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I'm the freak, I got another idea for a story. But this time, I thought through the whole story line (unlike Switched, which is why I didn't write it for so long, sorry). Please comment and please tell me if you like it. If you do, I'll continue it :)


I sat in the airplane seat, too anxious and worried.
"You need to calm down." Alice said. "The plane won't get any faster, Edward!"
I couldn't help it, the plane ride is getting me nervous. I drummed my fingers on the sides of the seats.
"I can't help but worry, Alice. I would rather jump out this plane and run to Forks instead."
"Well, a plane is faster than running. We just need to wait, we will arrive at Seattle in about 10 minutes."
I groaned.

We finally arrived at Seattle and ran as fast as we could, vampire speed, to La Push.
"EDWARD! THE TREATY!" Alice yelled.
I ignored her. I rather have a war with the mongrels rather than loose her.
"BELLA! I yelled once we past the border.
I didn't see anyone at the cliff. No....

I heard Alice sobbing and saw one of the dogs coming by. I won't let myself believe what just happened.
"We were too late..." Alice whispered in between her sobs.
Then my world crashed right in front of my eyes.

What do you think? Are you guys confused?
Ok, here's the deal, Edward heard about Bella jumping off the cliff. This goes back to New Moon. But instead of Edward going to the Volturi, he tries to go to La Push and stop Alice's vision from happening. So here's the thing: Bella's dead.
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Not the best title.... but I hope you enjoy the article anyways. I hope that most of the people who are hating the Meebo chat signed the petition made in the forums on this spot. If you didn't.... DO IT NOW!!!!!!! ^_^


Jasper? That name was so familiar. Isn't that one of Alice's brothers? I looked at Angela, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, and Tyler. They all had startled and confused expression.
I stood up from my chair, since my food was finished.
"Do you want to check out what's going on?" I asked.
They nodded and we all went out of the cafeteria door. They were still confused.
"Where do we go?" Angela...
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Just got back from the mall, so I will write now. ^_^

Renesmee's POV


The drive to La Push was slow. I was a little nervious for what everyone will think. Did they know that Jacob will propose to me? Did my parents know? Maybe that was why my father was angry at Jacob before we left. I sighed. Jacob heard it.
"Is something wrong?" he asked with a small voice.
"What are you going to say to your dad about this?" I asked, with my voice shaking, from being nervous.
Jacob glanced at me, he was completely relaxed. I became a little frustrated.
"Chill, Nessie. I already told my dad and the pack about...
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I love your guys enthusiasm! Thanks you guys! I never expected you would love this story so much! Oh thanks to just_bella for helping me out with the simple facts of College since I have never been to one before LOL. ^_^

I still glanced at one of Alice's brother's eyes. THey were smothering and liquid gold. I had no idea what expression was on my face. I tried to feel it from inside-out and it felt blank, with no expressions. Then suddenly Alice's brother's expression turned frustrated, though I could figure out why. After a couple minutes of unconfortable silence, Alice spoke.
"Um... Edward...
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Last one for today! ^_^


I unpacked my things in about 20 minutes. There wasn't so many things to unpack in the first place. I only brought my clothes, some of my books, and toiletries. After I was done, I looked out of the window again, and saw the skyline of Juneau's sunset. It was beautiful up in the north. I missed home too. There was a computer next to my bed, so I decided to turn it on and see if Renee sent any emails. Alice was looking in her closet for some outfits to wear tommorrow. I ignored her.

The computer started up about 10 times faster than my actual computer. I smiled when I...
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