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Mom

posted by Okuni

Just a short one-shot I thought of on the spot...Mother's Day is coming so I thought, why not? It's not that good, just so you know...

I hate her. I really really hate her. Sure she's the woman who gave me my life. Sure she's the woman who raised me all the sixteen years I've been alive since my father left us shortly after my birth. But I cannot bring myself to love her. What has she ever done that actually made me smile? She has always been a cruel and selfish woman who would do anything to get what she wanted. She would gladly hurt others for her own benefit, even me, her own flesh and blood....

Writing Tips: How to Describe Colors

posted by Britt601

We've all been there.

We've all seen it (at least once).

Perhaps even committed the "easy" crime.

You know what I'm talking about.

"His cheeks were red with embarrassment."

"Anna checked the balance sheets again, coming to a conclusion the the financials were a deep crimson."

"I stared into his blue eyes as deep as the ocean."

Colors, like anything else, are powerful descriptive pieces. When used as a comparison or a contrast, the reader is painted a picture of the person/object's look and the setting as a whole. It should make the scene come together in a seamless flow.

For example, the "red with...

What I Learned From My 2nd & 3rd Screenplays by Stage 32 CEO Richard "RB" Botto

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Moonwalker The Series

posted by 7seablue7

MOONWALKER THE SERIES

Episode 1~ We meet again, setting hotel in New york (Hilton) year 1982. Scean1
---------------------------------------------------------------Micheal: well we're here guys...... guys
hey what are yall lookin at?
Marlon: check out theses girls at the pool over
there... (practically drooling)

Michael : all you do is watch girls all the time man.. come on.

Jermaine;yeah marlon( laughing) although they cut
Michael: now you too Jermaine( annoyed)

Jermaine:Mic you can't lie to your self they look good.
Michael:your right.... they do (sighing) we gotta
hurry up and cheek into our rooms so we can get ready...

Hourglass - ch.1

posted by alicia386

Chapter One

Mason Montgomery auditioned 480 girls this week alone to play the part as Charlotte in his new movie, Hourglass. Hourglass was all about a woman who could stop time just to be with her love. Each girl he auditioned wasn't giving him what he wanted. All he wanted was a fair-looking girl with pretty eyes and a sensitive heart but the girls he auditioned were anything but that. He tried being nice and say encouraging things but after the 248th girl he gave that a rest. Now he just said what came to mind like "You stink," or "And you call yourself an actress? Get it outta here." He had...

My gift chapter4

posted by Kachetes

“why does she live in this side of town when you have a hous- joshua was asking but my glare clearly got to him
“look its not like we dont want her in our house ... She IS married and she didnt want financial help from any one.Lupita is a girl thats loud and proud in a way but Marc is a good guy they're happy I just wish they would...”
I stop we stood in front of a small house and it looked like we missed a good party beer cans and bottles al over the front yard,a few dosen pizza boxes,three dogs eating the leftovers,and one pretty lady passout on the grass;my aunt Lupita
“do I realy need...

What do you think?

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Should I continue or not? [The ones in Italics are the parts I'm unhappy with]

For a vampire – a suspect of being one, really– she seemed pretty... human. With my job as a Vampire Seeker, she wasn’t like any of the other cases of vampires I had discovered. With all the raving stories of vampires I suppose they had to be more... careful with their special diet. But still, a vampire with these little reports, it was... strange, for lack of a better word. Perhaps we just had to get more information; yes, that was probably the case.
I sighed and flipped my notebook shut. Putting my pencil...

Try My Life Chapter 6

posted by mitchie19

6. T H E C R U Z F A M I L Y

“Welcome, Mariah.” Aunt Lourdes’ hugged me while the maids took care of my stuff. “Your house is so big,” I complimented. My eye caught on the beautiful carved statue on the corner and the massive staircase.
I waved my black hair on my right shoulder.
The walls were covered in golden rod wallpaper with a hint of yellow-green vines as the design. “Are you hungry? We’re about to eat lunch,” she looked at me.
I pursed my lips. “Um, yes,” considering the fact that I didn’t eat along the long way, made me hungry as I smelled the scent of the food...

