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Would you read my medieval-fantasy story?

So the basic idea is:
17 year old Carla Rose is the ward of the king. She finds out that he murdered her father and she wants revenge in the form of killing him. In the kingdom, magic is banned because it is evil and corrupts the soul (the king's sister and wife both caught an illness and couldn't be saved for which he blamed magic). Carla starts to discover her powers and discovers a boy called Liam also has magic.
She tries to avenge her father's death but Liam talks her out of it.
Basically, she will be made heir to the throne in the place of the king's son because of one of her plans failed and went the way she hadn't expected. Her long-lost sister finds out.
During the course, she and Liam combat feelings for each other and have a very much love/hate relationship.
There is also the last dragon caged away and she wants to destroy all of mankind but needs the help of Liam, the powerful sorcerer to break the force that holds her.

If anyone wants a more detailed plan I will give it to you as best as I can.
What do you think? What would make it better? Have you any ideas for plots within the story?

Thanks to all of you that answer! :D
 morganaforever posted over a year ago
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misaki01 said:
Sounds really intresting =D I'm into any book or genre so gud luck on ur book and please inform me if u made the book or so.. ^-^

I don't get much of how u explained the story here breifly with the english... It's kind of confusing ...

Nevertheless... It's really nice =D
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Sounds really intresting =D I'm into any book or genre so gud luck on ur book and please inform me if u made the book or so.. ^-^ I don't get much of how u explained the story here breifly with the english... It's kind of confusing ... Nevertheless... It's really nice =D
posted over a year ago 
coriann said:
yeah, it sounds interesting, not to much romance and stuff....hmm, i was a bit simpler at the beginning but got a little more complicated at the end, maybe you can make it a little bit simpler or at least easier to understand, plus it would be nice to have a climax (pointo of most..idk suspense and dramma) then a resolution, well you probably know about these things already, you could just look up how to make a plot on the net, anyway, it all depends on how you put all your ideas together to make sense, i do like the theme aboutmagic being outlawed, its interestin, good luck with the story! :D
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ps. im also riting a fantasy :D but its taking long for me to figure out how to put it together properlaw and try to make it less callow (child like) or something like that, it's for teenagers and adults (O___O) which is why its difficult to pull off i guess
coriann posted over a year ago
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coriann posted over a year ago
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Kool! Can I see? OwO
misaki01 posted over a year ago
ExiledPsychosis said:
Lol you basically took the plot of Merlin and slightly altered it.... It's a good plot, but maybe you should try to come up with an original idea.
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