Alright, once again, Romeo and Juliet, but I made a few changes to some scenes. Alright, enjoy.
Duncan's P.O.V
Wow, that was the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. When I saw her, it seemed like I've known her forever. Back to Courtney, I finally found her sitting down at a table. "Hey babe." I greeted Courtney. She gave me a nasty look. "What do you want, Duncan?" Courtney carelessly asked me. "I wanted to know if you wanted to do something on Saturday." I calmly stated. She rolled her eyes at me. "Go jump off of a cliff. For you are a Montague, a neanderthal. Go pester some other girl." she ordered me. I smirked at her. "C'mon babe. I'll tell you how beautiful you are." I complimented her. Courtney flipped her hair back. "Well, I am one heck of a sight, but I do not love you. I may not love a dirty Montague, nothing but no good thugs." she insulted me. This was not a shock for me. It was regular for Courtney to put me in shame, but I know she wants me. She just doesn't realize it yet. I walked away. Before I left the Capulet party, I had to talk to that gorgeous girl again. When I noticed that she and her so called 'date' I think were done dancing, I walked up to her. She smiled at me. I smiled back. I wasn't sure what to say. She held out her hand and said, "Gwen." I took her hand, shook it, and said, "Duncan." When we touched hands, it felt like electricity. We were staring at each other again. I was gazing into her dark, breath taking eyes. I finally spoke, "So, um, how's it going?" "Fine, I guess." Suddenly a punk rock song came on. "I love this song." we both said at the same time. I pulled out a chair from a table and held my hand out, gesturing her to sit down. She took a seat. "Thx Duncan." she thanked me. "Don't sweat it." I responded. We started to talk a little. She made me laugh, I made her laugh. The way she was able to get me from goo-goo eyed over Courtney, from in a calm, friendly mood just got me going. I loved, oh, I mean liked that about her. She suddenly became curious. "Hey, how come I've never saw you around the nation of Capulets?" she asked me. B-U-S-T-E-D! "Um, I......just joined the union." I lied. She whispered to me, "It's cool, I know you're a Montague. But, if my father ever sees you near me, or even in this room, he will kill you. I think you should go." A slow song came on. I stood up. "Wanna dance?" I questioned her. "Duncan, you'll get caught." she warned me. "Awww, you care about me." I teased her. She chuckled and stood up. I held both hands on her waist as she hung both hands over my shoulders. We began dancing. It felt nice to have someone that I trusted, even if I haven't known her for a long time. I don't know why, but every time I get close to Gwen, I never want to go away. She's like my ray of sunshine, and I can't believe I'm saying this, but the love of my life. I was lost in a trance. We were still dancing. I felt a tap on my shoulder. It was Gwen. "Duncan, my dad's coming this way." she informed me. I broke away from our tight grip. I gave Gwen a kiss on the cheek and left, but before I could, I just had to see her again. I turned around and looked in her direction as she was waving. I winked at her and headed off.
Gwen's P.O.V
Wow, that was the best night of my life. I met this really cute guy and I think he might like me. He was just so perfect. He really understood me, it seems like he wasn't the royal stuck up type either. He seemed to like dark colors, punk rock music, and Eeeeeee! Alright, I just sounded like a little girl, but I think I'm in love. My dad took me home. We talked about the Trent proposal, but I wasn't interested. When we got home, I flopped myself on my bed. I couldn't stop thinking about Duncan. He is just soooooo sweet! I stepped out on my balcony for fresh air. Now, I was talking to no one. "Ugh, o.k, I love Duncan. He's the sweetest guy in the world. He's funny, cute, smart and he's interested in all of the things that I am into. At the dance, It just felt so magical, like we had a special connection that no one else in the universe did!" I confessed. I sighed and rested my head on the palm of my right hand. I heard rustling in the bushes.
Duncan's P.O.V
I'm going crazy about Gwen. I'm going to go see her again. I sneaked my way to the castle of Capulets. I climbed up the closest balcony. Just when I was about to slip and fall, I felt a hand grab me. The hand pulled me up from possible death. It was Gwen. I pulled her into a hug. She hugged me back. After 10 seconds, Gwen pulled away. "Duncan, what the hell are you doing here?" Gwen said while she slapped my arm. "Alright, first of all, oww! And second, I came to see you." I tried to charm her. Gwen blushed. "Well, um, you're going to get caught." she tried to persuade me. "I don't care. Gwen, ever since the dance, I couldn't stop thinking about you. That dance, it was magical. It felt like we had a special connection that neither one of us could deny." I explained. "Oh, Duncan, I-" she paused and looked backwards. "My dad is calling me." she rushed me. Gwen gave me a quick kiss on the lips. "Listen Duncan, I really like you too, b-but-" she hesitated. I could hear her father's footsteps coming closer. "We'll talk some other time." she said as she shoved me down the balcony. I blew her a kiss and I sped off.
