Hey guys, I really love love love demons, ghosts, and writing. Oh, writing!! Can never get better than writing!! Anyway, I've never made a fan fic before. Ever. So, you're going to have to bear with me on this; I'm inexperienced here, and I apologize in advance. But I have a feeling I might be able to make something worth reading. Maybe. Read it anyway and I'll love you forever!!! Can u all do me a favor, plz? Comment on how you liked the story, and if you didn't/saw something wrong with it, what was wrong with it? I just want to make it better for next time. Thanks!
In June of 1972, a woman appeared in Cedar Senai hospital in nothing but a white, blood-covered gown. Now this, in itself, should not be too surprising as people often have accidents nearby and come to the nearest hospital for medical attention. But there were two things that caused people who saw her to vomit and flee in terror. The first being that she wasn't exactly human. she resembled something close to a mannequin, but had the dexterity and fluidity of a normal human being. Her face, was as flawless as a mannequins, devoid of eyebrows and smeared in make-up.
Carmen had a hard time making friends in her new school. It was the middle of the school year and most of the students had no interest in being friends the new girl. She spent many days alone, walking from class to class without speaking to anyone, but she eventually started hanging around with a group of five girls. Carmen thought these girls were her friends, but it wasn’t long before she discovered that they had been talking about her behind her back and spreading vile rumors.
When she confronted them, the girls turned on her and began bullying her every day, making her life a misery. They...