Some pone - for old time's sake

The last solstice

Chapter 16: The first step


The first ten minutes were one of the most awkward moments Nocturnal Mirage has ever experienced. Since he entered the sanctuary of the solar Princess, none of them said a word to each other. Celestia lay on the sofa immovably, observing the stallion with penetrating eyes and mild inquiry. The delirious, weird flame has disappeared from her purple iris, only now Mirage could acknowledge how all-pervading the alicorn’s look truly is. He felt like he’s staring into a deep well with crystal clear water on the bottom. The Princess’ aura was much...

The three all turned, and looked at the big room they had been lead too. It was fairly open and empty, almost like an theater room. At one end of the room, there were six square vats, each one nearly full with individual Spectra. Above them was a peculiar looking machine. From a central stack, six hoses broke off and lead above each of the individual vats. At the top of the stack was a single opening, red with rust despite the rest of the machine to be shiny and clean. Even further above that was a fairly complex looking object, with chains and gears hanging off of beams and pipes loosely....

Well I can't believe the day has come for me to post the first 1/4 of my original story!!! Eeek!! I'm so exited! I know its really long and I was gonna put it up chapter buy chapter but whatever. :) Please comment and tell me what you think! Oh and just so you know there is a little violence but thats kinda nessesary for the theme. The next part probly won't be done till summer or late fall. I'm taking this very seriously and just this 1/4 of one took weeks of editing and just typing out the plot took forever! Well anyways as always I hope you enjoy!

~DisneyFan333

10 years after the war

Lucy
Chapter...

After what Shining Armour thought he saw the night before, he and his wife, Princess Cadance, sought out to find help on how to get rid of what was haunting them, yet they don't know that it was the succubus. First, the couple went to the C.E.P.D., the Crystal Empire Police Department. The two explained what happened last night, but the chief said, "I think you two may be imagining things. There's no such thing as monsters of the supernatural world. It's all a bunch of gibberish." But it wasn't gibberish. The two found a professor of the supernatural, and when he was told about what happened...

Tear Drop was asleep in her bed she snuggled into her pillow until she felt a nudge "Tear Drop time to wake up" she heard her older brother say as he kept nudging her to wake up "uhhh Nighty I don't wanna go to school" Tear Drop covered her face with her blanket Night Fire chuckled "come on now sis you haft to go to school!" Tear Drop sighed "but no pony likes me there" she sat up Night Fire smiled and hugged his little sister "don't worry I'm sure today will be more awesome beside i made your favourite down stairs" Tear Drop's ears went straight up as she heard that and zoomed down stairs...

So, since today is Tawnyjay's birthday, I decided today was the perfect day to post the article I've been thinking about. Here I go.

I've noticed that in MLP:FiM, birthdays suck. Really the only birthday that didn't suck that we've seen was Gummy's birthday. I can't really talk about Cheerilee or Zecora, since their birthdays were only mentioned in passing, but all the other ones we've seen, SUCK. And I have three and a half examples to show this.

I'll start with the half, while although not technically a birthday, I still felt I should mention. This would be Diamon Tiara's cuteceniara (I hope...

It starts with me watching tv, drawing, or anything else, when a portal appears out of nowhere! I thought I was still asleep, but it wasn't a dream. I figured it was a time travel portal, so I jump in, and.....ZAP!! I thought I went back in time. Turns out I got turned into a stallion and got sent to Ponyville! I was stunned. I passed out, and six mares surrounded me. One said, "I've never seen him before!" Another said "Maybe he can help me buck apples!" And the last one said "He's kinda cute! Does he like parties?" I was out for two minutes. The moment I woke up, the same six mares were staring...

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Dan - Tricky. I could think it was him. It's time to take him out. He is hiding in his bills in Georgia.
Jade - Let's kill the man then.
Shadow - I'm in it.
Dimitri - Let's go.
Yuri - For our country. Well... Your country.
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Sandman. - *looks around Canterlot* everything is destroied... Damn.
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-Georgia-
Dan - *falls of the hill*
??? - *grabs him* where are they.
Dan - Shadow is pinned down with The and Dimitri. Jade location is unknown. Hank so you were listening to us.
Hank - I won't let my friend down let's go.
Dan - *follows him* that's the Villa
Hank - Mhmh... I leave it to you.
Dan - What? You're...

Dan - Good to hear Delta Force.
US President - My man did great job eh?
SAS Leader - Not as good as Fireteam Reaper.
Hooffman - This is Hooffman. De La Rosa spilled the beans.
Dan - And?
Hooffman - Stalion called Vladimir Chehenkov is now co-leader of this army.
Dan - Chehenkov. Right hoof of Golden Horn.
Shadow - You sure you killed Golden Horn.
Dan - I didn't only killed him with my own hoofs in Ponyville but also watched him choke on his own blood.
Dimitri - Is it on? Hey my good friend Dan.
Dan - Dimitri!?
Yuri - I'm here too... Damn it...
Dan - You guys.
Dimitri - Listien to time to speak. Chehenkov...