Gwen's P.O.V
He likes me? He likes me! And I can't believe we kissed and he was totally cool about it. I acted cool about it too, but I totally wanted to go, "Eeeeeee!", inside. My father came out on the balcony. "What was that?" he asked me. "Um, nothing, I was just going to bed." I hesitated and headed inside. "Gwen, Trent and the whole family are going to meet and discuss your marriage." he instructed me. "I didn't even agree to this marriage, why are we already so deep into it?" I quizzed him. "Because Gwen, you will marry Trent. He is a promising man. Rich, handsome, what more could you ever want?" he asked me. "Oh, I don't know, maybe someone who's more my style. Someone who understands me." I blurted out. He shot daggers at me. "Good night Gwen." he muttered and then closed the door.
Duncan's P.O.V
Wow, that was the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. When I saw her, it seemed like I've known her forever. Back to Courtney, I finally found her sitting down at a table. "Hey babe." I greeted Courtney. She gave me a nasty look. "What do you want, Duncan?" Courtney carelessly asked me. "I wanted to know if you wanted to do something on Saturday." I calmly stated. She rolled her eyes at me. "Go jump off of a cliff. For you are a Montague, a neanderthal. Go pester some other girl." she ordered me. I smirked at her. "C'mon babe. I'll tell you how beautiful you are." I complimented her. Courtney flipped her hair back. "Well, I am one heck of a sight, but I do not love you. I may not love a dirty Montague, nothing but no good thugs." she insulted me. This was not a shock for me. It was regular for Courtney to put me in shame, but I know she wants me. She just doesn't realize it yet. I walked away. Before I left the Capulet party, I had to talk to that gorgeous girl again. When I noticed that she and her so called 'date' I think were done dancing, I walked up to her. She smiled at me. I smiled back. I wasn't sure what to say. She held out her hand and said, "Gwen." I took her hand, shook it, and said, "Duncan." When we touched hands, it felt like electricity. We were staring at each other again. I was gazing into her dark, breath taking eyes. I finally spoke, "So, um, how's it going?" "Fine, I guess." Suddenly a punk rock song came on. "I love this song." we both said at the same time. I pulled out a chair from a table and held my hand out, gesturing her to sit down. She took a seat. "Thx Duncan." she thanked me. "Don't sweat it." I responded. We started to talk a little. She made me laugh, I made her laugh. The way she was able to get me from goo-goo eyed over Courtney, from in a calm, friendly mood just got me going. I loved, oh, I mean liked that about her. She suddenly became curious. "Hey, how come I've never saw you around the nation of Capulets?" she asked me. B-U-S-T-E-D! "Um, I......just joined the union." I lied. She whispered to me, "It's cool, I know you're a Montague. But, if my father ever sees you near me, or even in this room, he will kill you. I think you should go." A slow song came on. I stood up. "Wanna dance?" I questioned her. "Duncan, you'll get caught." she warned me. "Awww, you care about me." I teased her. She chuckled and stood up. I held both hands on her waist as she hung both hands over my shoulders. We began dancing. It felt nice to have someone that I trusted, even if I haven't known her for a long time. I don't know why, but every time I get close to Gwen, I never want to go away. She's like my ray of sunshine, and I can't believe I'm saying this, but the love of my life. I was lost in a trance. We were still dancing. I felt a tap on my shoulder. It was Gwen. "Duncan, my dad's coming this way." she informed me. I broke away from our tight grip. I gave Gwen a kiss on the cheek and left, but before I could, I just had to see her again. I turned around and looked in her direction as she was waving. I winked at her and headed off.
Gwen's P.O.V
Wow, that was the best night of my life. I met this really cute guy and I think he might like me. He was just so perfect. He really understood me, it seems like he wasn't the royal stuck up type either. He seemed to like dark colors, punk rock music, and Eeeeeee! Alright, I just sounded like a little girl, but I think I'm in love. My dad took me home. We talked about the Trent proposal, but I wasn't interested. When we got home, I flopped myself on my bed. I couldn't stop thinking about Duncan. He is just soooooo sweet! I stepped out on my balcony for fresh air. Now, I was talking to no one. "Ugh, o.k, I love Duncan. He's the sweetest guy in the world. He's funny, cute, smart and he's interested in all of the things that I am into. At the dance, It just felt so magical, like we had a special connection that no one else in the universe did!" I confessed. I sighed and rested my head on the palm of my right hand. I heard rustling in the bushes.
Duncan's P.O.V
I'm going crazy about Gwen. I'm going to go see her again. I sneaked my way to the castle of Capulets. I climbed up the closest balcony. Just when I was about to slip and fall, I felt a hand grab me. The hand pulled me up from possible death. It was Gwen. I pulled her into a hug. She hugged me back. After 10 seconds, Gwen pulled away. "Duncan, what the hell are you doing here?" Gwen said while she slapped my arm. "Alright, first of all, oww! And second, I came to see you." I tried to charm her. Gwen blushed. "Well, um, you're going to get caught." she tried to persuade me. "I don't care. Gwen, ever since the dance, I couldn't stop thinking about you. That dance, it was magical. It felt like we had a special connection that neither one of us could deny." I explained. "Oh, Duncan, I-" she paused and looked backwards. "My dad is calling me." she rushed me. Gwen gave me a quick kiss on the lips. "Listen Duncan, I really like you too, b-but-" she hesitated. I could hear her father's footsteps coming closer. "We'll talk some other time." she said as she shoved me down the balcony. I blew her a kiss and I sped off.
