concept:six students begin to notice strange occurances after sharing a dream about an angel and a horrific end. Soon a student, matching the description of the angel from the dream transfers to there school, is it an omen?
title:undetermained
page 1
panel 1
Girl(Nami) with one out reached hand in snowing pink-ish void
nami:"what?, snow? but its the middle july?"
panel 2
Looking over at light source off panel.
nami:"what? who is that?"
panel 3
glowing figure of light girl half off panel
nami:"what are you doing"
Panel 4
girl(nami) arises from bed (bed head and pejay's)
nami:"huh?, just a dream?"
panel 5
girl(nami) looks over at clock
panel 6
girl(nami) horrified at the sight.
Nami:"OH MY GOD! IM LATE!!!"
panel 7
girl(nami) running down stairs barly dressed
Nami:"im so dead!"
panel 8
girl(Rei) and boy(yushiro)in hallway, boys face covered by locker door
Rei:"come on, please let me copie your English homework
yushiro:"no way, last time you got caught, we both got detention"
Panel 9
locker door closes reveling boys face
yushiro:"why didnt you do it last night?"
panel 10
Girl(rei)kind of embarrased, thought bubble of wrestling
rei:"i was busy..."
Panel 11
boy(yushiro) walking away
boy:"i got to go, see yhea
panel 12
book falls out of boys(yushiro's)backpack
Page 2
panel 1
girl(rei) off panel close up on the book
Rei:"hmm?"
panel 2
girl(rei)picks up book
panel 3
girl(rei)hold book to her face, boy in background turning around
panel 4
girl(rei) with big grin looking at book
Rei:"hahahahahaha"
Panel 5
boy(yushiro) looking embarrased slightly teary eyed
yushiro:"Heeeeeeey!?!"
panel 6
girl(rei) holding her side with one hand,book in one hand over boy(yushiro) head
Rei:"i cannot beleive this"
yushiro:"stop that, it's mine give it back"
panel 7
girl(rei) laughing holding girl above boys(yushiro) head despretly tring to reach it
Rei:" oh my god, i have to tell nami"
panel 8
boy(yushiro) extremly embarrased, blushing and waving hands back and forth rapidly to imply "no"
yushiro:"no, no, no one can know about this, please just between you and me"
panel 9
girl(rei) laughing histaricly
rei:"no way, everyone has to see this"
panel 10
girl(rei) walking away with book, still laughing
Panel 11
boy(yushiro) on his knees begging, tears in his eyes
yushiro:"please i'll do anything"
panel 12
girl(rei)turning around with malicious smile
rei:"anything?"
page 3
boy(yushiro)looking fearful
yushiro:"yea..yes"
panel 1
boy(yushiro) wiping tears from his eyes
yushiro:"just give me my book back"
Panel 2
girl(rei)standing over boy(yushiro), only girls(rei) legs on panel
rei:"okay, lets start with last nights homework"
panel 3
boy(yushiro)handing over his paper to her
yushiro:"is that all?"
panel 4
girl(rei) looking at boy bent over one eye shut, shaking her index finger back and forth
rei:"not even close"
panel 5
girl(rei) whispering in boys ear
panel 6
girl(rei) smiling standing over boy
rei:"go"
panel 7
girl(nami) running into panel
Nami:"am i late?"
panel 8
girl(rei) looking over at girl(nami)
rei:"oh hey Nami, no not yet but come her for a second"
panel 9
Girl(nami) looking up at girl(Rei)
Nami:"what is it?"
page 3
panel 1
girl(rei) shows girl(nami) a page torn from yushiro's book
panel 2
Nami's face blushing
nami:"hmmm..."
panel 3
Nami shocked expresion/blushing
panel 4
girl(rei)looking over girls(nami's) sholder nami still having shocked expresion
rei:"i know, right"
panel 5
looking at page from areal veiw, Nami and Yushiro's name bordered by a heart
Rei:"looks like you got an secret admirer"
panel 6
girl(rei) laughing, girl(nami) as chibi, blushing
panel 7
girl(nami's) face still blushing
Nami:(thinking)"he likes me?"
panel 8
girl(nami) staring intently at the page
Rei:"so"
panel 9
girl(rei) looking at girl(nami)
rei:"so, do you like him back?"
