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posted by TeamRosalieHale
4: Cast It Out

IT was beyond satisfied with the amount of vampires IT had found and killed in such a short time. IT would never have guessed that so many lived down south. Yet already IT had made IT’s way through more vampires than IT could count.
IT stopped and stood still-listening to the sounds around. IT could still sense the ones IT had left behind in Washington-the two female and the slightly larger group that was all male. IT took in a breath and considered for a minute.
IT decided to head back north-work IT’s way through Mexico, finishing off the ones IT had not been able to find, then Arizona, Nevada, Oregon, and finally Washington where IT would find and destroy the remaining vampires there.
IT liked the plan and started off, moving at a slightly more leisurely pace. Suddenly, much like something had attacked IT from behind, IT found Itself flat on IT’s back. IT heard a low hiss in IT’s ear. “No…Do not kill the blonde…She is mine…” IT grunted and nodded standing slowly. “You’re doing well young one. Much better than I had hoped. Still, spare the blonde.” IT did not understand the need for this and as if the voice understood, it quietly said “I will tell you when you’ve found her. Continue on and know I’m watching everything you do.”
IT seemed undaunted by the voice and once again started north, Mexico being his first of many that would lead IT to the blonde that his master so craved.
IT did not understand why-master could have had anyone it wanted yet it simply craved this one. This one vampire that had sent master on a hell-bent mission that had led to the creation of IT and the downfall of all vampires.
IT continued on, IT’s mind still pondering over the many things master had taught IT: how to hunt, how to become invisible, how to properly use the tools master had given IT. Then there was the numerous tests on the vampires that IT knew only by sight-there were two categories: primary and secondary. Primary ones were to be disposed of as soon as IT had found their whereabouts while secondary ones were to be killed simply to rid the world of the monsters.
Primary ones included the family of seven that IT had slaughtered earlier in Washington though one had been missing: a small female that was just under five feet and had short, spiky black hair. IT was not really concerned since IT would find her again and finish her off the way IT had done with the rest of her family.
Well, almost all the rest…
An idea popped into my head the other day and its been playing like a little movie in my head ever since. I really need to know if its any good, or if the idea has already been used. Also I need advice for the characters and their names. I also appreciate constructive criticism and grammar and spelling. The names are temporary. I've never written a book that is completely in the present tense so please help me catch any tense mistakes! Um, oh yeah. It doesn't have a title yet so if you have any suggestions just let me know!

(: Thanks!
-Carly

The story is jumbled a bit. It is because the characters...
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posted by Percysclique
Chapter 3 – A Heart Beats Faster
    Kaolin ran up the stairs of the dungeon. The guard had been asleep, but he could awake any time. His boots pounded on the stone floor. He prayed for them to be light and soundless.
    Kaolin torn down the corridor, his was heart beating faster with every step. He knew his way around the castle. He had been here a few times before when he had visited Amorite.
    Kaolin had no idea what he was going to do. If he went home with the jewels, the King would charge him of thievery. If he didn’t pay...
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posted by hannah_vampire
I sat on my bed, All confused it sucked melissa asked me how and I didn't know which is the scary part not knowing I mean I could wake up and some vampire could be sucking my blood dry.

I had to find out more, I just can't stay here thinking all morning. I looked out the window to find Blair leaving for work, I ran downstairs and locked the door.I knew to look in the basement and then check the floorboards and the other room i wasn't allowed in. I spent about 2 hours looking for stuff, Well really anything that could help me and finally I found a box that
had necklaces, dairy's and most of all...
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blood fills the faces of my fantasies
no mercy,you're trying to put me down
i can see clearly as you're taking a swing at me
come and i'll push you to the ground
what are you doing? what do you think this is doing to me?
you're taking all my faith
what are you leaving me now?!
i will make you suffer just like you made me suffer
i will watch you screaming and begging for forgiveness
all my hate can not be bound
i will not be bound by your darkest demons
so try to take my life and put me to the ground
i will follow you and torture you and i'll watch you screaming
look at the bloody faces smiling at you,taking you down and making you drown
i wanna kill you the same way you killed me
leaving me thoughtless
you can try to tell me that i'm worthless
but you can not break me down
gonna take you down because nothing in this world is going to save me
posted by TeamRosalieHale
12: Destination: Unknown

Once upon a time, in Rochester, New York, there lived a simple, silly, disillusioned girl named Rosalie Lillian Hale. For thirteen years, she believed that nothing would ever touch her-that she was invincible to all feeling and thought.
Until one day in mid-April while she was stepping on stones on the Genesee River and she lost her balance. Despite knowing how to swim, the sudden fall caused her to panic and eventually drown. Fortunately, a dark haired, green-eyed angel dove in and pulled her out, then resuscitated her back to life. When she finally came to, she asked...
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posted by ScottishChic
The day of love,
Is here again,
This is tough,
From end to end,
A joyus occasion,
Is our salvation,
Without you,
I would be empty,
No one by my side,
No one to embrace me when I'm tired,
Stuck within a baracading window,
Wishing oh so much,
That you would show,
Just another day,
Where I would have to sit here and say,
Alone again,
Always alone,
Behind these eyes are tears of love,
You are my one true,
Thank you honey,
For being with me,
I love you so,
Please,
Never ever leave me

By ScottishChic, dedicated to all whom I love x
posted by summerfrogs_bro
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One day I was walking down the street no one was there. I was scared I just kept walking I looked around the corner I felt a wisp of cold go down my back i looked around again because I knew there was something there I went home and went to bed. I woke up the next morning I watched the window all morning I didn't care about school I was a loser anyway and the teachers hated me. I swear there was too many things wrong with me to go to school and my name is Raiden I know its so stupid is means thunder god in Japanese I mean it's so stupid but it was my great great great grandfathers name and...
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posted by cristina876
Hello my name is Cristina Xtri ,i am 15 years old and i love every singer's songs because SONG IS MY LIFE and also if singers wasn't even here exist then there would be no songs and i wouldn't even listen to song but now singers are here my life in on a ROCK AND ROLL!!!! WELL want to say something i love every singer's songs well they are GREAT for me it is my LIFE!!

SINGERS THAT I KNOW :Katy Perry, Taylor Swift, Nicki Minaj,Justin Bieber, Rihanna, Ariana Grande, Selena Gomez,Jennifer Lopez, well i just love every singers !!

Well i wish all the singer a big GOOD LUCK!!!! and also i love every songs well they are great!! hey all the singers make more song for me please want to see more !!! well just love every singer!!, well my favorite song is WORK by Rihanna and what is yours?
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posted by Okuni
Just a short one-shot I thought of on the spot...Mother's Day is coming so I thought, why not? It's not that good, just so you know...

I hate her. I really really hate her. Sure she's the woman who gave me my life. Sure she's the woman who raised me all the sixteen years I've been alive since my father left us shortly after my birth. But I cannot bring myself to love her. What has she ever done that actually made me smile? She has always been a cruel and selfish woman who would do anything to get what she wanted. She would gladly hurt others for her own benefit, even me, her own flesh and blood....
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For example, the "red with...
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