its a rubbish picture but still

As we explored The camp Holly And I came across two more cats. One golden brown tom and light brown she-cat.
Lionpaw: hey there you must be new here? I'm Lionpaw and this is Heatherpaw.
Me: Nice To Meet You I'm Jason.
Cinderheart: I'm Cinderheart. Where's Jayfeather?
Hollypaw: With Leafpool.
Cinderheart: Ok.
As Cinderheart left I decided to return with Hollyleaf
to ThunderClan. Hollyleaf agreed with me we ran to back to ThunderClan. Cinderheart was talking Jaypaw about life.
Jaypaw: Not so great being blind I wished I lived like you guys Sometimes I think I'm invisible *sobs*
Cinderheart: It's OK It will be ok.
Jaypaw: No Its not.
Cinderheart: Yes I'll promised You It'll be fine.
Jaypaw: I will trust you.