panel 10
girl(nami) looking back up at girl(rei)
nami:"wha..what?, thats crazy"
panel 11
girl(nami) with pointer on her cheek looking quizical
Nami:"oh yhea, i almost forgot, i had a dream..."
panel 12
girl(nami) looking as she is trying to remember
Nami:"it was cold, and there was an angel"
panel 13
girl(rei) looking slightly annoyed
Rei:"another angel dream? come on we dont have time for this we got to get to class"
Page 4
panel 1
girl(nami) with her cheek resting on her palm
nami:"it's always the same"
panel 2
teacher with both hands on his desk looking angrly at nami
Teacher:"Sakamoto! if you would kindly rejoin the class"
panel 3
girl(nami) still resting her cheek on her palm
nami:"that angel, who's it?"
panel 4
teacher throwing book at nami
Teacher:"SAKAMOTO!"
panel 5
book hits girl(Nami) in the face, who falls over in her chair
panel 6
teacher looking angerly towrds Nami
teacher:"now stand and adress the class!"
panel 7
girl(Nami) standing stiff nervously at attention
nami:"yes sir, Sakamoto,Nami class B"
panel 8
girl(nami) talking inaudiably
nami:"(thinking) i wonder if my dreams mean something..."
panel 9
(later in the day)lunch period in the courtyard nami eating a bun
Panel 10
Shadow casting over nami
Yushiro:"he..hey sakamoto"
panel 11
girl(nami) blushing smiling looking up at boy(yushiro) off panel
nami:"oh, hey toriyama"
panel 12
boy(yushiro)looking down at his feet blush looking nervously
Yushiro:"Na..Nami, i just wanted to say.."
panel 13
side view of the two of them(yurshiro & Nami)
Yushiro:"i wanted to say that...that.."
page 5
panel 1
Side view of the two of them(yushiro & nami) in a romantic atmoshpere
Nami:"yes..."
Yushro:"that, I LIKE WOMANS UNDERWARE"
panel 2
grey background, side view of the two of them(yushio and nami)
Nami:"(over head speach bubble).........."
panel 3
boy(Yushiro) looking extremly embarrased,
Yushiro:"thats all."
panel 4
boy(yushiro) walking away from girl(Nami)
(Nami speachless)
panel 5
boy(Yuriro) talking to someone(Rei) off panel
Yushiro:"there, i did what you said, now you promise not to tell anyone"
panel 6
girl(Rei) leaning against wall partly in shadows
Rei:"not just yet, i have a few more things in mind for you"
panel 7
(later in the day)girl(Nami) walking home
Nami:"(thinking) yushiro..."
panel 8
nami walking down street head down Sakiho and Misaki off panel
Sakiho and Misaki:"Nami-chan!"
panel 9
girl(Nami) looking over at girl(Sakiho) and girl(Misaki)
Nami:"hey sakiho, hey misaki what's up?"
Misaki:"did you hear? there was a gang shoot out today"
panel 10
girl(Sakiho) hiding behind girl(Miskai) Nami off panel
Nami:"really?"
misaki:"yhea they're enforcing a new curfew"
panel 11
girl(Nami) looking shocked
Nami:"(thinking)this town used to be so nice, now it seems to be more like a war ground"
panel 12
girl(Misaki) and girl(Sakiho)
Sakiho:"you better get going..."
Misaki:"yhea(teasingly)before the bosozoku get you"
page 6
Panel 1
(that night) girl(Nami) walking from bathroom
panel 2
girl(Nami) looking off panel suspicously
Nami:"h...hello?"
panel 3
Window curtins with a silhouette man perched ib the belcony, girl(nami) off panel
Nami:"is someone there?"
panel 4
girl(nami) walking to the belcony
panel 5
view from behind the girl(Nami) as if looking over her sholder
panel 6
looking over her sholder, girl(nami) pulling aside the curtins
panel 7
image of an angelic wing extended
panel 8
close up of girl(nami's) eye in shock
panel 9
girl(nami) sitting up in bed(bedhead, in pj's, ect.)
panel 10
girl (Nami) looking over at clock (8:30 pm)
nami:"Oh god! not agian!"
panel 11
girl(nami) running down stairs
page 7
Panel 1
girl(nami) running down street, boy(yushiro) walking on the side
panel 2
Boy(yushiro) with and arm extended to implacate "stop"
Yushiro:"H...hey Sakamoto, wait up!"
panel 3
boy(yushiro) chasing after girl(Nami) down the street
Yushiro:"hey, wait up"
Panel 4
girl(nami) stopping, looking over to see who is calling her, blushing slightly
Nami:"oh, toriyama hi"
panel 5
boy(yushiro) smiling, slightly blushing
Yushiro:"so... wanna walk to school together"
panel 6
girl(nami) looking puzzeled, Boy(yushiro) explaining
Nami:"but..were gonna be late, shouldnt we hurry?"
