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I am incredibly proud of this peice ( I never though it was possible for me to write this much in a day!) let me know if you agree.
Twilightsauce
Training was hard but incredibly fun much to mum and dad’s dislike. Kate had helped me like she had my mum and Emmet and Jasper were teaching me tactics.
“Okay Emmet, I’m ready to go again!” I called after he had managed to floor me for the sixteenth time. As I slipped into a low crouch I flashed Esme a huge grin, I had hardly got to spend any alone time with her since we arrived in Denali, what with the sadistic vampire and me being sedated. A low growl erupted from my chest as Emmet and I lunged into each other with an ear-splitting crash. Somehow we grabbed each other’s arms in mid air before we fell to the ground where we detached as I wheeled behind him and before he knew what was happening I was on his back with my teeth bared, inches away from his throat. Even though I was not venomous this was the best way to attack vampires. All of a sudden there was a loud round of applause and as I looked around every face was an image of pure joy.
“Yay, I did it I actually beat you Emmet, does this mean I pass?” I giggled as I jumped of his back.
“Ugh, I suppose. But I wasn’t ready and I want a rematch after all of this is done.” He grumbled as Jasper and Edward roared with laughter.
“Well done my darling, it was amazing.” Esme sighed as Mum took my hand in hers and pulled me into a hug.
“Thanks Esme, hey mum can we go out now, like to follow the scent for ourselves?” I questioned eagerly, anxious to try out my newly discovered skills. I saw mum throw dad and Carlisle a worried look but Carlisle reassured her,
“Why don’t we all go and split up out we can spread out and stretch our legs, maybe do some hunting while we are at it?” Carlisle suggested mildly, “and if anyone finds anything new you call me and we all meet back here.” He added in a more severe voice.
“That sounds cool to me; Jacob and I can go out together. I want to check out the trail for myself.” I said in a steady voice.
“Well ok then, as long as you promise to hunt and call us if you need us.” Dad smiled, speaking for the first time.
“We will dad,” I sighed as I grabbed Jacobs hand and sprinted towards the front door, to freedom.
It was cool and green in the sunny woods but it wasn’t nearly as nice as the forests in Forks. I smiled as Jacob took hold of my hand again and pulled me towards the trail.
“Before we go I want to give you something,” I whispered placing my left hand on his russet coloured chest.
“Mmmm, I’ve been thinking the same,” Jake murmured, running his hands through my brown curls. As I leaned in Jacob placed both hands against my chest and held me back this was unusual, Jacob NEVER held back.
“Should your dad know about this?” he questioned with a smirk
“Definitely not.” I replied sternly
“Then I will have to control what I think around him, and maybe you’re...” he laughed, but he could not finish his sentence as I had placed my hand over his mouth,
“Just shut up and kiss me,” I whispered as our lips met.
When our lips met it was perfect, as usual. His tanned body pressed against my pale one, it was like our souls were intertwined. We were meant to be together. My hands ran through his short hair and when the kiss ended I slipped my hands behind his neck.
“Renesmee Carlie Cullen, I love you more than anything on this planet, more than air. I would do anything for you and I want to make you happy. You are my other half, you complete my soul.” He whispered his voice saturated with emotion. I smiled as a warm tear spilled over the brim of my eye. That was the best thing about being half human; I got to keep my human traits even when I did not age anymore.
“And I feel the same way for you, only it is a hundred times more.” I whispered, my voice breaking at the end.
“Trust me you can’t love me more than I love you.” he smiled.
“Jake...” but I never finished sentence as Jake had froze and was in a low protective crouch in front of me. That’s when I smelt it, it was Nahul.
“Jake, please don’t do anything stupid!” I wailed as he burst into a wolf mid stride. I took a deep breath to calm myself as I dug into my pocket for my silver cell phone. When I finally fished it out I was already catching up with Jacob.
“Carlisle, Nahul is here and we are on his trail now but we are going to need back up; I don’t want to kill him but I not sure if Jacob fells the same way!” i garbled down the phone in a panic.
“Calm down Nessie, Esme and I are on our way and the others will be with you in about 5 minutes. “ Carlisle replied in his soothing voice.”
“Thanks Carlisle, I have to go now and find Jake before he does something stupid.”
“Yes ok Nessie, we will be with you shortly, bye.” Carlisle said.
I snapped the phone shut and sped up; if I wanted any chance of finding Jake then I would have to hurry. All of a sudden I broke through a wall of ferns and there he was my Jacob, circling a very scary version of Nahul.
“JACOB, STOP PLEASE! Don’t hurt him; I want to know why he has done this to us.” I yelled, only lowering my voice at the end due to the sobs that I could feel building up in my chest. As soon as he heard my scream Jacob threw an angry growl in Nahul’s direction but plodded over to where I stood.
“Don’t move,” I said in a deadly velvet voice, which sounded very much like my fathers. “The others are on their way and they would catch you.” I said looking directly into his burgundy eyes.
“Hah, I would love to see them try, but I will stay; for you.” He laughed, it wasn’t his usual happy laugh, this laugh was full of bitterness and jealousy.
“Nahul, you are a close friend to me but that is all I can ever be to you. I love Jacob; I want to sp end the rest of my life with him. I am truly sorry that you thought my feelings differed.” I cried, tears now streaming down my cheeks.
“Then I will have to end your life!” Nahul roared charging at me with alarming speed.
“Nahul you...” but my voice broke off as I was suddenly swept off my feet by Carlisle, who had just come rushing out of the tress with the rest of the Cullen’s and Denali’s, and was now behind the group. I instantly placed myself into a low crouch but I could not help but gasp at the sight that met my eyes.
