Nothing is better than a poem that grips your heart. A great way to do this is to end it with a catchy ended. Something that leaves a bit of mystery, or a bit of question. You follow?
Something that describes the life of a depressed 16 year old, who is misunderstood by everyone, including family. ..About how she has a hard time showing her feelings, about how she's even tried cutting, about how she desperately wishes to be understood and loved back. ...About how she still keeps believing that the sun will shine in her life some day.