Yushiro:"well we're already late, it's a quarter to ten"
panel 7
girl(Nami) with both hands on her cheeks, having a hopeless or shocked expression
panel 8
boy(yushiro) looking at girl(nami) with a questioning expresion
"Sakamoto? whats wrong?"
panel 9
Girl(Nami) breaking down, head down in sad/ hoplessness
"i cant beileve i slept in"
panel 10
girl(Nami) looking up at boy(yushiro)
"wait, what are you doing out of class?"
panel 11
Boy(yushiro) looking off, embarased
Yushiro:"well...i..i was running an errand.."
Panel 12
Girl(nami) looking at the bag that the boy(Yushiro) is holding off panel
Nami:"who's it for?"
page 8
panel 1
Boy(yusihiro) thinking back to what girl(rei) said
Rei:"(Yushiro remembering)i need you to run a errand for me, go downtown and buy a box lunch"
Yushiro:"(yushiro remembering)i'll just buy you lunch..."
panel 2
Boy(yusihiro) lost in thought
Rei:(yushiro remembering)"it's not for me.."
Yushiro:(yushiro remembering)"what?"
Rei:"(yushiro remembering)never mind, just do what i say..."
panel 3
Girl(Nami) looking at boy(yushiro) who is in daze
Nami:"are you okay?"
Yushiro:"huh?"
panel 4
Boy(yushiro) hesitating, embarresed choked up on his words
Rei:(yushiro remembering)"and dont tell anyone you're doing this for me or else"
Yushiro:"i uh..."
panel 5
Boy(yushiro) trying not to make eye contact, nevously looking around
Yushiro"well...you see..."
panel 6
Boy(yushiro) looking away, remebering the last thing that girl(rei) said
Rei:"(yushiro remembering) one more thing,if you see nami on the way you have to tell her..."
panel 7
a slight zoom on Boy(yushiro) still thinking about Rei's words
Rei:"(yushiro remembering) that it's....
panel 8
zoom on boys(yushiro) face, blushing
Rei:"(yushiro remembering) that it's for your lover."
Panel 9
side view of both boy(yushiro) and girl(nami)
Yushiro:"i was running an errand for...Shuya, my lover!"
panel 10
girl(nami), trying not to make eye contact out of emberrasment
Nami:"Mi... Misaki Shuya?"
panel 11
Girl(nami) looking down embarassed, crying slightly,boy(yushiro) off panel
Yushiro:"i need to be getting back"
panel 12
boy(yushiro)leaving, running down the road,girl(nami) in bottom left cornor
Yushiro:"bye"
Nami:"but wait, i thought we were going to walk together..."
page 9
panel 1
girl(nami) outside the school gates, the courtyard filled with people
Nami:"(thinking)no way toriyama would act like that, i wonder if rei has something to to with this"
panel 2
girl(nami) be called off panel by girl(Rei)
Rei:"hey, Nami where you been?"
panel 3
Girl(nami) accusingly talking to girl(rei)who tries to act inecent
Nami:"sorry, i guess i was having a weird dream, anyway did you know about why toriyamahas been acting so weird?"