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Shade of Grey

posted by Caleigh210

The feeling's unusual as I walk around
The sights are as strange as the sound
It's hard to believe that the beauty around me
Isn't beautiful in reality

How would you feel if all you know's a lie
That the truth is really hard to come by
When you're told that it's all alright
But all you see is the darkness of the night

When you realize
That the truth and the lies
Are separated by one thin line

Where can I find home
Even though I'm all alone
How can I say the right words
When I can't even show the would
Who I am
Why I stand
That I'm completely lost and I can't
Find my way
In this dreadful shade of grey

Hopelessly...

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Death Targets Ch.6

posted by problematic124

***Please don't copy***
Chapter 6
Death Targets
"From the Predator to the Prey"Aurora questioned reading the note.
As soon as I read this I called them all to my house I also told them about the (bio) dad situation.
"So that's the same the person who turned off the power at Tweety's house" Ariel asked
"Had to be"Fable nodded "who else could it be"
"Should we tell the police"Owen asked
"It's like Gregg said we need hard cold facts this can also be counted as a joke"Tweety reminded us
"And it's like the note says he's never been caught before"Gregg told us
"We should fight back"Aurora said suddenly
"What!Fight...

The Movie's on part one

posted by lovepop

Everyone was writing it down on their calenders as alerts of it popped up on the news, internet, and in big bold letters, on a newspaper! The time has come for it to be known to mankind and liked! The movie, Brenda and Luci's Night, was premiering on that weekend, the 25th of November.Everyone wanted to see it! There had been commercials of it since August, and the stars had been anxious. Speaking of the "stars" Whose names were Hillisia Jones, and Ponya Kricketiz. They were bff's since the kindergarten, and now they were in 7th grade. They auditioned for the movie without the other knowing! They were astounded when they learned they were auditioning for the same movie. They were mad, but when Ponya got the letter she was Brenda, and Hillisia was Luci, they were overjoyed, and began screaming with cheers! Now they were in New York being filmed for the movie... wait for more!

Hidden Secret Chapter 5

posted by DxCFan123

I woke up at 5 AM. Not suprising. I went to the bath room and got ready. I grabbed some clothes and put them on. A white short that said "WHO CARES?" and black shorts. I put On knee socks with converse. I put my hair in a bun. I grabbed my backpack and glanced at the clock. 7:45?! Holy crap! I ran to school. When I got there, only 5 minutes left until class. 7:55. Wow. Arent vampires suspossed to nbe as fast as a bullet? I walked down the hall nervously. Everyone was staring at me. "How's that?" "Who the heck is she?" I wanted to tell the I was Samantha Fitzpatrick of The FitzPatrick Family...

Speechless Ch. 2

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I got, yet another, chance of being adopted when I was fourteen. I was in my room, drawing when there was a soft knock at my door. I looked up to see Ms. Bayer smiling sheepishly. I grimaced. That woman can give children nightmares with that smile.

"Hecate, there's someone here to see you." I cocked my head to the side. The only person I was interested in seeing was Officer Truman, and he always just came to my room. I shook my head and returned to my sketch. "Hecate. Get your butt up and go down to the front desk this instant!" I sighed and got off the bed, and followed Ms. Bayer down to the...

More Than This Ch. 21

posted by para-scence

Along with the excitement of having a baby, I also became very worried. What would happen if I had a seizure during the pregnancy? What if my medication harmed the baby? I went on the computer and began searching for answers. Blake stood behind me, reading over my shoulder.

"It says you can continue, or stop your medication... It's up to you and your doctor," he read aloud. I nodded.

"It also says major seizures can be dangerous..." I sighed. He patted my shoulder. "But, if I do take the medication, there's an increased risk of birth defects."

"What are you going to do?" he asked. I sighed.

"I...