I am incredibly proud of this peice ( I never though it was possible for me to write this much in a day!) let me know if you agree.
Twilightsauce
Training was hard but incredibly fun much to mum and dad’s dislike. Kate had helped me like she had my mum and Emmet and Jasper were teaching me tactics.
“Okay Emmet, I’m ready to go again!” I called after he had managed to floor me for the sixteenth time. As I slipped into a low crouch I flashed Esme a huge grin, I had hardly got to spend any alone time with her since we arrived in Denali, what with the sadistic vampire and me being sedated. A low growl erupted from my chest as Emmet and I lunged into each other with an ear-splitting crash. Somehow we grabbed each other’s arms in mid air before we fell to the ground where we detached as I wheeled behind him and before he knew what was happening I was on his back with my teeth bared, inches away from his throat. Even though I was not venomous this was the best way to attack vampires. All of a sudden there was a loud round of applause and as I looked around every face was an image of pure joy.
“Yay, I did it I actually beat you Emmet, does this mean I pass?” I giggled as I jumped of his back.
“Ugh, I suppose. But I wasn’t ready and I want a rematch after all of this is done.” He grumbled as Jasper and Edward roared with laughter.
“Well done my darling, it was amazing.” Esme sighed as Mum took my hand in hers and pulled me into a hug.
“Thanks Esme, hey mum can we go out now, like to follow the scent for ourselves?” I questioned eagerly, anxious to try out my newly discovered skills. I saw mum throw dad and Carlisle a worried look but Carlisle reassured her,
“Why don’t we all go and split up out we can spread out and stretch our legs, maybe do some hunting while we are at it?” Carlisle suggested mildly, “and if anyone finds anything new you call me and we all meet back here.” He added in a more severe voice.
“That sounds cool to me; Jacob and I can go out together. I want to check out the trail for myself.” I said in a steady voice.
“Well ok then, as long as you promise to hunt and call us if you need us.” Dad smiled, speaking for the first time.
“We will dad,” I sighed as I grabbed Jacobs hand and sprinted towards the front door, to freedom.
It was cool and green in the sunny woods but it wasn’t nearly as nice as the forests in Forks. I smiled as Jacob took hold of my hand again and pulled me towards the trail.
“Before we go I want to give you something,” I whispered placing my left hand on his russet coloured chest.
“Mmmm, I’ve been thinking the same,” Jake murmured, running his hands through my brown curls. As I leaned in Jacob placed both hands against my chest and held me back this was unusual, Jacob NEVER held back.
“Should your dad know about this?” he questioned with a smirk
“Definitely not.” I replied sternly
“Then I will have to control what I think around him, and maybe you’re...” he laughed, but he could not finish his sentence as I had placed my hand over his mouth,
“Just shut up and kiss me,” I whispered as our lips met.
When our lips met it was perfect, as usual. His tanned body pressed against my pale one, it was like our souls were intertwined. We were meant to be together. My hands ran through his short hair and when the kiss ended I slipped my hands behind his neck.
“Renesmee Carlie Cullen, I love you more than anything on this planet, more than air. I would do anything for you and I want to make you happy. You are my other half, you complete my soul.” He whispered his voice saturated with emotion. I smiled as a warm tear spilled over the brim of my eye. That was the best thing about being half human; I got to keep my human traits even when I did not age anymore.
“And I feel the same way for you, only it is a hundred times more.” I whispered, my voice breaking at the end.
“Trust me you can’t love me more than I love you.” he smiled.
“Jake...” but I never finished sentence as Jake had froze and was in a low protective crouch in front of me. That’s when I smelt it, it was Nahul.
“Jake, please don’t do anything stupid!” I wailed as he burst into a wolf mid stride. I took a deep breath to calm myself as I dug into my pocket for my silver cell phone. When I finally fished it out I was already catching up with Jacob.
“Carlisle, Nahul is here and we are on his trail now but we are going to need back up; I don’t want to kill him but I not sure if Jacob fells the same way!” i garbled down the phone in a panic.
“Calm down Nessie, Esme and I are on our way and the others will be with you in about 5 minutes. “ Carlisle replied in his soothing voice.”
“Thanks Carlisle, I have to go now and find Jake before he does something stupid.”
“Yes ok Nessie, we will be with you shortly, bye.” Carlisle said.
I snapped the phone shut and sped up; if I wanted any chance of finding Jake then I would have to hurry. All of a sudden I broke through a wall of ferns and there he was my Jacob, circling a very scary version of Nahul.
“JACOB, STOP PLEASE! Don’t hurt him; I want to know why he has done this to us.” I yelled, only lowering my voice at the end due to the sobs that I could feel building up in my chest. As soon as he heard my scream Jacob threw an angry growl in Nahul’s direction but plodded over to where I stood.
“Don’t move,” I said in a deadly velvet voice, which sounded very much like my fathers. “The others are on their way and they would catch you.” I said looking directly into his burgundy eyes.
“Hah, I would love to see them try, but I will stay; for you.” He laughed, it wasn’t his usual happy laugh, this laugh was full of bitterness and jealousy.
“Nahul, you are a close friend to me but that is all I can ever be to you. I love Jacob; I want to sp end the rest of my life with him. I am truly sorry that you thought my feelings differed.” I cried, tears now streaming down my cheeks.
“Then I will have to end your life!” Nahul roared charging at me with alarming speed.
“Nahul you...” but my voice broke off as I was suddenly swept off my feet by Carlisle, who had just come rushing out of the tress with the rest of the Cullen’s and Denali’s, and was now behind the group. I instantly placed myself into a low crouch but I could not help but gasp at the sight that met my eyes.