Rei:"what? nope, no idea what your talking about..."
panel 4
Girl(rei) nervously trying to avoid girl(nami's) question
Rei:"you said you had a dream? what was it about?"
panel 5
Girl(nami)(remembering her dream)Nami, in her room opening the window curtains
nami:"i was in my room... and there was someone at the window"
panel 6
Girl(nami)(remembering her dream)standing on the belcony
Nami:"then, i was on the belcony and i saw his face..."
panel 7
girl(rei) with a look of intrege
Rei:"whos face?"
panel 8
Girl(nami) looking cheerful Girl(rei) off panel
Nami:"the angel,"
Rei:"more dreams about angels?"
page 10
title:undetermained
page 1
panel 1
Girl(Nami) with one out reached hand in snowing pink-ish void
nami:"what?, snow? but its the middle july?"
panel 2
Looking over at light source off panel.
nami:"what? who is that?"
panel 3
glowing figure of light girl half off panel
nami:"what are you doing"
Panel 4
girl(nami) arises from bed (bed head and pejay's)
nami:"huh?, just a dream?"
panel 5
girl(nami) looks over at clock
panel 6
girl(nami) horrified at the sight.
Nami:"OH MY GOD! IM LATE!!!"
panel 7
girl(nami) running down stairs barly dressed
Nami:"im so dead!"
panel 8
girl(Rei) and boy(yushiro)in hallway, boys face covered by locker door
Rei:"come on, please let me copie your English homework
yushiro:"no way, last time you got caught, we both got detention"
Panel 9
locker door closes reveling boys face
yushiro:"why didnt you do it last night?"
panel 10
Girl(rei)kind of embarrased, thought bubble of wrestling
rei:"i was busy..."
Panel 11
boy(yushiro) walking away
boy:"i got to go, see yhea
panel 12
book falls out of boys(yushiro's)backpack
Page 2
panel 1
girl(rei) off panel close up on the book
Rei:"hmm?"
panel 2
girl(rei)picks up book
panel 3
girl(rei)hold book to her face, boy in background turning around
panel 4
girl(rei) with big grin looking at book
Rei:"hahahahahaha"
Panel 5
boy(yushiro) looking embarrased slightly teary eyed
yushiro:"Heeeeeeey!?!"
panel 6
girl(rei) holding her side with one hand,book in one hand over boy(yushiro) head
Rei:"i cannot beleive this"
yushiro:"stop that, it's mine give it back"
panel 7
girl(rei) laughing holding girl above boys(yushiro) head despretly tring to reach it
Rei:" oh my god, i have to tell nami"
panel 8
boy(yushiro) extremly embarrased, blushing and waving hands back and forth rapidly to imply "no"
yushiro:"no, no, no one can know about this, please just between you and me"
panel 9
girl(rei) laughing histaricly
rei:"no way, everyone has to see this"
panel 10
girl(rei) walking away with book, still laughing
Panel 11
boy(yushiro) on his knees begging, tears in his eyes
yushiro:"please i'll do anything"
panel 12
girl(rei)turning around with malicious smile
rei:"anything?"
page 3
boy(yushiro)looking fearful
yushiro:"yea..yes"
panel 1
boy(yushiro) wiping tears from his eyes
yushiro:"just give me my book back"
Panel 2
girl(rei)standing over boy(yushiro), only girls(rei) legs on panel
rei:"okay, lets start with last nights homework"
panel 3
boy(yushiro)handing over his paper to her
yushiro:"is that all?"
panel 4
girl(rei) looking at boy bent over one eye shut, shaking her index finger back and forth
rei:"not even close"
panel 5
girl(rei) whispering in boys ear
panel 6
girl(rei) smiling standing over boy
rei:"go"
panel 7
girl(nami) running into panel
Nami:"am i late?"
panel 8
girl(rei) looking over at girl(nami)
rei:"oh hey Nami, no not yet but come her for a second"
panel 9
Girl(nami) looking up at girl(Rei)
Nami:"what is it?"
page 3
panel 1
girl(rei) shows girl(nami) a page torn from yushiro's book
panel 2
Nami's face blushing
nami:"hmmm..."
panel 3
Nami shocked expresion/blushing
panel 4
girl(rei)looking over girls(nami's) sholder nami still having shocked expresion
rei:"i know, right"
panel 5
looking at page from areal veiw, Nami and Yushiro's name bordered by a heart
Rei:"looks like you got an secret admirer"
panel 6
girl(rei) laughing, girl(nami) as chibi, blushing
panel 7
girl(nami's) face still blushing
Nami:(thinking)"he likes me?"
panel 8
girl(nami) staring intently at the page
Rei:"so"
panel 9
girl(rei) looking at girl(nami)
rei:"so, do you like him back?"
