Young Justice OC'S!!! Club
Join
Fanpop
New Post
Explore Fanpop
Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. By no means am I forcing you to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless you truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before you start posting. It can be as little as a bio, or as big as an entire article series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no more than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he or she is in, can pull out another trick out of his or her hat.
4. If you absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his or her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely random and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when you have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the next day you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own or is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the recent outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, or claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If you must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, or so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if you do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot or stabbed in the heart, then pop up minutes later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull or flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to or dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to or dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created by you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing or potential character is a Mary Sue, or if you suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, you can take link. If you want, you can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case you were curious, which you probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all you want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, by no means do you have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by MafiaYJ
Babylon followed closely behind Adrian's black robes with a serious face, her eyes baring holes into his skull, "Adrian, Ive been becoming extremely violent." she stated flatly.
"Oh have you?" Adrian replied as he looked around absently at the hall and the doors that lined them, some with ominous light and others temptingly open.
In annoyance Babylon moved her way to block his path, her hands on her hips, her stance showing obvious emotion. "Adrian! Im serious! I threatened to experiment on my friends, to kill them even. Im getting far more violent then Ive ever been. Why? Why is this happening?"...
continue reading...
posted by BladeYJ
The Four Sons of Serenity

Life
Name: Asher
Age: No one knows
Hair: Black
Eyes: Emerald
Height: 5'11"
Relations: Oldest of the four brothers
Costume: A white suit of armor
Weapon Choice: He's able to give life to anyone and anything.
Personality: He's quiet, gentle, and merciful
Weakness': Death
Background: Unknown

Peace
Name: Calum
Age: No one knows
Hair: Long and blue and gray
Eyes: various colors
Height: 6'0"
Relations: He's the second oldest of the four
Costume: A gray and blue suit with , black gloves, and his hair is tied into a ponytail
Weapon Choice: Waterbender and peacemaker...he's able to...
continue reading...
posted by GlitterPuff
Name: Calypso Syntyche (Daughter of Thanatos: God of Death)

Age: 17

Birthday: December 17th

Height: 4’ 11”

Hair: Black, going halfway down her back

Eyes: Gray

Personality: Shy, doesn’t trust anyone

Handicaps: Terrible nightmares --> Psych Issues

Status: Single

Religion: Ancient Greek (Mythology)

Family: Mom – dead, no siblings that she knows of, and she met her dad once

Sexuality: Straight

Weaknesses: A small spot on the small of her back after she bathed in the River Styx

Strengths: Archery

Background:
-    Was born with the power to kill

-    Did not come...
continue reading...
posted by SilverWings13
I wrote this a while ago, figured you guys may (or may not) like to read it. I wrote it as Alek speaking to Tara. Voici!

"We left for freedom. For her freedom. "
"Whisper's?"
"Noëlle's, Whisper's daughter,” he corrected.
The one being told the story was taken aback, "You left because..."
"Whisper was pregnant,” he confirmed in the sort of tone a story teller held when about to relay a very long, very true story, "It was the plan. The entire plan.
“I was raised on knowledge. My father created me so that he could have full responsibility over my upbringing. He made sure that my trials and tests.....
continue reading...
posted by GlitterPuff
"Aachoo!" she sneezed into her tissue. Her sneeze could be heard throughout the entire apartment. Zack came in a moment later with a bowl of soup.

"Here. Eat this." He gave her the bowl and kissed the top of her head, making her face light up a bit.

"Thank you," Rene replied, her voice raspy and quiet, and she carefully blew on her soup and took a spoonful. "Mmm, yummy." He smiled and sat down on the edge of the bed, watching her eat her soup slowly. When she finished it, she set down the bowl and exchanged it for a tissue. The red head blew her nose as hard as she could, but she was still stuffed...
continue reading...
posted by Robin_Love
His raven hair dripped crimson blood to the mistreated battle field. The spear had long been removed from his head but the bleeding went with the hours that had passed in useless war. His breathing was slowing; he could hardly see the outline of who had been his king through his icy blue eyes. It was a bloody fight, all lives lost except his and his king's. Now, he fought off the clouding death penetrating his senses.
“I had hoped for better with us.”
He smiled sadly at the word's his uncle spoke.
“As had I, my lord.”
“You tried to overthrow me and kill me. Treason is cause for death....
continue reading...
added by SilverWings13
posted by GlitterPuff
January 2, 2108

Julie walked around, looking into old rooms, finding items she had never seen before. The names and numbers were still on peoples doors. She tried looking for certain people her mother had spoken of from time to time. A few doors later, she saw a room that belonged to Alex. Julie remembered hearing about Alex, and managed to open the door into his room. It was covered in clothing, probably dirty from when he was alive. She saw a few pictures on his table, one was of him and Rene where he looked super annoyed and she looked very happy and silly. In his closet, clothes were hanging...
continue reading...
posted by DiscordYJ
((BECAUSE SAD SHIT MAKES ME SAD..))

"Can I come?"
"No..."
"Please!!!!!"
"Uhg B-"
"PLEASE..."
"This won't be a good idea.."
"Since when is anything we do a good idea..."
"Fine.. you can come."


~

Blood flooded from her mouth as he held her close. He was willing to be the barrier between the girl and the silver bullets whizzing past them. So far he was doing good, suffering only minor scratches from the brush he was plowing through.