Gwen's P.O.V
He likes me? He likes me! And I can't believe we kissed and he was totally cool about it. I acted cool about it too, but I totally wanted to go, "Eeeeeee!", inside. My father came out on the balcony. "What was that?" he asked me. "Um, nothing, I was just going to bed." I hesitated and headed inside. "Gwen, Trent and the whole family are going to meet and discuss your marriage." he instructed me. "I didn't even agree to this marriage, why are we already so deep into it?" I quizzed him. "Because Gwen, you will marry Trent. He is a promising man. Rich, handsome, what more could you ever want?" he asked me. "Oh, I don't know, maybe someone who's more my style. Someone who understands me." I blurted out. He shot daggers at me. "Good night Gwen." he muttered and then closed the door.
okay,i wrote this,like 2 moths ago,so heres the last part
courtney:WHATS YOUR PROBLEM????
gwen:we..kissed!
duncan:omg,um,ok,soooo,wanna go out?
gwen:okay
trent*from afermath room* CURSE YOU DUNNCAN!
G&D:*making out*
courtney:AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!
chris:well,that raps up another TDA!
note:i rite things,then finish moths later. find them in article page.
BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
courtney:WHATS YOUR PROBLEM????
gwen:we..kissed!
duncan:omg,um,ok,soooo,wanna go out?
gwen:okay
trent*from afermath room* CURSE YOU DUNNCAN!
G&D:*making out*
courtney:AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!
chris:well,that raps up another TDA!
note:i rite things,then finish moths later. find them in article page.
BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
After TDAS Gwen won the million and she changed her dream to get more money for her and Courtney.Her new career was a singer.Her fans love her.But she has an unknown #1 fan.
Gwen's P.O.V
As we drove to my next performance Courtney asked me "Gwen do you know who your number 1 fan is?" I replied with a "no"
She replied to me "Well I do." When I asked who she said Trent's Band and that Duncan had joined the band.We would all be competing in x Factor.I was gonna sing a song from my new album "You don't know me" which was the song I gonna was singing.I got a little sad about competing against Duncan I do still have feelings for him.But it's so weird since Courtney is my best friend and Duncan was her ex too.
To be continued
Gwen's P.O.V
As we drove to my next performance Courtney asked me "Gwen do you know who your number 1 fan is?" I replied with a "no"
She replied to me "Well I do." When I asked who she said Trent's Band and that Duncan had joined the band.We would all be competing in x Factor.I was gonna sing a song from my new album "You don't know me" which was the song I gonna was singing.I got a little sad about competing against Duncan I do still have feelings for him.But it's so weird since Courtney is my best friend and Duncan was her ex too.
To be continued
at lunch
Duncan: I can't do it i don't want to hurt her
D.J.: t's better to tell her now Duncan
Duncan: I can't!
Geoff: she is going to find out sooner or later
Duncan: I just need some time
Geoff: ok , ok
D.j.: she is going to find out eventually
Geoff: true, Duncan when did your dad say you have to go to military school?
Duncan: he will tell me after school
Geoff: ok, but what if he changed his mind
Duncan: has anyone here meet my dad
D.J.:dude chill out
Duncan: ok D.J. how would you feel if it was your girlfriend
D.J.: i don't hae a girlfriend
Duncan: well i'm worried
Geoff: it's going to be ok Duncan just clam down and you can tell Gwen later
Duncan: ok fine
with Gwen and Duncan
Duncan: hey babe
Gwen: hey Duncan
Duncan: Gwen i have to tell you something
Gwen: what is t Dunky
Duncan: i
[to be continued] (not i know i pelled that wrong)
sorry its short and agaiin sorry if some words were spelled wrong and what happenes next
Duncan: I can't do it i don't want to hurt her
D.J.: t's better to tell her now Duncan
Duncan: I can't!
Geoff: she is going to find out sooner or later
Duncan: I just need some time
Geoff: ok , ok
D.j.: she is going to find out eventually
Geoff: true, Duncan when did your dad say you have to go to military school?
Duncan: he will tell me after school
Geoff: ok, but what if he changed his mind
Duncan: has anyone here meet my dad
D.J.:dude chill out
Duncan: ok D.J. how would you feel if it was your girlfriend
D.J.: i don't hae a girlfriend
Duncan: well i'm worried
Geoff: it's going to be ok Duncan just clam down and you can tell Gwen later
Duncan: ok fine
with Gwen and Duncan
Duncan: hey babe
Gwen: hey Duncan
Duncan: Gwen i have to tell you something
Gwen: what is t Dunky
Duncan: i
[to be continued] (not i know i pelled that wrong)
sorry its short and agaiin sorry if some words were spelled wrong and what happenes next