panel 10
girl(nami) looking back up at girl(rei)
nami:"wha..what?, thats crazy"
panel 11
girl(nami) with pointer on her cheek looking quizical
Nami:"oh yhea, i almost forgot, i had a dream..."
panel 12
girl(nami) looking as she is trying to remember
Nami:"it was cold, and there was an angel"
panel 13
girl(rei) looking slightly annoyed
Rei:"another angel dream? come on we dont have time for this we got to get to class"
Page 4
panel 1
girl(nami) with her cheek resting on her palm
nami:"it's always the same"
panel 2
teacher with both hands on his desk looking angrly at nami
Teacher:"Sakamoto! if you would kindly rejoin the class"
panel 3
girl(nami) still resting her cheek on her palm
nami:"that angel, who's it?"
panel 4
teacher throwing book at nami
Teacher:"SAKAMOTO!"
panel 5
book hits girl(Nami) in the face, who falls over in her chair
panel 6
teacher looking angerly towrds Nami
teacher:"now stand and adress the class!"
panel 7
girl(Nami) standing stiff nervously at attention
nami:"yes sir, Sakamoto,Nami class B"
panel 8
girl(nami) talking inaudiably
nami:"(thinking) i wonder if my dreams mean something..."
panel 9
(later in the day)lunch period in the courtyard nami eating a bun
Panel 10
Shadow casting over nami
Yushiro:"he..hey sakamoto"
panel 11
girl(nami) blushing smiling looking up at boy(yushiro) off panel
nami:"oh, hey toriyama"
panel 12
boy(yushiro)looking down at his feet blush looking nervously
Yushiro:"Na..Nami, i just wanted to say.."
panel 13
side view of the two of them(yurshiro & Nami)
Yushiro:"i wanted to say that...that.."
page 5
panel 1
Side view of the two of them(yushiro & nami) in a romantic atmoshpere
Nami:"yes..."
Yushro:"that, I LIKE WOMANS UNDERWARE"
panel 2
grey background, side view of the two of them(yushio and nami)
Nami:"(over head speach bubble).........."
panel 3
boy(Yushiro) looking extremly embarrased,
Yushiro:"thats all."
panel 4
boy(yushiro) walking away from girl(Nami)
(Nami speachless)
panel 5
boy(Yuriro) talking to someone(Rei) off panel
Yushiro:"there, i did what you said, now you promise not to tell anyone"
panel 6
girl(Rei) leaning against wall partly in shadows
Rei:"not just yet, i have a few more things in mind for you"
panel 7
(later in the day)girl(Nami) walking home
Nami:"(thinking) yushiro..."
panel 8
nami walking down street head down Sakiho and Misaki off panel
Sakiho and Misaki:"Nami-chan!"
panel 9
girl(Nami) looking over at girl(Sakiho) and girl(Misaki)
Nami:"hey sakiho, hey misaki what's up?"
Misaki:"did you hear? there was a gang shoot out today"
panel 10
girl(Sakiho) hiding behind girl(Miskai) Nami off panel
Nami:"really?"
misaki:"yhea they're enforcing a new curfew"
panel 11
girl(Nami) looking shocked
Nami:"(thinking)this town used to be so nice, now it seems to be more like a war ground"
panel 12
girl(Misaki) and girl(Sakiho)
Sakiho:"you better get going..."
Misaki:"yhea(teasingly)before the bosozoku get you"
page 6
Panel 1
(that night) girl(Nami) walking from bathroom
panel 2
girl(Nami) looking off panel suspicously
Nami:"h...hello?"
panel 3
Window curtins with a silhouette man perched ib the belcony, girl(nami) off panel
Nami:"is someone there?"
panel 4
girl(nami) walking to the belcony
panel 5
view from behind the girl(Nami) as if looking over her sholder
panel 6
looking over her sholder, girl(nami) pulling aside the curtins
panel 7
image of an angelic wing extended
panel 8
close up of girl(nami's) eye in shock
panel 9
girl(nami) sitting up in bed(bedhead, in pj's, ect.)
panel 10
girl (Nami) looking over at clock (8:30 pm)
nami:"Oh god! not agian!"
panel 11
girl(nami) running down stairs
page 7
Panel 1
girl(nami) running down street, boy(yushiro) walking on the side
panel 2
Boy(yushiro) with and arm extended to implacate "stop"
Yushiro:"H...hey Sakamoto, wait up!"
panel 3
boy(yushiro) chasing after girl(Nami) down the street
Yushiro:"hey, wait up"
Panel 4
girl(nami) stopping, looking over to see who is calling her, blushing slightly
Nami:"oh, toriyama hi"
panel 5
boy(yushiro) smiling, slightly blushing
Yushiro:"so... wanna walk to school together"
panel 6
girl(nami) looking puzzeled, Boy(yushiro) explaining
Nami:"but..were gonna be late, shouldnt we hurry?"