But the girl? She suffered a shot to the shoulder and stomach. The skin was bubbling up like a burn and her coughs were becoming more faint as the red liquid, she needed to...
continue reading...
A vixen stood on the stage, adorning a black dress which fanned out, as pure white ruffles erupted from beneath the cloth. The ruffles hung to her feet and concealed her silver pumps.Lengthy silk hair, the color of death itself, cascaded and caressed her face and back. Her lips were painted black, matching the dark eye-shadow, sprinkled with glitter, on her lids. And as she leaned in and tapped the microphone with one gloved finger, all the men of the bar turned and looked upon her with hungry, lustful eyes.

One in particular stood out, his red eyes blazing as he looked the girl over. Shifting...
continue reading...
posted by GlitterPuff
He sat in the cafe, looking at his watch. I wonder where she is? he thought to himself as he brushed a piece of his blonde hair out of his face. The bell on the door rang and his eyes flickered over to it, and he saw his date. Her dark blue dress fluttered as she walked over to him, her black blazer covering her chest; but showing more of her cleavage than usual. The dark haired girl stood in her track when she came to the table, her sneakered feet put together. The blonde boy stood up and pulled the chair out for her, which she awkwardly sat in.

"You look nice Amora," the boy told her in a...
continue reading...
Baby Ashley and her Mother
Baby Ashley and her Mother
In the white room all who were chained on the wall were now wide awake with a slitting headache watching Phifi, Jaivus, Melody and Nate. Who were still caught in the memories that made them venerable to Honesty and the other beetle's torture. Whether it was of their guilt, grief, sadness, or anger fueled into the memory it kept repeating on the screens over and over and in their heads. Their physical bodies ache from the torture Lelisa provide from the real world event in a scream or clinching of their fists. However, they still watch as
Snowflake and Honesty exchange series of blows on each...
continue reading...
posted by GlitterPuff
January 1, 2108

Julie ran through the door, panting as she slammed it shut. She ran a hand through her short black hair and walked into the living room of her old home. Rene sat on the couch staring at an old photo of her and her old friends and Zack. Julie knew that her mother had been crying because her hands had small streaks of black from her make-up.

"Mom?" She walked over to her mom and sat on the arm of the couch, looking at the photo with her. She pointed at a blur haired girl in the photo. "Who's that?"

"Ashley."

"And the blonde next to her?"

"Mel." A small smile ran across the red heads...
continue reading...
posted by khanna266
Name:Khanna Min-ji
age:18
alias:red butterfly
powers:transforms into rabbit,controls snow and hail,super speed,creates bubbles w/hands,and manipulates water,snow,& ice
appearance:tan skin,brown hair,eyes change colors constantly
civvies:sometimes shorts and a tank-top and other times miniskirts and dresses
BG story:She came to Gotham city from Cali and met Dick Grayson who thought she could be useful to the team so he introduced her to everybody and she became good friends with supergirl and batgirl

<3<3<3<3hope you liked it!
ps:her family originates from japan.
Khanna in civvies
Khanna in civvies
posted by MafiaYJ
Mafia sat alone on a rooftop, watching through binoculars, her target in a window across from her. The target wasn't aware of her of course, but some one else was. Mafia checked the time on her watch with a sigh. It was past midnight, but she needed this guy, preferably dead. It was easier to carry dead weight than live bait. Especially if he struggled. Sadly, Mafia had been right about one thing; her target would't be leaving the building any time soon. And she needed to have him before sundown. She sighed and tucked her red hair under her hat and pulled the collar up, if she was spotted in...
continue reading...
posted by SilverWings13
“Lesson learned: Avoid wearing cashmere on drug busts,” Vika stated as she glared as the culprit of her annoyance- a short navy dress and the red staining the white collar.
“Did you try hydrogen peroxide?” a voice behind her suggested. Of course the girl recognized his mocking London accent. She attempted to sound miffed at his sneaking up on her unpronounced, but she could do little about the blush that darkened her cheeks.
“What are you doing in a lady’s bedroom?” she demanded from him, hoping to fluster him. But when she spun to face him, he was leaning leisurely in the doorway...
continue reading...
posted by Robin_Love
Oxpaha
Oxpaha
Name: Asmundur “Des” Celos
Alias: Oxpaha
Occupation: Hero/Trainer
Powers: A powerful set of unbreakable, inescapable, invulnerable handcuffs
Skills/talents: Basic street fighting, all kinds of arsenal, a little bit of martial arts
Appearance: Brown/black hair and dark blue eyes
History:Des has a very strange history. His dad was a cop. His mother was a nurse. Because of their work, he saw little of them and more of his cousin Reyna Jackson. He is older than she is, but the two grew up playing together. His Father was Latin-Russian which is why his name isn't American. His father was shot on duty...
continue reading...
posted by Kurls_Basd
Name: Melody
Hero Name: Lotus
Nickname: Melly
Appearance: Dark green hair and eyes.
Age: 16 yrs.
Abilities: Melody controls plants. Her hair can turn into veins and grow flowers by her control. She can communicate with plants and grow them by her will.
Relations:Ashley is her best Friend. Friends with Nate, Phfi, Jaivus, Kaya, Akash, Koda, Akash and Ashley.
Attitude: Friendly, caring.
History&Past: Melody had a rush childhood she was abused sexual, verbal and physical by her alcoholic Father. He also did this to her mother causing her fair him so she never reported the abuse to her nor her daughter...
continue reading...
Martina blinded a few times before she was able to full open her eyes, her head was pounding from the mind-blast. She sat up, as she did she felt a paining sensation in her waist she grabbed hold on it noticing a slit and blood. She looked around but Nate was no where in sight. She stood up wavering a little then made her way down the mountain to the cave.

As she approached the cave her entire body ached more so did the slit on her waist, she continued to waver until she enter the cave. She fell to her knee from exhaustion Superboy noticed the emerald haired and rush to her shouting out her...
continue reading...