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Inspired by Peter's Evil Overlord list - a list of dos and don'ts for evil overlords based on classic mistakes by such. I'm only writing down a few things that have been really bugging me, mostly Marik and Bakura centered, so feel free to add anything that's been annoying you in your comments! Just follow the format you see in the one I write.

#1: If I have two of my nemesis' best friends mind controlled, I'll have one of them get him alone and stab him. I will not make one challenge him to a children's card game.

#2: If my nemesis seems really anxious for me to do something that I think will...

Chapter 8: A talk with the Pharaoh

Some few moments passed and Diaboundo's burst stream and Obelisk's fists were still pushing to attack the other. Marik and Bakura gave as much power as they could to the Kaa as Atem did to his own Kaa. The tension between them was high and the more power they gave, the more their bodies ached. Finally, the intertwining power of the burst stream and fists erupted causing both Kaas, the thieves, and Atem to fly backwards. All of them landing on the alabaster floor, leaving many scratches and holes.
“Impossible!” exclaimed Isis.
“They withstood the attack...

Chapter 5: Work at dawn, celebration at dusk

The morning sun was rising upon the sandy horizon of Egypt, hitting the pyramids casting long shadows on their sides. As more beams of light sped across the sands, the light had finally reached the palace. The first beams to hit the palace was in Pharaoh Atem's room. Atem slowly opened his eyes only then to see his room flooded in the morning shine.
“Morning already?” he yawned as he rubbed the sleep from his eyes, put a cream colored kilt on, and placed the Sennen puzzle around his neck. Atem walked out to his balcony and saw the quiet and empty...