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Marizza in the centre of planets
Marizza in the centre of planets
Well, I sw the ratings in the itroducion and I realised that it wasn`t liked much, but anyway, I`m leaving the first chapter! It`s not the best, but it`s a good starting!

Chapter 1
Five years. Five years had passed since the day we began preparing for this journey. Five years, during the ones, we left everything to concentrate in the training. And now, everything was ready. Our mission was difficult, we had to go to Saturn and put there a new satellite, which would discover any possibility of tlife in that planet. There have been discovered conditions of life in the Moon and on Mars, but now our teachers would send us to Saturn. The idea was a bit frightening, but I didn`t want to show it, although my team mates, weren`t better.
We were all in the centre of plantes, looking to our new spaceship. Everything was better since our last journey. Thanks to the hard work of our scientists, Marcos and Laura, the strength of gravity wouldn`t be felt in space. It was the last day on Earth. We would go tomorrow. We were celebrating till late, and then everyone went home with their families.
Not everyone! I stayed there, because I hated to say “goodbye”. Then, I would call my family. I was sitting near the window, watching the sky, when I heard someone coming in.
-    Who is there? – I asked.
No one answered. “It should have been me” I tought. But, that noise was heard again, this time stronger and closer. I went behind the wall and grabbed the fisrt thing heavy I found. I was ready to hit that person, but the light went on at the last moment and that one was saved by miracle. I knew him perfectly. But, what was he doing there, when everybody should be home, with their families???
Who came????
Who came????
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Mia and Manu thinking how to help their friends
Mia and Manu thinking how to help their friends
I know it has been a long time since the last time I published a chapter, but I haven`t been very well recently!
But, I want to say thanks to Lusiana, who made me change the opinion about the story!
Lusiana, this chapter is dedicated to you, for all you have done to help me!
Hope you like it!

Chapter 6
Mia : I think I know who is the mysterious girl!
Ma : Who?
Mia : …….If it is what I think it is…..
Ma : Come on, Mia! Tell me!
Mia : no! I have to be sure first!
Ma : Mia, what are you going to do? Mia!
But, it was late. Mia had gone running through the hall. I knew that way of behaving of...
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trying to explain everything to Michi
trying to explain everything to Michi
Guys, don`t get excited with these chapters, because the best is yet to come!
For me, the most romantic ever is chapter 9, that`s the most romantci I have ever written!
Hope you like this one!
muchos besos

Chapter 3
Xx : What are you doing here?
That voice sounded familiar! But, from where? I was still sleeping and I couldn`t think clearly, but at last, the screamings of that woman, waked me up completely. I stood up and I saw in front of me…. Michi, my mother`s best friend, who for “coincidence” worked with our team.
Ma : Michi, what are you doing here?
Mi : What am i doing here? What...
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