"I got bored one day and decided to write my own warriors fan fiction...but it sucked, well to me. Please give me your opinions! I'm not really sure what time period it is, however they are now in the new forest, and i geuss it is genertaions after Firestar and stuff"
Chapter 1 (i geuss a series)
Stormpaw wandered out of the apprentice den, ready to start a long day of training. His mentor, Grayclaw, waiting for him at the edge of the camp. Stormpaw shook the last of his sleepiness away and ran over to him.
"Hello Stormpaw, did you sleep well? Grayclaw asked.
Stormpaw thought about it for a moment and remembered a nightmare he had had about the death of his mother Oakstride, but Stormpaw decided to ignore it and pretend he was fine. He nodded and they were off.
"Alright Stormpaw, are you ready to learn a new hunting move?" Grayclaw asked.
Stormpaw once again nodded in answer and his mentor immediatly slipped into an awkward looking crouch where he put bot of his legs outward and almost flat against the ground, then slithered forward almost like a snake. It looked almost ridiculous, but Stormpaw noticed that he wasn't making a sound. Stormpaw went over the movements in his head then slipped into his own version of the hunting crouch.
"Good, but put your backside down more, or you'll stand out much more," Grayclaw mewed.
Stormpaw nodded once again, and tried as hard as he could to get into the perfect stance. He tried so hard that he stretched out his right forepaw too much and jump back in pain.
Stormpaw ended up in the nursery a while later, writhing around in pain as the medicine cat apprentice, Heatherpaw tried to reconnect his shoulder. Finally there was a click and Stormpaw fainted.
He woke up in a twisted scene of memories stringed together. His mother saying "He cannot talk, but he will be a great warrior" to the clan leader Poppystar. His apprentice ceremony, his mother's last moments of life before greencouch took her life.
Chapter 1 (i geuss a series)
Stormpaw wandered out of the apprentice den, ready to start a long day of training. His mentor, Grayclaw, waiting for him at the edge of the camp. Stormpaw shook the last of his sleepiness away and ran over to him.
"Hello Stormpaw, did you sleep well? Grayclaw asked.
Stormpaw thought about it for a moment and remembered a nightmare he had had about the death of his mother Oakstride, but Stormpaw decided to ignore it and pretend he was fine. He nodded and they were off.
"Alright Stormpaw, are you ready to learn a new hunting move?" Grayclaw asked.
Stormpaw once again nodded in answer and his mentor immediatly slipped into an awkward looking crouch where he put bot of his legs outward and almost flat against the ground, then slithered forward almost like a snake. It looked almost ridiculous, but Stormpaw noticed that he wasn't making a sound. Stormpaw went over the movements in his head then slipped into his own version of the hunting crouch.
"Good, but put your backside down more, or you'll stand out much more," Grayclaw mewed.
Stormpaw nodded once again, and tried as hard as he could to get into the perfect stance. He tried so hard that he stretched out his right forepaw too much and jump back in pain.
Stormpaw ended up in the nursery a while later, writhing around in pain as the medicine cat apprentice, Heatherpaw tried to reconnect his shoulder. Finally there was a click and Stormpaw fainted.
He woke up in a twisted scene of memories stringed together. His mother saying "He cannot talk, but he will be a great warrior" to the clan leader Poppystar. His apprentice ceremony, his mother's last moments of life before greencouch took her life.
"Oh when is he going to get back!?" said Cinderpaw in the apprentice den impatiently. "Calm down Cinderpaw, he wont take long" said Brackenpaw sleepily."Im looking for him!" she said as she came running out of the apprentice den."Where are you going?" asked a voice behind her. It was Longtail. Im looking for Fireheart!" she said excitedly. "Youre as skittish as a squirrle" Lontail said "Off you go!". She ran to the entrence of the camp and bumped into someone."Hello, Fireheart!" she said."Looks like I came just in time" he teased."I thought a badger ate you!" she also teased."No cat would be foolish enough to do that" said Tigerclaw. "OR you got ran over by a monster!" she said. Fireheart yawned. "You should go back to the apprentice den, its late" said Firepaw.
I KNOW ITS REALLY SHORT
I KNOW ITS REALLY SHORT

flippy when he's flipped out

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