong about opponents - our team played with Edward, Bella and Nessie while Emmett could demonstrate his skills to Carlisle's team. We didn't leave any chances to Edward and Emmett also won so it was decided to arrange Grand finale. The match was amazing - Emi was faster then Jalley, but my girl was trickier. Emmett and Jasper almost kicked off their legs trying to get a ball and I had to face Rosalie who also wasn't in a mood of losing. The results changed very quickly so it was impossible to predict the ending. Finally, the last second Jasper passed ball to Jalley and GOAL! We won! Emmett whined all the way that we cheated.
When we reached our home - now we all were living in separate houses near each other, it was dark. Jasper carried sleepy Jalley upstairs and I followed them trying to find words to start my interrogation.
"Uhm... Jalley?" I sat on the corner of her bed. "Can I ask you something?"
"Sure" she whispered putting her head on the pillow. She looked so tired and so cute this moment that I wavered if I should continue.
"Sweetie, you know how much I love you, but there are some things I would like to know..." I paused.
"Uhm..." her eyes were closed.
"Honey, can you remember anything from you past? From your life before coming here?" I watched her eyes flew open filled with fear and I wanted to bite off my tongue. "Sweetie, I'm sorry. You don't have to talk if you don't want to.
"No, it's fine..." her voice was shaking. "I can remember... I can... The darkness. Yes, it was dark. My eyes were closed. I was so scared" her body start shaking and I could see her tears. I wanted to stop her but she continued "I was carried. Emi and Nick was next to me. I was so scared that I didn't open my eyes". Now she was sobbing and I hugged her. After an hour she fell asleep and I went downstairs. Her story was the same as Nick's or Emi's but none of them reacted like this. I knew she was lying.
"Alice, why did you asked her that?" Jasper was looking at me concerned. I knew he's gonna be angry if I mention Edward so I did the same thing Jalley just did. I lied.
"I can't see her future. What if her father will appear and take away her from us?"
"Oh, Alice..." he hugged me around the waist and pulled closer. "I'm not letting anyone to hurt you or Jalley. She's ours. Nothing won't change that" and he kissed me. I smiled - right now I was sure that we'll have our girl forever.
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5th chapter Hiding
Alice
"It's already morning" I whispered to Jasper trying to free myself from his embrace but he ignored and continued kissing. "You know, we have adorable tiny girl whom we adopted and I don't think it's nice to keep her waiting".
"I know..." he sighed "But she's not wake now so we still have some time we can use..." he smiled and I gave up.
Five minutes later I heard how Jalley got up. She started running down the stairs and on the halfway jumped gracefully straight to Jasper's arms.
"Good morning, Miss" he said swaying her.
"Morning" she replied shyly and hugged his neck. For a moment I couldn't do anything else besides smiling and admiring this lovely scene. Three days ago she said in the same shy tone that she loved me. And yesterday she whispered these words to Jasper. I thought I'm gonna explode from happiness - my girl accepted us as parents!
"What do you want to do today?" Jasper asked tickling her belly.
"I, I don't know" she was laughing and trying to hide behind my back.
"Alice?"
I closed my eyes and froze for a second. A sigh escaped from my lips - I couldn't see future with four half-vampires in family clearly but I could guess.
"Soccer match, I think. Four teams: Emmett, Rose and Emi against us three and Carlisle, Esme, Nick against Edward, Bella and Nessie"
"Awesome!" he exclaimed and started chasing Jalley around the house. Even if wouldn't have an ability to see future, I could predict one thing for sure. Emmett and Jasper always loved to compete against each other but now their competition entered completely new level. Or better say, proud fathers level. I think I already hear them boasting "My princess is faster" "But my girl fights better" "Emi learned to read five days ago" "Jalley did that a week ago" "It's because she's older" "Or because she's smarter.... Everyday the same.
"Do you think Edward is ready to play? He was beaten two times by kids after all" Jasper grinned and interrupted my thoughts.
"Oh, he'll definitely play" I assured him. And that reminded me our conversation yesterday. Edward was really curious about babies past. Nessie could remember her birth, so probably they could remember too but when we asked Nick and Emi what they can tell about themselves, they said the only memory is the darkness and the feeling being carried. And then we came into the picture. With Jalley everything was different. And her nightmares made wonder what she has suffered. I couldn't ask her at first cause she didn't spoke a word but now she was talking, laughing, playing and even loved us. Edward pushed me to question her. Maybe today I should? I looked at Jalley on Jasper's back and decided to wait until the match will be over.
Apparently, I was a bit wrong about opponents - our team played with Edward, Bella and Nessie while Emmett could demonstrate his skills to Carlisle's team. We didn't leave any chances to Edward and Emmett also won so it was decided to arrange Grand finale. The match was amazing - Emi was faster then Jalley, but my girl was trickier. Emmett and Jasper almost kicked off their legs trying to get a ball and I had to face Rosalie who also wasn't in a mood of losing. The results changed very quickly so it was impossible to predict the ending. Finally, the last second Jasper passed ball to Jalley and GOAL! We won! Emmett whined all the way that we cheated.
When we reached our home - now we all were living in separate houses near each other, it was dark. Jasper carried sleepy Jalley upstairs and I followed them trying to find words to start my interrogation.
"Uhm... Jalley?" I sat on the corner of her bed. "Can I ask you something?"
"Sure" she whispered putting her head on the pillow. She looked so tired and so cute this moment that I wavered if I should continue.