Yushiro:"well we're already late, it's a quarter to ten"
panel 7
girl(Nami) with both hands on her cheeks, having a hopeless or shocked expression
panel 8
boy(yushiro) looking at girl(nami) with a questioning expresion
"Sakamoto? whats wrong?"
panel 9
Girl(Nami) breaking down, head down in sad/ hoplessness
"i cant beileve i slept in"
panel 10
girl(Nami) looking up at boy(yushiro)
"wait, what are you doing out of class?"
panel 11
Boy(yushiro) looking off, embarased
Yushiro:"well...i..i was running an errand.."
Panel 12
Girl(nami) looking at the bag that the boy(Yushiro) is holding off panel
Nami:"who's it for?"
page 8
panel 1
Boy(yusihiro) thinking back to what girl(rei) said
Rei:"(Yushiro remembering)i need you to run a errand for me, go downtown and buy a box lunch"
Yushiro:"(yushiro remembering)i'll just buy you lunch..."
panel 2
Boy(yusihiro) lost in thought
Rei:(yushiro remembering)"it's not for me.."
Yushiro:(yushiro remembering)"what?"
Rei:"(yushiro remembering)never mind, just do what i say..."
panel 3
Girl(Nami) looking at boy(yushiro) who is in daze
Nami:"are you okay?"
Yushiro:"huh?"
panel 4
Boy(yushiro) hesitating, embarresed choked up on his words
Rei:(yushiro remembering)"and dont tell anyone you're doing this for me or else"
Yushiro:"i uh..."
panel 5
Boy(yushiro) trying not to make eye contact, nevously looking around
Yushiro"well...you see..."
panel 6
Boy(yushiro) looking away, remebering the last thing that girl(rei) said
Rei:"(yushiro remembering) one more thing,if you see nami on the way you have to tell her..."
panel 7
a slight zoom on Boy(yushiro) still thinking about Rei's words
Rei:"(yushiro remembering) that it's....
panel 8
zoom on boys(yushiro) face, blushing
Rei:"(yushiro remembering) that it's for your lover."
Panel 9
side view of both boy(yushiro) and girl(nami)
Yushiro:"i was running an errand for...Shuya, my lover!"
panel 10
girl(nami), trying not to make eye contact out of emberrasment
Nami:"Mi... Misaki Shuya?"
panel 11
Girl(nami) looking down embarassed, crying slightly,boy(yushiro) off panel
Yushiro:"i need to be getting back"
panel 12
boy(yushiro)leaving, running down the road,girl(nami) in bottom left cornor
Yushiro:"bye"
Nami:"but wait, i thought we were going to walk together..."
page 9
panel 1
girl(nami) outside the school gates, the courtyard filled with people
Nami:"(thinking)no way toriyama would act like that, i wonder if rei has something to to with this"
panel 2
girl(nami) be called off panel by girl(Rei)
Rei:"hey, Nami where you been?"
panel 3
Girl(nami) accusingly talking to girl(rei)who tries to act inecent
Nami:"sorry, i guess i was having a weird dream, anyway did you know about why toriyamahas been acting so weird?"
Rei:"what? nope, no idea what your talking about..."
panel 4
Girl(rei) nervously trying to avoid girl(nami's) question
Rei:"you said you had a dream? what was it about?"
panel 5
Girl(nami)(remembering her dream)Nami, in her room opening the window curtains
nami:"i was in my room... and there was someone at the window"
panel 6
Girl(nami)(remembering her dream)standing on the belcony
Nami:"then, i was on the belcony and i saw his face..."
panel 7
girl(rei) with a look of intrege
Rei:"whos face?"
panel 8
Girl(nami) looking cheerful Girl(rei) off panel
Nami:"the angel,"
Rei:"more dreams about angels?"
page 10