"Sweetie, you know how much I love you, but there are some things I would like to know..." I paused.
"Uhm..." her eyes were closed.
"Honey, can you remember anything from you past? From your life before coming here?" I watched her eyes flew open filled with fear and I wanted to bite off my tongue. "Sweetie, I'm sorry. You don't have to talk if you don't want to.
"No, it's fine..." her voice was shaking. "I can remember... I can... The darkness. Yes, it was dark. My eyes were closed. I was so scared" her body start shaking and I could see her tears. I wanted to stop her but she continued "I was carried. Emi and Nick was next to me. I was so scared that I didn't open my eyes". Now she was sobbing and I hugged her. After an hour she fell asleep and I went downstairs. Her story was the same as Nick's or Emi's but none of them reacted like this. I knew she was lying.
"Alice, why did you asked her that?" Jasper was looking at me concerned. I knew he's gonna be angry if I mention Edward so I did the same thing Jalley just did. I lied.
"I can't see her future. What if her father will appear and take away her from us?"
"Oh, Alice..." he hugged me around the waist and pulled closer. "I'm not letting anyone to hurt you or Jalley. She's ours. Nothing won't change that" and he kissed me. I smiled - right now I was sure that we'll have our girl forever.
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-Edward-
As I placed Renesmee's hand in Jacob's, whispered to me, "Thank you."
That took me by surprise. As I took my seat next Bella, she whispered, too low for the surrounding humans to hear, that she was proud of me.
When it was over, I was convinced myself and Bella had had a less melodramatic ceremony than this. Then again, perhaps it had been even more so.
Alice had gone over-the-top with decorations, not that Renesmee minded. She was unlike Bella in that way. When it was my turn to dance with her, she whispered, "You'll still be my dad."
Again with the dramatics.
When it was Bella's turn, she let me see her thoughts. A special gift. I enjoyed hearing her thoughts.
"This bothers you more than you're letting on, Edward. Relax, let it go. She'll be fine," Bella said.
"You know me so well," I grinned at her before Emmett claimed her and I was forced to dance with Rosalie.
As I placed Renesmee's hand in Jacob's, whispered to me, "Thank you."
That took me by surprise. As I took my seat next Bella, she whispered, too low for the surrounding humans to hear, that she was proud of me.
When it was over, I was convinced myself and Bella had had a less melodramatic ceremony than this. Then again, perhaps it had been even more so.
Alice had gone over-the-top with decorations, not that Renesmee minded. She was unlike Bella in that way. When it was my turn to dance with her, she whispered, "You'll still be my dad."
Again with the dramatics.
When it was Bella's turn, she let me see her thoughts. A special gift. I enjoyed hearing her thoughts.
"This bothers you more than you're letting on, Edward. Relax, let it go. She'll be fine," Bella said.
"You know me so well," I grinned at her before Emmett claimed her and I was forced to dance with Rosalie.
one eager look from you and by heart starts to soar.
i dont know how it could be. that i would love you more
a taste of time right here in my hands words cant describe
what my eyes can.
side by side.i want all of you forever.no less time will ever do
you say how can you ask me to take your life.oh edward that was long ago when
i looked into your eyes.
its apart of you and always will be.without you.i am incomplete
so take me by the hand and lead me anywhere.with you my time is yours to share. i love you
bella
i dont know how it could be. that i would love you more
a taste of time right here in my hands words cant describe
what my eyes can.
side by side.i want all of you forever.no less time will ever do
you say how can you ask me to take your life.oh edward that was long ago when
i looked into your eyes.
its apart of you and always will be.without you.i am incomplete
so take me by the hand and lead me anywhere.with you my time is yours to share. i love you
bella
Okay beacause I am a huge Twilight fan I have joined this club. I fell in love after the first 3 chapters of Tiwilight and I am still in the process of reading the books. If you could please at least say in the beginning of your article that it is concerning X books. That would help me out soooo much because I only have a limited amount of time I can read because of school and homework. The mentioning of things that I have not read yet is making me want to read the books so much more and it has caused me to get in trouble at school for reading when I shouldn't be. Thank you so VERY much.
okay so we all know that edward is the best charcter in twilight. why? because of how loving he is. He treats bella like if she were gold and his biggest treasure.Many of us wish to have a boyfriend or girlfriend like edward. It makes someone really happy to be loved so greatly.
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in love and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would love edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the books yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank you for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please comment of wat u think of my article...=þ
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in love and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would love edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the books yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank you for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please comment of wat u think of my article...=þ
To the Readers of my Fan Fictions:
Alright listen...I know I promised I will post but I can't post anything right now...I just got home from the beach and I have to go to the hospital for my sister and myself...she got really hurt and I hit my head on the beach floor and on a boogie board so now I am really dizzy! Plus I am worn out from almost drowning!! Sorry I will try to post tomorrow and I will try to make it long! Hope I am feeling better by tomorrow...And I pray to God I don't have a concussion
-Kayla
Alright listen...I know I promised I will post but I can't post anything right now...I just got home from the beach and I have to go to the hospital for my sister and myself...she got really hurt and I hit my head on the beach floor and on a boogie board so now I am really dizzy! Plus I am worn out from almost drowning!! Sorry I will try to post tomorrow and I will try to make it long! Hope I am feeling better by tomorrow...And I pray to God I don't have a concussion
-Kayla